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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that you like my review!!!
Then Honey listen my advice?! It's good...for you ;) !!! You deserve amply this!
Devin was not injured seriously, I'm glad! He becomes more and more adult. He take time to listen what the other have to say, especially Jayden, before panic or judge. It good, otherwise Jayden and him could not finish together...
Chris's really a good friend (or a mommy now?!) to Devin, really protective.
I have more respect for Sarah in this chapter. She reacts calmly (ok calm for Sarah loll) and mature. And the fact that she obliged to remain in a wold where there are only beautiful men.....miammm!!! but...she want a husband and a familly (pretty normal)...can she have this with a man in Aurora? Can a woman be a mate to a man in this world?
Jayden didn't understand what Devin say to him the first time. When he finally undersand he's reaction's too cute.
Poor doctor, nobody listen what he say.
I'm glad that you explain the age of change , make somme thing more understandable. And the "Daddy going to explain the mysteries of life"!!! It reminds me of my father during my adolescence lollll!! He was sooooo red!!
I can understand why Devin doesn't want children. He never really have freedom , placed in fosterhome, after this obliged to work so he can study, next he work in two hard jod. And a child it's a 24/7 job for the 18 next years.
And childbirth? How they do this???
The end of the chappy just too sweet, they really make progress.
Gwen
Then Honey listen my advice?! It's good...for you ;) !!! You deserve amply this!
Devin was not injured seriously, I'm glad! He becomes more and more adult. He take time to listen what the other have to say, especially Jayden, before panic or judge. It good, otherwise Jayden and him could not finish together...
Chris's really a good friend (or a mommy now?!) to Devin, really protective.
I have more respect for Sarah in this chapter. She reacts calmly (ok calm for Sarah loll) and mature. And the fact that she obliged to remain in a wold where there are only beautiful men.....miammm!!! but...she want a husband and a familly (pretty normal)...can she have this with a man in Aurora? Can a woman be a mate to a man in this world?
Jayden didn't understand what Devin say to him the first time. When he finally undersand he's reaction's too cute.
Poor doctor, nobody listen what he say.
I'm glad that you explain the age of change , make somme thing more understandable. And the "Daddy going to explain the mysteries of life"!!! It reminds me of my father during my adolescence lollll!! He was sooooo red!!
I can understand why Devin doesn't want children. He never really have freedom , placed in fosterhome, after this obliged to work so he can study, next he work in two hard jod. And a child it's a 24/7 job for the 18 next years.
And childbirth? How they do this???
The end of the chappy just too sweet, they really make progress.
Gwen
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, I've been your secret stalker since chapter 4 :) silent devoted reader here
You know what? I want another update. Preferably tomorrow, BUT as I know the difficulties in writing that wish might not come true (update soonish, okay?)
You know what? I want another update. Preferably tomorrow, BUT as I know the difficulties in writing that wish might not come true (update soonish, okay?)
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoops, slight malfunction there lol. Well. It gets better!! That Ashcroft is one evil little man, cant wait for Adam (swoon) to get his hands on him again!! Grrr Jayden and Devin need to quit arguing about who's to blame and GET IT ON! Lol. All in all another brilliant chapter. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Vic xxx
Vic xxx
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It gets better with each chapter. I love how Jayden and Devin are becoming so close and hopefully soon realize how much the other is really in love *crosses fingers.* Thanks for updating, I really enjoy the story.
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You take your time!!! Where were you?!
I was like: ho no she's not going to update, she's going to dropped the story, I never going to read J/D having sex and be happy!!! How I was going to survive without my fix?!?! Never to this again, never!!! Pleeeeeaaase!
I found funny the fact that everyone blamed themselves personnaly for the situation. Ho, it's my fault...no it's mine. It's cute! lol!
Wow, a lot of action in the first half of this chapter. I'm sure it was not easy to write this.
Jayden knows how to lead. Go my King! I was affraid that when Devin was in danger you where doing nothing. I'm not going to doubt you again! And now realise you love him, soooo cute (pesterme2, I found that this time it's much more credible)!!! I like what he say about respect Devin if he just want to be friend! ....but nobody want this nah! We want hot-monkey-sex!
Devin seems really powerful.....But you're really sadistic (do we have to fear for your husband?loll!), you enjoy to much torture the sweet Devin.
Adam you better never let Ashcroft near Chris. Protect him.
And you let him escape, HOW CAN YOU?!?!?! sadist...ho I already say this!!
The other half's make me hooooing! and haaaaaing! They make a lot of progress. Trust's the first step to love. I'm happy with Devin, good boy!!! You're not going to make Jayden to take a lover?! I know you're evil (but we love you!!!) but not this much...hum?
Gwen
Tell your hubby to read this:
Hy hubby, tell pesterme2 : I knew, love, that you were a good writer even before someone else told you this. I always had faith in you.... and do you want a good massage tonight?
It should do wonders on your sex life!!!!
(now I'm red loll)
I was like: ho no she's not going to update, she's going to dropped the story, I never going to read J/D having sex and be happy!!! How I was going to survive without my fix?!?! Never to this again, never!!! Pleeeeeaaase!
I found funny the fact that everyone blamed themselves personnaly for the situation. Ho, it's my fault...no it's mine. It's cute! lol!
Wow, a lot of action in the first half of this chapter. I'm sure it was not easy to write this.
Jayden knows how to lead. Go my King! I was affraid that when Devin was in danger you where doing nothing. I'm not going to doubt you again! And now realise you love him, soooo cute (pesterme2, I found that this time it's much more credible)!!! I like what he say about respect Devin if he just want to be friend! ....but nobody want this nah! We want hot-monkey-sex!
Devin seems really powerful.....But you're really sadistic (do we have to fear for your husband?loll!), you enjoy to much torture the sweet Devin.
Adam you better never let Ashcroft near Chris. Protect him.
And you let him escape, HOW CAN YOU?!?!?! sadist...ho I already say this!!
The other half's make me hooooing! and haaaaaing! They make a lot of progress. Trust's the first step to love. I'm happy with Devin, good boy!!! You're not going to make Jayden to take a lover?! I know you're evil (but we love you!!!) but not this much...hum?
Gwen
Tell your hubby to read this:
Hy hubby, tell pesterme2 : I knew, love, that you were a good writer even before someone else told you this. I always had faith in you.... and do you want a good massage tonight?
It should do wonders on your sex life!!!!
(now I'm red loll)
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally caught up with your recent post
this is a good story... at first I thought it was written a abit rushed.. things should be more explained.. and generaly when a story is like that i just stop reading.. but your story captivated me still. the short writing of the story keeps me wanting more and lets my mind run wild with coulds-woulds-and maybes.
Janice i a bitch through and through. and a pompous one which makes her more aggrivating.
I want to see the yummy smut that will come with jayden and devin... although I think the plot would have been more complicated if devin has been raped..
then jayden could have been able to "wash away" all the places devin was raped and leave behind good memoires of him.. or one such story line.
Chris makes me laugh although the way you have portrayed him makes me think he is bi-polar...
good writing can't wait until the next update.
this is a good story... at first I thought it was written a abit rushed.. things should be more explained.. and generaly when a story is like that i just stop reading.. but your story captivated me still. the short writing of the story keeps me wanting more and lets my mind run wild with coulds-woulds-and maybes.
Janice i a bitch through and through. and a pompous one which makes her more aggrivating.
I want to see the yummy smut that will come with jayden and devin... although I think the plot would have been more complicated if devin has been raped..
then jayden could have been able to "wash away" all the places devin was raped and leave behind good memoires of him.. or one such story line.
Chris makes me laugh although the way you have portrayed him makes me think he is bi-polar...
good writing can't wait until the next update.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hella effin good story I seriously can't wait for the next installment please update as soon as you can
Betrayed
Betrayed
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I am absolutely loving this story. The plot is brilliant and the characters are perfect (am a bit smitten with Adam myself lol) Cant wait for more chapters and to see where the story goes!!!!
Vic xxxx
Vic xxxx
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay that was such a fun chapter! How exciting, I wish it had continued on though. I can't wait to see the King's reaction to this.