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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I really call her Alice? Weeeeird. I'm sorry! ^_^
QUESTION! Is Chris pregnant? Considering the mood swings he's having and the fact that he and Adam are like rabbits.... =D -insert giggling here-
I hope maybe that kiss woke something up in Devin. I'm going to cry if Jayden ends up taking somebody else to try and protect Devin. I do NOT want that to happen. At. All. I'm hoping that little kiss makes Devin want to go back for more. Jayden is so protective of him. I'm curious. When it comes to that point, will Jayden be asking Devin if he's sure CONSTANTLY, or will he jump at the opportunity, only checking briefly to make sure that Devin is sure about it? I can see both happening, but I DEFINITELY see Jayden making sure at least once that Devin is positive about it.
Gah. Those two need to hurry up.
QUESTION! Is Chris pregnant? Considering the mood swings he's having and the fact that he and Adam are like rabbits.... =D -insert giggling here-
I hope maybe that kiss woke something up in Devin. I'm going to cry if Jayden ends up taking somebody else to try and protect Devin. I do NOT want that to happen. At. All. I'm hoping that little kiss makes Devin want to go back for more. Jayden is so protective of him. I'm curious. When it comes to that point, will Jayden be asking Devin if he's sure CONSTANTLY, or will he jump at the opportunity, only checking briefly to make sure that Devin is sure about it? I can see both happening, but I DEFINITELY see Jayden making sure at least once that Devin is positive about it.
Gah. Those two need to hurry up.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Jayden...you better not cheat on your husband! I can see Devin just having another magical fit when he learns of that!
Keep up the great work!!!
Keep up the great work!!!
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I missed like, three chapters or something! I had to have my computer taken in and worked on some, cause it was being lame, but now it’s all good. I can go back to my many fiction addictions. Awww, pwshpftt (^w^) You’re very, very welcome! I love this story, and you deserve tons of readers cause it’s so awesome; so since I love it so much, I wanted more people to read it too.
Homygosh! The bad guy got away! Dx Awww, Devin snuggling up to Jayden is so cute! jnfgewkjnfekjfn they are too cute for words. I’m so glad Sarah is accepting of what’s going on and that things are working out good. I dislike how the bond is so pressing for ‘consummation.’ Can’t Devin’s needs be his own and not caused by something else? And poor Jayden, getting all touchy and worked up cause of it, and him not being able to help it.
This is all so good! I can’t get out in words how much I love and adore it, and you. So, keep on giving us more!
Homygosh! The bad guy got away! Dx Awww, Devin snuggling up to Jayden is so cute! jnfgewkjnfekjfn they are too cute for words. I’m so glad Sarah is accepting of what’s going on and that things are working out good. I dislike how the bond is so pressing for ‘consummation.’ Can’t Devin’s needs be his own and not caused by something else? And poor Jayden, getting all touchy and worked up cause of it, and him not being able to help it.
This is all so good! I can’t get out in words how much I love and adore it, and you. So, keep on giving us more!
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story! Devin is my all time favorite character in your story. I find Chris to be a little iritating, but maybe its because he is so young. I just hope that if Jayden does sleep with someone else, it doesn't hurt Devin too bad . It would be even worse If Devin catches Jayden in a compromising situation. I just really hope this doesn't turn into a love triangle situation with jayden , Devin , and a consort ( a pregnant consort). Overall your story gots me hooked!
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pesterme2, thanks for the wonderful story, sticking with it, and the quick updates!
Another well written chapter but slightly disappointed at the 180 direction change that is occurring with Devin/Jayden. Devin up to this point has been stubborn and outspoken (rightly so) but he has never been an uncaring a$$hole. Jayden has been suffering the most from the unconsummated bond but generally, he's kept things in check and kept a generally friendly attitude (in previous chapters). I realize the bond is what's causing the changes and that was your intent with this chapter-- both of them are affected. Just in the last few chapters, there was some bridge building/fence mending happening between the characters but I felt this latest update has ripped that apart and put several friendships/relationships in jepoardy. I suppose I hoped that D&J's relationship would mature over the next several chapters and the resumption of mage training would occur with the bonding effects reaching a crescendo where Dev could no longer deny consummating the bond (with plenty of romantic fluffiness thrown in).
This isn't a rant and don't let my opinions second guess what you've done or have planned for the rest of the story. Every author puts their characters in up/down moments which drives the readers crazy. =P
Another well written chapter but slightly disappointed at the 180 direction change that is occurring with Devin/Jayden. Devin up to this point has been stubborn and outspoken (rightly so) but he has never been an uncaring a$$hole. Jayden has been suffering the most from the unconsummated bond but generally, he's kept things in check and kept a generally friendly attitude (in previous chapters). I realize the bond is what's causing the changes and that was your intent with this chapter-- both of them are affected. Just in the last few chapters, there was some bridge building/fence mending happening between the characters but I felt this latest update has ripped that apart and put several friendships/relationships in jepoardy. I suppose I hoped that D&J's relationship would mature over the next several chapters and the resumption of mage training would occur with the bonding effects reaching a crescendo where Dev could no longer deny consummating the bond (with plenty of romantic fluffiness thrown in).
This isn't a rant and don't let my opinions second guess what you've done or have planned for the rest of the story. Every author puts their characters in up/down moments which drives the readers crazy. =P
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. that Devin turned off his sex drive from his experiences in foster care is not surprising - what is surprising is that Jayden, Chris Adam and Sarah havent figured it out- innocent yes but maybe just maybe scared to acknowledge his attraction/lust/love
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I repeat here what I say on my rewiew for *Flaming*, I drank two glass of scotch before readind the new chappy!!!Everything's much more fun now loll!!
Glad that Sarah can found someone here. With his personnality I think that someone serious and stubborn would be good for her.
Geriatric husband!!! O. M. G.! How do you do to think about this? It's my new pet name for my hubby (he's six years older than me)
Hooo...he doesn't seem to like that loll!
A lot of sexual tension tonight! Want hot-monkey-sex!!! Damien like, trust annd desire Jayden, this is not far from love.
It's possible that you make the wrong name here : “Oh great. They’re not going to start bowing and kissing my hand or something like that are they? Because if they are I think I’ll pass since still haven’t recovered from my introduction to the Genesis Council.” Adam spoke up and startled Devin a little bit.
It's not supposed to be : Chris spoke up and startled Devin a little bit. ??? Seens Adam's from Aurora,the council must already know him, and the sentence sounds like Chris talking. Maybe it's me that don't understand, if that sorry!!!
Does Chris is stuck on Adam lap, it seems he always there. His butt don't like the Aurora's chair?!
Cake analogy for sex?! no comment.......mouhaha!!
The ugly-devil-bitch's death, yessssssss!!!!
With the rapid fleeing of Jayden, I am sure that Devin will understand anything and asked himself if he has not done something wrong.
Lot of sexual tension! ho already say that..... but hey they really have a lot of sexu... ok ok I stop!!
Gwen
Glad that Sarah can found someone here. With his personnality I think that someone serious and stubborn would be good for her.
Geriatric husband!!! O. M. G.! How do you do to think about this? It's my new pet name for my hubby (he's six years older than me)
Hooo...he doesn't seem to like that loll!
A lot of sexual tension tonight! Want hot-monkey-sex!!! Damien like, trust annd desire Jayden, this is not far from love.
It's possible that you make the wrong name here : “Oh great. They’re not going to start bowing and kissing my hand or something like that are they? Because if they are I think I’ll pass since still haven’t recovered from my introduction to the Genesis Council.” Adam spoke up and startled Devin a little bit.
It's not supposed to be : Chris spoke up and startled Devin a little bit. ??? Seens Adam's from Aurora,the council must already know him, and the sentence sounds like Chris talking. Maybe it's me that don't understand, if that sorry!!!
Does Chris is stuck on Adam lap, it seems he always there. His butt don't like the Aurora's chair?!
Cake analogy for sex?! no comment.......mouhaha!!
The ugly-devil-bitch's death, yessssssss!!!!
With the rapid fleeing of Jayden, I am sure that Devin will understand anything and asked himself if he has not done something wrong.
Lot of sexual tension! ho already say that..... but hey they really have a lot of sexu... ok ok I stop!!
Gwen
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Adams age doesnt bother me lol, if chris is too freaked out by it send Adam my way, ill look after him ;P xx
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep goimg! Don't stop! I'm so much enjoying reading your story that I don't want to stop. XD I read the chapters and no matter how long they are I alway find myself thinking. "Too bad, nothing more to read" or similar things. XD I'll be waiting for more!
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fluff is good! I have enjoyed the last few chapters and hoping you aren't planning on wrapping it up too soon!