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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr What are u doing to us!! As if they both dont have enough guilt to keep em apart. Now D is gonna convince himself that J wants the little nympho!! J and D need to stop thinking and start doing ( each other preferably) Poor Chris, Is his emotional state something to do with his er, ahem, pregnant state mm mmm?? Im prob way off but u never know, well, u prob do kno but there u go lol. Ok enough rambling, thanks for a frustrating chapter lol, update soon xxxxxxxxxxx

Lol! Well yeah, my pc was freaking out on me, so I had to fix it! But this, THIS was awesome! Obvioulsy Devin is hurt...I wonder, will he avoid Jayden like the plague, or will he throw that Consort belt at him, and say for him to give it to his new lover? Lol, great work!!!

Now I'm really not happy with you!!!
How could you?!?!
Bad, bad, bad girl!!!
I knew you where evil, but, but.....
I hate you!!!!

.........go running away crying...........


Ok I'm back now.
Sorry I don't hate you.....not really :P
You better make it better next chappy!!!
Or I going to boycott your story....and you don't want that, no, no!!! loll!!!
My poor Devin, I kiss you and gives you a caress.

Chris's pregnant, I didn't mention it in my last review (scotch fault), I'm sure and it seems that I'm not the only one to think this.
Consellor Thomas lost his consort and his child....Who the baby going to be? The consort?! The child?!

My husband just say to me that he already know with my reaction that I didn't like the chappy...soooo....no hot sex tonight for him lolll

A very good chapter IMO and loved how it closed! You explained some of the thoughts happening during last chapter, we are now getting an inkling of what's going on with Chris, we have intrigue and danger in the palace, and D has finally gotten a wake-up call. I'm already trying to guess how D is going to handle this...

GAH!I am going to CRY! -insert hysterical crying here-
I SO didn't want that to happen.... BAD author! Bad!
And it is now the only part of the chapter that I can actually concentrate on right now....
Just for that, I am NOT going to tell you what's in the boxy box box, which I'm naming Boxy, by the way. -pouts in the corner-

this chapter ownes my character on WoW. That pretty much says how much I love your story :D keep the chapters coming! I check for updates three times a day because my life is so retarded xD I need to find more hobbies...

Amazing as usual (16 & 17). The tension just keeps building. Will Jayden really take a lover to relieve his tensions? I can only think that Devin would be devastated since he is much more attached to Jayden then he lets on. Can't wait for the next chapter.

yeah you wrote more...while i don't comment much i am always happy to see and new chapter keep it going!

Hey, im already reading ur other story ( i been reviewing as Vic) Damn these men need to get it on, poor Jayden really needs some Devin lovin!! Grrrr Sarah turning up at the wrong time!!!!! Great chapter, update soon xx
Vic xx

Really nice chapter :3