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Hooooo....h.....he......hum..... I can't comment, my brain's grilled and my keyboard has too much slime on top, it has short-circuit. You have to buy me a new brain and a new keyboard.....lollll

It's was PERFECT! Really!
Hot, nice, sweet, smoot, gentle, smutty, full of tenderness, love, listening, understanding, acceptance. Perfect.


Devin's reaction was not what I expect, but sooo much better. Life's about risk and Devin took the best that he could take. He admit that he love Jayden (here the first time I write Scott lolll).

I'm sure that the next chappy was going to be an evil because.....well...it's your nature loll

I want to know if I am right about the pregnancy of Chris (and the reincarnation of the soul mate or child of Conselor Thomas)

Gwen

WOW! This chapter was amazing. I am simply speechless. But, thank you so much for writing this. Love it. Ughh... I really can't over this!

Thud... Devin feeling loved for the first time in his life - I'd say you captured the emotion and sensations very very well- fans self.

Awesome work! I honetly didn't expect Devin to react the way he did. I saw him running away and pretty much hiding while Jayden dealt with Zachary and then tried to make amends. Devin would then act like nothing was wrong, but would be dying on the inside.

But you did a superb job!

Chapter 19 is excellent. The seduction scene was beautiful. I wish Devin had dragged Zachary off Jayden before they went too far because that adultery scene steals some of the happiness of beautiful lovemaking that we have been waiting for between Jayden and Devin. Perhaps the threat of Zachary would be just as effective as the sight of Jayden having a mind blowing orgasm with someone else. I enjoyed it but I feel like Devin should have kicked Zachary's ass. I kind of wish Chris had been around to kick Zachary's ass. Aren't I bloodthirsty?

Okay, I love you again.
FINALLY! took them FOREVER but I'm happy now. =D Like, ridiculously happy.
I was SO right! I KNEW that Jayden would be all "are you sure" a bazillion times. I KNEW it! (Probably because Vince will be the same way with Julian, but that's not the point)
As your reward (because I truly CAN'T express how absolutely ECSTATIC I am right now) Inside Boxy is.... play things. Lots and lots of play things. That would require a safe-word. Something that Asher at first is very concerned about considering Ry's past, but Ry quickly shuts that worry down and tells Ash (in much nicer phrasing) to get over it.

nice. roll out the big log. devin ride it home!

Oh my gosh. My heart broke at the end. Will Zachary stay and create on going love triangle? Will Devin now completely shy away from Jayden because of a broken heart or will he now fight for Jayden. I felt bad for Jayden too... He really didn't mean it and the last thin he wanted to do was hurt Devin and now look at all of the trouble he's in. Plus, Devin was trying to search for him. So, much miscommunication and uncertainty, they really need to sort it out. Oh and that Zachary is something else. Great Chapter very climatic. Can't wait for the next.

Yeah, I’m very glad to have my computer back *clings to it* Aww, poor confused and hurt Devin. And poor Jayden too! The bond must be driving him nuts. Zach is a little shit for pressing matters, knowing that Jayden was all built up from the unconsummated-ness. Pwsh, no death threats from me, I still love it all; amazing. Everything can’t be sunshine and rainbows all the time, and when it isn‘t, you make it so darn interesting to read; which is good. But I can’t wait until they do work it out, as you said, it’s sure to be delicious!

Oh, that was so painfully sad. I saw it coming, but still. The worst part is that D probably thinks he doesn't deserve any better. How will he be able to trust anyone now? I must know how this turns out!

I must ask, is Chris pregnant? He sure acts as if he is. Will D get a brother, I ask myself.