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I love you!! I have been having such a bad day and this chapter really cheered me up. Sarah, Devin and Chris were behaving like kids lol. i could just imagine Jayden and Adam being the parents and rolling their eyes at the 'kids' antics lol. Thank you. I really wish you could send me an Adam clone too, i think you prob deserve to keep the original him being your creation and all. Oooh and i loved the quick update too.
As for your thanks on us keeping coming back i have to say thanks to you for making it so difficult for us to not come back. You are amazingly talented and your stories are just brilliant.
Oh and i just want to say that if Adam is getting a little down with all teh 'geriatric' comments i can find a few ways to cheer him up. Just wanted you to kno that.
Well enough of my rambling, update soon plz
Vic xxx

For the kiss Devin give,I going to pass (snif!)...I have a really nasty cold and you don't want Devin ill,no no!!
Hooo... pregnancy's much more complicate that I was thinking. And with the reincarnation thing....
To be a good dad Chris must learn to be less egocentric and more thoughtful, composed. Can He?? lol For the training, I think it's a good idea because it's supposed to help you with emotion and, I don't know for you (if you have child or not) but when I was pregnant my emotion play yo-yo all the time (my poor hubby, he was a saint)
What with the infernal threesome?! I never going shopping with this three. An hour and I want to kill them all. lolll!!! But I'm happy that they can have some bonding time.
Devin and Jayden have simillar power!? Don't get angry these two!!! Omega doesn't have a chance yep!
Jonas's not just a little puppy? He have some bone you seems to say... Good for Sarah.
Gwen

I think I was extra giddy at the first part xD I've fallen in love recently, and I'm pretty shy xD I would have hidden deep below the sheets actually x)
I thought "ah, Cris is pregnant" when his part of the story came xD and see, I was right, wasn't I?
You had an opossum in your house? :o wow... the only wild animals that has gotten into my house is a mouse (scared the shit out of my cat xD he has mouse-phobia now) and a crow xD wait, we got a seagull once too :D
Update soon-ish once again? :)

Hihi don't worry about me getting pissed off at waiting for an update. I'm pretty patient. You kind of have to be if you're waiting for an update from just dreaming. Her story, Independence, is really good but unfortunately updates take over a month and so far I've been waiting for over six weeks for the next installment. The update are fortunately very worth the wait so I advise you to read it :) anyways love your story especially the part where Adam walks in on Jayden and Devin. I'll be waiting for the next update, betrayed :)

Liked it? Of course he liked it, whats not to like. They cant seem to keep their hands to themselves now they've started lol. And as for Adam being naughty, thats why i like him hehe. If Chris does cut him off though im sure i could keep him occupied until Chris changes his mind (no rush).
Im thinking maybe Adam was being a touch dim in this last chapter, i mean he has been pregnant himself so it should have been obvious to him that Chris was pregnant. Of course, dim or not i still love him and his super sperm!!
Another brilliant chapter, was getting worried, thought you had forgotten about us. Update soon, please dont keep me waiting that long again, nearly went insane xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ok because im about as dim as Adam has been i had to look up an Opossum, i had heard of Possums but not Opossum. I think its because im from the UK and we dont have em i dont think lol. Well i know what they are now and hope you dont have any more trouble with it. Feel free to laugh and call me names lol.
Vic xxxxxx

You've done excellent so far and don't listen to what anyone else tells you!!!! I love it and i don't think I can get enough, Devin's reactions are sooo cute.

Yay! They all know now! You were teasing us with that for a while. ;) So, Devin is going to have a brother. Will he be jealous? I mean, he just met his dad and things had started to settle down a bit so it was going to be, like, his time to get to know him, you know? And now there's a new kid on the block, and his dad will of course be delighted; will he feel left out, abandoned? Anywho, nice chapter overall. Lots of drama, which I like! :)

*does victory dance* I SO knew it! HA! I win. I KNEW he was pregnant! *giggles*

Oh my gosh, the whole thing between Jayden and Devin was just ADORABLE. I mean... cutest thing ever. They are SO sweet. They're like Vince and Julian!!! I swear, that was so sweet that I thought I was going to cry. That was just amazing.

Wait. This kid is going to be Devin's brother/sister (do people from Aurora have daughters? I haven't noticed any women. I might have forgotten that detail if you've mentioned it) so what is Devin going to say when he realizes that? What's the kid going to think about big brother being daddy's best friend? hahahahaha. (although I doubt we'll get THAT far into the story... but ya never know! haha)

I LOVE this story.

By the way.... guess who's back!!! =D

I'm glad that Devin didn't freak out on the morning!!! It's was I was afraid. He didn't disappoint us. Good boy!
This morning was sooo sweet (I was near an attack of diabete loll) and hot. Jayden know how to take care of his love.
Devin admit his love! I could not help but hooooing and haaaaing! My romantic teen-naive-girl in me is satisfied.
The reaction that had Daddy Adam when he saw the evidence that his son is no longer a little boy....lolll!!!
And Chris!! Hum, I'm not sure he take the new about the baby really good. Well, I just have to wait the next chappy.
Gwen
p.s. about the computer... I have really bad luck with them, nothing news nah!