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Glad you liked my input!!! =)

And this was great! I'm so glad to see that Chris finally see the truth; that he is loved and protected by his new family! Awesome work!

Scary? I damn near wet myself i loved it sooo much. Love it wen Adam is all powerful and strong. Ooooh and some Adam/Vicxn um Chris lovin would be good. Ha! That julius finally got wot he deserved, poor Chris. I love that u were thinkin bout me wen u wrote the chapter (it made MY day) And thanks for the hug *right back at ya'* Well keep up the fantastic work and update soon (Adam smex) Love ya.
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Yay everything out in the open, it was so stressing reading that chapter and having to wait for him to speak up, I was worried there for a minute that he was going to lie or hide some things. People will have to start liking Chris when he starts looking pregnant right? I mean everyone seems to love pregnant people and babies there so they should decide to love him pretty soon. On a side note I have decided that your story reminds me of the manga series Gravitation, it's serious most of the time but has it's spurts of random humor and insanity. On a second side note don't feel bad about how often you update, because most of the stories I am reading don't update nearly as often as you do, you do pretty well when it comes to that so thanks.

Heylo!!
hmm, with the conclusion of this chapter I was half through a "SCORE <3" and an "uh dur".

I don't think that Adam should be let off the hook. Okay, so CJ was being a b with an itch, but really his is who he is [ title illuding me right now] for a reason. He should be able to control him self. I also though of him as a solid tank, and now he isent... WHY does everyone have to be 'human' SIGH

Also, loving Sarah soooo much, happy you kept her in there, even if mainly for comic relief right now, estrogen totally pwns.

question: ARE there female aurourians?
question: How many council seats are there and genisis council?
question: IF you would have time, WHAT are those said positions?

aaaaand I think thats it.

loved it, made me happy inside ^_^

I just started reading you story today. I don't normally review in the middle, but I have to make an exception here. I think the author is psychic! As soon as I started to have a question, magically they were answered in the very next chapter I read. This happened several times, so either you are psychic or a really good writer.

Haha, I actually like this speed right now. Don't want to thrust a baby into a war. I have/had tons of the VHS Disney movies, but most of them got lost during moves, have gotten steped on, or ruined in some odd way. It was just a random thought at a random time. This was a good chapter, Chris FINALLY has to tell Adam, and Devin FINALLY understands the training, and I look forward to the next chapter.

Holy shit.
So I've avoided this story, just because usually the mpreg fantasy stories are all the same, and usually not quality. But this is fantastic! I'm so glad I gave in to see what all the hype was about. I'm incredibly excited to see what happens next with your couples. What really fascinates me is that, yes, this is almost the same as a lot of other fantasy tales, and yet you manage to make it to interesting and give us so much to relate to the characters that we can't help but keep clicking to see what happens next. Congrats~! And update soon, I demand it!

Oh you angel, it looks like you are going to help get rid of my frusterations so soon. As long as Chris is up frong and doesn't lie or hold anything back that it...Also kudos to Jonas for being my stand in and doing just what I wanted to do. Poor little Devin, emotional time bomb, can never stay stable for long. I fear what Devin would be like Preggers, he would be sooo much worse than Chris.

SQUEE! I'm glad you liked it. It's true, though. He's such a bastard that he doesn't deserve a name. Gawd, I hate him!!! Sleazy, filthy little snake!

Ah, Devin... Poor Devin. I know he THINKS he's pretty calm, but really, his mind is a whirl-wind. He reminds me of a defiant, rebellious teenager sometimes.

I'm glad that they're all going to talk about what Slime-ball has been doing to Chris. That makes me happy. Can he get the "pit and the pendulum" treatment? =)

I really cant understand why ppl would give it a bad review, im serious. Im not just trying to be nice i just dont see it. The story is original and just genius. The characters are just so realistic (if only Adam was real, sigh) and have so much depth. i have read a few fics on AFF and most dont even come any where near this for talent. Mind u there is one, Flaming in the Dorms i think its called (LOL) is just as wonderful ;P
If i had even a modicum of ur talent i would be rich and famous i think, lol. To all the bad reviewers i just say BLEUGH!!!
Oh and i would like to say to Devin, Of course Adam is a kind, loving and considerate man, ive been trying to tell everyone this from the very beginning.
Ah well, yet another brilliant chapter, cant wait for the next. To tell the truth im actually dreading this fic ending (which im hoping isnt for a vereeee long time!) cos i dont know what ill do wivout my lovely Adam.
God i dont half go on dont i. Well as my son would say 'Love you all the days' Update soon xxxxxxxxxxx