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Well I finally found time to read the last two chapters and boy was that worth it. I loved it although there is so much angst for poor Devin can't be good in his condition at all. I understand his need to finish the training but isn't that kind of hard on him and his body not to mention the baby I mean pregnancy has it's own kind of physical discomforts let alone adding to them. And that bit with finding their son's mate and the so many guys putting their energy over him I agree with Devin that's just creepy that would have sent me into a complete total creepout. And meeting the little mage at the end now that was funny god I laughed so hard I mean someone spent waaaaayyyyy to much time on earth obviously and the ridiculous tatoo please I'd roll my eyes for heavens sake well in real life I usually do for crap like that I mean to ruin perfectly good skin for something like that it's bad enough with scars but to do it on purpose? Anyway the kid sounds adorable but also a little bit of a handful not that Devin couldn't handle it he's made to handle little dorky screwed up kids like that. And I loved the interaction between sweet little Chris and sweet little Kirin now that was to sweet it's a shame that their lives are actually so much alike. It's good that they are both strong inside but when they have to keep proving it that's so sad but interesting. Can't wait for your next update. Thank you for sharing.

I can't wait to see how Devin is going to react to the kid cause he is like the classic rebellious teen.

Something tells me Mason and Devin will get along great :D

I don't have much time to write a longer review, going to Denmark now :D have a nice day

Wow, I love the Mason character. What will Jayden say about that?(snicker) I'm really enjoyinhg this story. Kudos to you, Dearest.

nice! glad that the possible suiter is different... :)

Oh very nice work here, loved it!!!

One of the best i've ever read.....if you ever publish please email me the site cus i really want to buy it. i love this site cus all the amazing writers are here. please keep it going.

Love this story. It's taken me a week since I discovered it to get to Chapter 50 and I can't wait for the next installment. You have done a remarkable job creating this universe and populating it with really interesting characters. Can't decide which one I like best and haven't even met the babies yet. Absolutely looking forward to that event!

I would like to be added to your update list if that's still possible.

NancyK

Yaaaaaaaaaaaay~!!! AC!!!! XD WHOOOOT WHOOOOOOTSS!!!!! *goes crazy*

Such a looooonggg update too! Wow! *glomps* this is fantastic! Great!

okay okay.
This chapter, lori... i face-palm. you and you're oddness...

after such a SERIOUS SCENE. you go throw in a PORN SCENE... that part in particular was very. *chokes* I didn't know to laugh or what! XD

So. This chapter, we see Kiran's PROWESS!!! Lioness Kiran rawrs!!! Kiran's such a strong character. Wow. I'm in total awe with him right now. I'm just thinking that, he's been in Ashcroft's hands much longer than Devin. It's safe to say hat he's suffered so much more. Yet when he's back to normal life, he takes everything in his stride and is sooo sooo, mature, confident, clear-minded, professional about it all. (Well I hope he is. I hope Kiran's not like Devin who had double intentions for every step he took when he first came back).

But I guess, for Kiran. *sighs* When for reincarnations past, he's never gotten to truly be with his mate. His other half. I guess, to fill what ever void that had grown, he throws himself into protecting Aurora....................... Aaaaah... well...
With Devin stealing all the limelight lately, I think not enough is shone on Kiran. But well, he's not the main character so. Can't be helped...
Just so you know, I have a new favourite!!! XD It's Kiran.

Aaaaaaaaannnyyywaaaaay.

A HUGE EXCITING FACTOR HAS BEEN DROPPED INTO THIS STORY!!! 8D

What was all that about Devin's past incarnations! His past life's! I hear, from what I read, he was someone rather great!
Jayden used the words "adoring hordes" that in my opinion, equates to 'fans' as in the fans of superstars.
Devin was a super star, a hero, some savior... oh wow oh wow *eyes sparkle* this is sooo happening!
Yay Lori! You rawks! I thought things were settling down now, but noooo, something get's thrown in again, and the fire roars a blazing inferno!!!
We get a lioness and a dragon in this chapter. =D

and Ouuh! OUH!!! Oooooooouuhh!!!! THANK YOU!!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you ~!!!
FINALLY!!! Chris SPILLED THE BEANS!!! finally FINALLY!!! yesyesyesyesyeeeessYES!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!!!! ^__________________^ ~!!!!!!
I dunno how else to express this. Phew. omg yay. OMG YAY! im not making much coherent sense but this is about as much as how i feel right now~

And I would really like to rant more, but that'd make your ears buzz in annoyance, and I have to rush off too.

So. *salutes* Till I see you later Master Captain Lori~!
I bid thee good luck in your endeavors!


- nekoii

Its Edaj btw I not reviewed for a really long time have I?
Im really enjoying Aurora's Consort but you said your planing to end it soon...You Can't!!

Also I've just realised that you also do 'Flaming in the dorms' how stupid am I??