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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
evil site master, BLAH
Go FISH
lol I wanna make a dirty version of that only becuase of how simple it is, or make a drinking game of it.
who knows :P
I like this chapter, espeically with the ending... yay SMUTT very enjoyable and sexcii smutt that I enjoyed multifold.
HUGS
Go FISH
lol I wanna make a dirty version of that only becuase of how simple it is, or make a drinking game of it.
who knows :P
I like this chapter, espeically with the ending... yay SMUTT very enjoyable and sexcii smutt that I enjoyed multifold.
HUGS
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapter! Great job!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I probably would to if I were Jayden. Hopefully though Devin get a hang of his magical abilities soon, before the baby comes. It would be the most amazing thing to ever happen to me if I had Chris's afinity. Actually both Devin's and Chris's abilities, although reigned in and under control.
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
these strange creatures
with ever changing features
stare blind
threw open windows
upon deamon beings
winged priests
fail in the light
cast from no where
with ever changing features
stare blind
threw open windows
upon deamon beings
winged priests
fail in the light
cast from no where
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My family dragged me away on a vacation... one week, but too long for computer-addicted me. I was happy to find 2 long chapters just waiting for me to read them... and read I did. Brain dead from spell: Sibling's Influence. They took poor ************************* pub and gave me alcohol. They are very stupid, but funny. At least I know not to drink too much. Honestly, my 2 brothers and 2 sisters (all older than me - grr) passed on some of their stupidity to me!
ex-council-stuff (can't remember how to write stuff this late, 02:00) finally put in a cell! I've waited for this moment. Dance of victory! Banishment to Earth after 12 months too! Happy face :D
Hmm... shouldn't Chris get a bit more affected by his pregnancy soon? I'm waiting, because I love when the lifes of characters who I love get tougher... sadistic is the word I think. Oh yeah I can't think atm. Nevermind the last thing then.
Is there a way to sue your sibling for corruption of one's mind?
ex-council-stuff (can't remember how to write stuff this late, 02:00) finally put in a cell! I've waited for this moment. Dance of victory! Banishment to Earth after 12 months too! Happy face :D
Hmm... shouldn't Chris get a bit more affected by his pregnancy soon? I'm waiting, because I love when the lifes of characters who I love get tougher... sadistic is the word I think. Oh yeah I can't think atm. Nevermind the last thing then.
Is there a way to sue your sibling for corruption of one's mind?
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew you want some loving (what woman doesn't want some love?). Glad to read that it's not just me that insert my name sometime at the place of the hero loll.
As you can see, I have a lot of gore idea to torture people, I don't know why but I was always better to write angst story that romantic story.
I didn't find Jayden really a bad guy. For me he was just King Jayden. He had to act rough, he had to think to his mate and his Kingdom. I like it a lot, tough guy it's my thing lolll But is it the end of the C.Julius or are we going to see him afterward??? Hum...only the autor know........poke autor lolll
So your can't cook lovely little meal to your hubby??? Ho well, I'm sure you better at other thing :) In my case, I'm chef loll But I suck at housework, I can't do the laundry properly lolll
Now write your other story (I want Grannyyyyyy)
Gwen
As you can see, I have a lot of gore idea to torture people, I don't know why but I was always better to write angst story that romantic story.
I didn't find Jayden really a bad guy. For me he was just King Jayden. He had to act rough, he had to think to his mate and his Kingdom. I like it a lot, tough guy it's my thing lolll But is it the end of the C.Julius or are we going to see him afterward??? Hum...only the autor know........poke autor lolll
So your can't cook lovely little meal to your hubby??? Ho well, I'm sure you better at other thing :) In my case, I'm chef loll But I suck at housework, I can't do the laundry properly lolll
Now write your other story (I want Grannyyyyyy)
Gwen
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH, COME ON! Imprisonment and banishment? That's IT!? Unless of course his death is on the Earth plane when he drives his car through a nuclear power plant, only to be picked up by a tornado and tossed three miles into a radioactive waste dump where his skin begins to melt off, and then as he's running and screaming he encounters a rabid squirrel which begins to attack him. And then when he's down, bird-flu-infected buzzards proceed to peck his eyes out and fire ants crawl inside him and eat him from the inside out. Then his bones can be chew toys for the wolves!!! Oh, and the best part - a forest fire burns any remains.
Don't blame me. Blame the influences the Repo!: The Genetic Opera soundtrack has on my mind after I've had it on repeat for two hours.
And you thought my pit and the pendulum suggestion was messed up! =D
And Chrissybaby has a rare gift!!! D'aww, good! That's exciting. Honestly, I think he and Adam should take a break for like... I dunno... a MINIMUM of a week and just be together, because all this stress Chris is feeling can NOT be good for the baby. Right? Unless they're just weird and there's NOTHING that could possibly happen to hurt the baby because they're MAGIC. That would be just peachy. But Chris STILL needs a little TLC from Adam right this SECOND.
I think this is the longest review I've given you. Maybe. In theory. And I promise I won't listen to Repo! anymore while reading your stories and reviewing. It tends to make me a little.... insane. *cackles*
Don't blame me. Blame the influences the Repo!: The Genetic Opera soundtrack has on my mind after I've had it on repeat for two hours.
And you thought my pit and the pendulum suggestion was messed up! =D
And Chrissybaby has a rare gift!!! D'aww, good! That's exciting. Honestly, I think he and Adam should take a break for like... I dunno... a MINIMUM of a week and just be together, because all this stress Chris is feeling can NOT be good for the baby. Right? Unless they're just weird and there's NOTHING that could possibly happen to hurt the baby because they're MAGIC. That would be just peachy. But Chris STILL needs a little TLC from Adam right this SECOND.
I think this is the longest review I've given you. Maybe. In theory. And I promise I won't listen to Repo! anymore while reading your stories and reviewing. It tends to make me a little.... insane. *cackles*
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You have every detail figured out. You must be a genius.
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wait! I forgot to review the chapter. Bad me!
I loved the way Adam put the smackdown on that creep Julius. I was so worried for poor Chris, he is so vulnerable. WTG Jonas for saving the day.
I loved the way Adam put the smackdown on that creep Julius. I was so worried for poor Chris, he is so vulnerable. WTG Jonas for saving the day.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am all caught up now and I am saddened that I haven't found this earlier. You have creatd such an amazing world, filled with such wonderful characters and with so much detail, stunning. I really enjoy the way you maintain the differences in their cultures. So many times someone from one world enters another and then then suddenly they start acting like everyone else there. You have done very well in maintaining Devin, Chris and Sarah's true personalities.
There is only few details I am confused on.
If Chris is Darien reincarnated, doesn't that make him Devin's father?
Why did Adam have to wait 200 hundred years to get pregnant for Devin?
Which brings about my last question. Adam is 800+ years old and his is quite obvioulsy the Dom between him and Chris, why was he the one to get pregnant and not Darien? Did it maybe take 200 years of begging for him to get Darien to top? LOL!
Of course the reincarnated souls part bring about lots of philosopical questions in my head. They don't need to be addressed in the story, they just make me think. (I like it when a story does that) Like what would happen if a soul is reincarnated in a physical form that the other half thinks is physically unattractive or do they have this innate inner beauty to each other? Does a reincarnated soul have any personality traits from it previous form or forms. Is one half of the soul always designated as Dom and the other Sub? Are some souls split in opposites like like Adam and Chris' or split more evenly like Devin and Jayden's? How many reincarnations of his other half did Adam have to live through or did he and Darien stay together the entire 800 years before Chris?
Sorry, I am getting carried away. These questions may have already been addressed in you A/N's , but I was so caught up in the story I didn't read them. Maybe I will read them while I wait for the next update.
There is only few details I am confused on.
If Chris is Darien reincarnated, doesn't that make him Devin's father?
Why did Adam have to wait 200 hundred years to get pregnant for Devin?
Which brings about my last question. Adam is 800+ years old and his is quite obvioulsy the Dom between him and Chris, why was he the one to get pregnant and not Darien? Did it maybe take 200 years of begging for him to get Darien to top? LOL!
Of course the reincarnated souls part bring about lots of philosopical questions in my head. They don't need to be addressed in the story, they just make me think. (I like it when a story does that) Like what would happen if a soul is reincarnated in a physical form that the other half thinks is physically unattractive or do they have this innate inner beauty to each other? Does a reincarnated soul have any personality traits from it previous form or forms. Is one half of the soul always designated as Dom and the other Sub? Are some souls split in opposites like like Adam and Chris' or split more evenly like Devin and Jayden's? How many reincarnations of his other half did Adam have to live through or did he and Darien stay together the entire 800 years before Chris?
Sorry, I am getting carried away. These questions may have already been addressed in you A/N's , but I was so caught up in the story I didn't read them. Maybe I will read them while I wait for the next update.