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After searching desperatly for some good written yaoi the last few days, and being unable to find any [ as well as like religiously checking updates] I was SO SO SOOOOOOOOOO happy to have this smutt I swear yaoi is my anti-drug that I am addicted too =)

good chapter I liked it <3 seemed kinda a filller but you would have had to make it UBER long, what with the good smutt

aanndd what does the outfit chris have to wear loook like? all I know is that it is not his trainning outfit. Is it like a tunic?

I didn't review last time, did I? Bad me. I think I forgot since I spoke to my boyfriend D: evil distracting boyfriend. Well, he's away on a trip for 2 weeks so keep on coming with the chapters, I'm not distracted by him now! xD
The calm-ish part was nice, it's needed sometimes in a fiction with as much chaos as they have. I want more explosions. Hm, would you be able to fit in a poisonous snake who bites some important person at the plan of some evil dude someday? :D I have a morbid love for deadly snakes and evil dudes.
I think I'm a bit stupid at the moment. I haven't gone to bed yet and my friend I haven't met in 9 months is coming over about... 7 hours from now.
I noticed I'm mostly rambling random stuff in my reviews. Do not worry, I can't keep a topic irl either. I move on to next after next without finishing the first. Oh yes, I should go to sleep now,goodnight and update soon since this is my favourite story :D you never fail to keep me reading, and that says alot since I have a short attention span to most things.

-Squeals in Delight- Yaay new Chappies. I'm glad that Devin and Jayden are on very good terms now... though i still hope for a little more -winks- Annnyways, cant wait for more ^^

Devin can be an ass somtimes can't he lol. I miss King Jayden, he did not appear in this chapter.

I must say, I started your story last night and now I'm completely enthralled. I love the characters and the plot line. I'm a sucker for a good fantasy with handsome men. You've done an awesome job with this fic. :-)

Well, I can't actually remember if I reviewed this or not... so.... I'm doing it again just in case!

YAY smexy time. Loves it. I'm glad Chris is feeling a bit better about the baby, now. I'd feel the same way, but for different reasons. I deal with three maniac nieces and nephews who are angels apart, but put them together and their life-time goal is to antagonize each other. And one is just the definition of bossy. And when it comes to ME having children, the subject is currently taboo. I'm not even willing to consider it at the moment.

I have a request. Can we have Jayden and Devin time next chapter? PLEASE!? I'm having withdrawls of J/D cuteness

Well, I am thanking the gods for your obsession. This chapter was really hot!

Crashing through
Pieces of you
Burning agony fills me
Damaged
Forever
Pleasing
Anew

Oooooooooooooooooooh a dominant Adam, hehe! I had to go back and read through the chapter again and write down the stuff i wanted to put in the review cos the whole 'dominant Adam smexing' made me forget everything lmao xx I wanna say how cute is Chris trying not to swear bless him. Also, with Darien and Adam, did they swap being top/bottom because u said that Darien wanted to have a baby but Adam got pregnant so i was wondering, does the sub have to get preg or can it be either (cant imagine Adam as a sub to be honest).
Poor poor Adam with his paiful love life, hope this time works out better for him.

"Gimme Adam. I need you in me like three days ago"
I love Chris!! Even when he is smexing he is so funny!

As for the late update, the wait is always worth it and it only makes us appreciate u more.
Another great chapter, cant wait for the next.
Oh and i think Adam would look lovely in something leatherier.
Cya xxxxxx

:o i love this story ^^; i only started reading it uhm yesturday when i stumbled upon it and i have to say, very niiicceee hehe though, Dev and Jay are my def favies well anyways, cant wait for more updates ^^