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I'm a bad, bad girl. I posted a review on fic press saying that I'd be willing to wait for updates, but I gave into the temptation and would like you to add me to the updates lists for Adult fan fiction please. This story is soooo good and I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope Chris and Alex's baby is mate for Augustus since I think its high time he find his mate! But I'm sure what ever you think up is a million times better than anything I can come up with. I just have one question: What happens if Chris and Alex's baby's mate is part of Omega? Does the baby get a choice? or is he forced into mating? Great story. Update as soon as you can.

Oh God! What's the worst that can happen? NEVER SAY THAT! How could stepping into a strangly colored dream stream be dangerous? Enjoy your coma or drowning or mind rape to come Chris. Adam needs to chill out a little, he's always scolding him and correcting him but the poor guys pregnant, give him a break.

Here I am again! So I am totally addicted.
Great action, i am thrilled. But what is it about his little fishfriends anf the river, is this just a mental space for Chris or is there more about it? Will they tell him anything or will they help him find a solution for his problmes?
I will wait and see. And thanks for your answers, i fell honored with so much attention. Makes reviewing even more fun.

Well before biting each others heads of -did- turn into soemthing yummy.. ;P so im not worried or anything hehe.
plus, it seems that dev is a wittle bit curious about the preggers now hehe.
oh yeah and Yaaaaay updates xD.

My money is on the doctor being the leak.

please update soon!

LMAO ur hilarious! If i didnt love the fic so much i would just skip to the author replies cos u just make me giggle. Jayden is a weid top, its jsut seemed so wrong with his being so big and Devin bein little, knocks the whole balance off lol. Jayden scares me a bit actually, Adam does too but in a good way lol.
Was really distracted wen i read this chapter so not much to say on it cept Im a little worried about Chris in his fantasy world, would it be possible for his father to get in there?. Will read it again wen i got less on my mind. xxxxx

WOW! I wonder what happened. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Why do I have a bad feeling about Chris going in that water? I'll have all week to ponder it and why everyone was in such an uproar. Thank goodness for plot that makes you think.

I have to say I'm more fan of top/botton stories that where they are equals but I do read all kind of stories like this one. Of course now when Devin didn't do as Jayden told him, my mind is thinking how Jayden could punnish him... ;)

But even if that won't happen ;) this is still very good story. Somehow I hope Devin will get pregnant too in the end...

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Okay I finally joined this site and one of the reasons is your story. It's wonderful I love Devon and Jaydon it's great and Chris and Adam are sweet although with everything that Chris is going through Adam really needs to lighten up especially if it's a tense and emotional moment for Chris like this last one. I mean pregnancy is a tulmultious time as it is and with his fantastic new gift which is bound to be stressful and the fact that he didn't even grow up knowing he could have children well Adam needs to handle him with a softer touch. I realize that it's a dangerous time but a little swearing really just how sensitive are these Aurorans any way. I loved Devon getting so upset and angry when little Chris collapsed the big brother in him came out and he did and should have gotten mad at Adam who should have known better than to freak out at poor little Chris over such a petty thing. I looooooove this story please keep it up it's awesome and I think that Devon should get pregnant so his and Chris's kids can grow up together and cause all the havoc that they can to drive their parents nutty that would be so funny. Besides I'd like to see how Devon would react to being pregnant but not before he has a little more control over his own gift can't wait to see that progression. Again thank you.