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No I'm not psychic but I can understand how Devon feels I mean he wasn't brought up in England and neither was Chris so neither of them could understand all that much about the pompousness of aristocracy or getting a position of power just because their born into it. They were I'm assuming from how they act and think that it was America where everyone supposedly is equal and you have to be voted into office and work to stay there so this new world must seem really ridiculous and stupid and I'm glad Devon at least started making Adam see that his world wasn't perfect and running smoothly every world and person needs changes for them to grow it's called growing pains and to keep going we all have them people and worlds. I loved Chris's dream world it's amazing and sweet and the fact that a future child came to warn him neat really. And shame on Adam for forcing him to retreat to it I am so proud of Devon because Adam sure needed a kick in the butt for how he treats that sweet little one and with him being pregnant well made me cheer for Devon while I was reading. As far as who Adam should tell this secret about Chris to well that would be easy Devon, Sarah, and Jayden between the four of them hopefully they can protect him at these times but I sure hope he tells Chris about it Chris needs to know the dangers that he is in otherwise how can he even protect himself or even try I hope Devon and Sarah can point that out to Adam lord knows they should. I think Chris is much stronger than they all give him credit for he is just very young that's all but the young can do amazing things as we all know and are always usually much stronger than others give them credit for. Thank you Thank you for this awesome story and I can't wait for the next installment from your amazing imagination it is totally awesome thank you. Please make it soon.

Well, I just spent three days reading this whole story :) I love it so far, and eagerly await the next chapter. Would you mind adding me to your update list? Cheers.
-Jem

Chris get two kids? That's awesome! I'm sure Devin and Chris alone can solve this whole population problem by themselves if they keep popping out kids. Now Devin just has to get pregnant! Who's Xavier's mate? Is he alive? Am I ruining the story by asking this? Another great chapter. Update as soon as you can.

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I think the best way to describe this chapter is... extremely awesome. It's just getting better and better! :D Oh yes, I'm jumping up and down in joy, it's not your imagination.

Oh man so much plot twists! And I'm glad Devin chewed out Adam, very good work there! And the whole "I'm your REAL son, and you will reincarnaet me" was awesome!

I love you and your marvelous imagination.
Take that Adam. Put this in the right place. Wow, I looove the badass Devin. So sexy in a I-kick-your-ass-if-you-don't-do-what-I-say. At least Adam see the wrong of his action.
I had reason about the *place*, it's an other plane. I like this when I have reason, loll.
Chris gonna have a second child?!?! Hoooo...Xavier will become Taro, cute but he is a little creepy yeah. Like the name, Taro. I understand why he didn't listen but..stupid Chris loll.
Devin's really that powerful??? Now, go find Jayden and learns to be a good little submissive (each time a see this word, sub, my mind go dirty mouahahah)
Again you write a fabulous chappy. Thanks to you.
Gwen

Oh my, were you in a bad mood when you wrote the first part lol. I think Devin used the f word more in that one conversation than Chris has in the whole fic lmao. I know Adam is my favourite and everything but i have to say 'you tell him, Devin'. Alot of what Devin said sounds about right, i still love Adam tho.

I was right to be concerned about Chris in that fantasy world, grr damn fish making him get in the water. Hope he's ok.
Well, brilliant chapter as usual. If any of the above doesnt make sense its because its 2am and im very tired but when i saw you had updated i had to read it.

Update again soon plz
vic xxxxx

Yay Devin for telling it like it is, Adam can shove that up his pompous aristocratic ass. And Chris, Chris you are a dumbass who doesn't listen. I am curious now though if the blonde kid is the real child or the black haired one he imagined is real...oooh or maybe it's twins?

nooooooooo cliff hanger!! -sobs and begs for more-

I have a bad feeling about the *place*. Not sure that it's really just Chris imagination that produce this place. What's with the bloody water?! But the fish make me laugh. Spoil fish. lolll
I don't appreciate Adam reaction with Chris (when he cry "Chris"), I can understand, see the logic but I found him harsh and cold. Poor Chris!!!
I don't want him in the coma to long, he had to see his baby growing up,and, well, he's helpful for the story loll. Major character and good perso.
So your hubby prefer read more hot-monkey-gay-sex than plot?!?! mouhahaahh, good hubby. ;)
Gwen