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Yes, TJ and TJecstasy are one and the same.

OK so there was a lot of info packed into this chapter and a little summarization also packed in of what has happened up to this point. I like that it was written subtly in, many people will appreciate that because there are thirty chapters and it never hurts to remind us what has happened.

So, I am excited Chris's child is Xavier whom is also, I assume, Augustus's mate(future sequel about that since Chris's child will also be a seer?). Also the little info on who Chris's birthfather is and that he may still be a live or tainted or dead or many things is helping to move the story along. This chapter was info based and I loved it. You referenced Devin's past personality, which is helpful to see how he has grown. Good progress with that. Adam, his character is definitely undergoing reconstruction. I am seeing where Devin's role is going he'll hopefully change Aurora for the best and in that we'll see a whole countries growth by the end of it. The people are still confused, unsure, suspicious all the things they should be and that keeps the scenario very realistic. Good job.

~TJ

So... Chris is in the next chapter right? I actually seem to like Chris more than anyone in AC, but that isn't such a big surprise since I love characters like him. Jayden was cool for once, and I won't write what I wanted to (it would sound a bit Devin-ish) in case I hurt your feelings xD

Now... I have 6½ hours of sleep before I have to get up and prepare for school... ugh, I want my freedom back.

You're back! You're alive! You're feeling better! And you write a long, long chappy!
Open my new champagne bottle, teleport a big glass for perterme2. Cheers!
I missed you, glad to see (ok read) you. But I much more glad to know that you feel better. Now, never be ill
again, no, never again.
I understand that you don't answer the reviews loll And you can be sure that I prefer that you write a chappy for *Flamming*.
Now I go to read the chappy. I was so happy to see an update, I didn't take time to read, I just wanted to let you know that...I missed you........
Gwen

Yay Devin defending Chris and better than the other mages deserve.
love it.

Don't make Chris baby be the reincarnation of his father soulmate...too creepy. Like others mentioned already I vote for Augustus's soulmante (or at least Thomas's). But we know that Chris's going to have a second baby, so lot of possibility.
I repeat that Jayden in *IAMTHEKING* mood, is...miam...grrrr...little drool on the keyboard...loll
Devin impressed me, wow, your baby grow up pesterme2. Bravo. Two months ago he could not talk to people like this.
Alot og talk in this chappy and it was necessary, but...(make a shy full of hope, with foot who made circles on the floor, face)...when are we going to read about hot man-o-man sex. I'm a perverse depress...snif!
Question about Janice. She kick Chris out of the house because he liked men, but she knew he was from Aurora, thus he is not really homosexual but auroransexual, since they didn't have female, so why?!?!
Gwen

I didn't feel this chapter was to long. Perhaps because i love the story so much, but it sure was absorbing. So i hope our mages have a bit alone-time soon again. :)

This is another great chapter. Although it was mostly council stuff, but it seems they've got Chris' problem solved for the moment. I can't wait for the action to start! I hope its in the next chapter! Update as soon as you can.

From: Fiction Press's HazeleyedHoney

Now things are getting good again. I guess you needed to write the slower parts to reach this semi-climax, but it was worth the wait. So I see the development of Chris's powers and character in the story are growing very well. I like that you have changed and molded Chris without actually doing any serious damage to his original personality. The growth of his character is definitely the most exciting especially since you connect that growth and his emotions to his past, which sometimes is hard for authors to keep track of all of their characters to do something like that. So very well done. Is Chris your favorite character? Jayden's character is the next one who's character growth has been noticeable. He is really taking charge and taking on the role of king much more seriously than we had perviously witnessed.

Devin's character, although fun at times, only really has gotten over his fear of sex, but as for being an uncooperative child that doesn't like to compromise he's still the same ol' same ol,' which is fine for now, but definitely watch out you don't want to get into a runt with his character.

Adams and Devins confrontation was amazing! Congrats. Now that we have that issue laid out on the tables I'm looking forward to Adam's response to it, make it good, but not mushy. I can see how this could either go mature or mushy. That scene is one of my favorite scenes so far.

I can't remember if I commented on Devin walking in on Jayden and his lover, oh well. Very mature of Devin! That scene could have gone two ways: cliche or original and you went the original way. Hi Five! That was not disappointing at all. I was afraid I would read a story line that had been done to death, but you kept it interesting. Devin's insecurity about his relationship with Jayden is getting kind of out there though. Is he going to grow out of it or what? What is happening with that? I see where it stems from obviously catching your soul mate "cheating" (kind of weak for a king 0.o I'll let it go though) will make one uncertain, but where exactly is it going? I just want to know if it is at all leading to something? Thanks.

Ok so we're finally getting to the Ash*mumbling his name* second part with dealing with Chris. You present us with a lot of rumors about what the people think, but maybe we should hear some of their thoughts because if a war does happen I am not sure where they stand. lol I am sometimes not even sure if there are other people in Aurora. I not even quite sure where that whole story line is going since it seems to have disappeared for a little while due to the personal issues that are the main focus right now. The excitement in the castle should remind us of that part. *crosses fingers*

Overall great story!

Oh yeah! Thank you! I finally understand the point to Chris's baby. I was like 'Chris is pregnant...*twitch* why?'.....0.o and now you have given me a proper understanding of that reasoning, plus you brought it full circle with the baby being the reincarnation of Xavier. I love it! Good Job!

Hi,

I have followed you over to AFF. I like this story a lot. I was a little worried when Devin left and was allowed to live in the human world only because how are him and Jayden ever suppose to get together if they are so far apart. Now you have brought Sarah over to Aurora. Is she also going to turn out to be another mage? XD Kidding. Don't mind my sarcasm. Now I am interested in her placement in the story since she is now there. Ha I would laugh if she ended up with that Augustus (sp?) character who has a things for female humans.

Jayden's a really friendly king and so I was glad to see him take a stand against Adam only because he sometimes reminds me of like a parent trying to be their kids friend and he can't be liked by everyone and he as to have some sort of separation from people since he is the king and his people obviously respect and admire him, although I am not quite sure yet because all he has shown is friendliness. I can't wait to read where you will take your characters.

I kind of get the feeling Jayden is going to do something stupid like get a lover because of course he feels so guilty (If he does I hope he can't get hard). I guess that would create a bit of drama as long as it didn't get too cliche. Anyways I just wanted to let you know that this story is officially my new favorite. :)