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Hi again! Yay for another great chapter! Oooo, I knew something like this (Chris' attempted kidnapping) was going to happen soon (especially with the ominous chapter name and your dire warnings, lol)! But I've been anxious about it happening around every corner (I was especially anxious during the whole party scene wondering who would try something and when), so at least it has finally happened, and I must say that I'm relieved to know that Devin is there and can potentially save Chris (oh I hope so!). And I just know that creepy little Zachary is up to something sinister, I bet Thomas is the spy and Zachary is helping him to capture Chris in an attempt to get back back at Jayden and Devin, that little sunavabitch! As for Chris, I'm so glad that he learned how to make barriers rather quickly, I was so worried that he'd be totally consumed by his powers and become completely unstable. Oh and Sarah...sometimes I feel she's a beam of much-needed sunshine or crazy annoying and then sometimes I want to slap her! Dammit Sarah, just because you have commitment issues doesn't mean you should string someone along like that, that's just cruel, ergh! Oh, and I hope Paul isn't a spy or that Nathan isn't a double agent, I don't like to think that but with some unknown spy wandering around, I can't help but question everyone's motives (I even suspected Jonas at one point, lol!), and with Paul being right there next to Chris when the Omega man showed up, I just couldn't help but think he had something to do with it (even though is ended up "unconscious"). But I also am wondering why Chris left the party anyway--are Daniel or Teresa involved? It was, of course Daniel who stopped Nathan from following Devin, that seems pretty suspicious...yadda, yadda, yadda...lol Anyway, I think I read that mpreg fic about shapeshifters too; they were like vampire-werewolves or something? Lol, it's good that you thought of that possible occurrence though (malevolent souls seeking powerful positions), whenever I'm thinking of a plot, weeding out the plot holes is always a pain in the ass, especially with longer stories with lots of characters, I often lose track of who is who and who did what and I find I screwed up my plot halfway through, very frustrating, lol! That's so sad to think that Jiro won't have a mate, though, but I trust your judgment and plot evolutions! Hm, I'm getting wordy again, so I'll just say, thanx and yay for suspense!

Hi Hi have to say great as always the cliff hanger was interesting glad you did it. I love how everyone is meeting Chris and loving him but then how could you not when you meet someone so adorably lovable. And how Devin is coming along with his training I absolutely loved how he sat with Jayden during it that makes so much sense and it is so cute. It doesn't seem real hard to figure out who is generating the rumers that would have to be Zachary I mean since he is involved with others at the palace well I can see how the little sneak would eavesdrop and hear things he shouldn't and try to exploit them or sleep with someone to get information sluts and whores do it at least according to the history books if you know where to look for the right history books. And what is Zachary if not both of the above. If I'm wrong then I can't wait to find out who the creep is and why. And as far as why the slut would go after Chris well that's easy he's the most vulnerable and it's a sneaky snarky way to get at Jayden and Devin knowing how much trouble it would cause them both. Anyway congrats on the Bday for the little one they are always fun. I agree totally with you on the baby thing and making him the mate to Omega or whatever EWWWWWWWWWWWW Creepy maybe it is a guy thing I asked my boyfriend and he thought it would be cool too gross. Anyway thank you thank you thank you for a short period I was afraid you weren't going to come back to the story it scared me because I am seriously hooked on it now and painfully need your installments for my fix and to fuel my imagination. I was a little afraid you were going to leave us readers hanging like quite a few authors do and I am happily jumping up and down in my mind now knowing that your much to sweet and kind to do that to us totally hooked fishys. Thank you Thank you and now I will wait with bated breath for your next amazing installment.

I am on vacation right now, so i took some time until i found time to read this last chapter. (yeah you know, traveling is quite exhausting and even in the US they don't have wifi everywhere).
But sure, i like the smex. And kind of make-up-sex, even better. And woah don't tell me Chris is getting twins. Actually i am a big fan of twins. That would be great.

Hi! I've been following this story for a while and I have to say that I love it! I'm just glad that you update regularly. Otherwise, I don't think I can bear the long wait for new chapters. My favourite characters are Jayden and Devin. I just love the dynamic between them. I'm not that fond of Chris and Adam, for some reason.-----Sorry!!!----- I think Chris is too 'unstable' for my taste.
Anyway, I have a question. How much is the age difference between Jayden and Devin? I'm sorry if you've mentioned this before in your story. I've tried to read back several chapters but couldn't find any info on this. By the way, wouldn't it be cool if Devin could manipulate the energy he absorb into matter! Since Einstein proved that energy equals to matter and all. That way, his ability would have some cool, really practical use. Anyway, that's just me babbling since I've been studying too many physics lately. -grin-
I'll be looking forward to more chapters from you!

really? ;___; things just hate my lately LOL well anyways D: i hope chris is okay i mean really i would hate to see his father's dirty 'paws' lay on his pure soul/body. though devin does seem to be a born leader type though ;P more smut from jay and dev would be soo yummy :P but once again <3 cant wait for more

Hi! I just finished reading this story (been working on it for the past couple of days) and I just have to say how much I love it! I've been reading epic mpreg stories (my absolute favorite kind!) all summer and this has definitely been one of the best! At first I wasn't sure if i'd like it because of the whole BDSM thing at the very beginning and I was like "Oh no, I hope the whole Auroran civilization isn't based completely on a Dom/sub type thing," but you pleasantly surprised me with the turn of events, not to mention all the drama and hot sex scenes! I was also kind of put off by the whole souls finding their parents sort of thing b/c I thought it was just kinda weird, for what if some evil Omega soul (like Ashcroft's) maliciously sought out someone like Chris or Devin or someone else who is kind-hearted and were born a total Damian from "The Omen," the thought just kinda creeped me out. But, as you explained it more in the story, I became more relaxed with the idea and it became a much more interesting aspect of Auroran society and plot device (I like knowing that they will always be reborn and almost always find their other half every time, it's comforting and also interesting to know that each time they have almost a completely different personality than their previous incarnation; also I loved Taro's visit to Chris' "Higher Plane", I felt that was really rather touching, despite Taro's no-nonsense attitude, and dammit Chris, you should have listened to the little boy and just stayed the hell clear of the stream!!!lol). Also, I'm glad Devin finally ripped The Council and Assembly a new one with his "speech" and now we're finally moving towards societal and political change in Aurora especially with the symbolic replacement of Adam with his son and the The Council's new fascination with and admiration(?) for Devin. I'm really curious about Jiro now, since (after reading other comments, for I'm afraid I totally didn't catch on to some of it) now I know that Taro and he are to be twins(?) and Taro is Augustus' mate, so now we know so much about Taro yet still nothing really about Jiro; I think one thing that threw me off was the fact that the two didn't appear together in Chris' "Higher Plane" and so I thought that Chris was just mistaken about everything (or maybe even that Jiro is to be that creepy "devil child" Omega soul that I'm worried about). But yeah, I think it would be a little too weird to have Jiro be Manchester's soul (another character I'm constantly guessing about, though--did he really die in the war? Or was he taken by Ashcroft and forcibly impregnated and maybe even tainted like Ashcroft in the process? ), still we have Devin's new best friend/"little brother"/"mommy" who is the reincarnation of his own father, I think that's pretty Freudian already, lol! As for the sex scenes, very hot!!! Aomething just occurred to me though, if Jayden likes to have Devin inside him a lot (a "quirk" that I find rather cute and sexy), what if Jayden gets pregnant instead of Devin? Even though I think that would be totally surprising (well except I guess that Adam is a very dominant person and he was the one who ended up pregnant), for me it would just be weird b/c he's the king and the very masculine guy (I'm totally biased to favoring a YAOI/BL seme/uke type relationship, which sorta pains me to say that, lol), so yeah, just my two cents... But again...hot sex! Anyway, I have to admit that I've laughed, cried and wanted to rip many characters' heads off at times (something I like to call "Wuthering Heights Syndrome,"--sry, lit nerd--lol!) but that just means the characters are so very "real." Anyway, thank you for updating so regularly!! That really means a lot when so many other writers don't update for months on end (though I can understand why) and you're still in the middle of the story, very frustrating! I know there's so much more to the story that I could comment on, but I don't want this to be too long, so I'll just leave it at this, lol. And I would love to be added to the update list for this story and "Flaming" (another great story!), Tnx and keep of the great work!!!

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guess who's back!
I had fun in Italy! did you due anything during the summer?

I liked this chapeter, some smut.. some really good plot.. and CHRIS IS SEMI BACK

and my mind went into overide when I could not remeber who Xavier was and was like TARO?? what about JIRO?? aaahhh!

keep them coming!! <3

Chris is having twins!? Awesome! Like I've said before, I hope one of the twins becomes Augustus' mate. I think you hinted of it being Taro in a previous chapter, but I'm not 100% positive. Plus you never said what Jiro's gifts were, the soul that enters his body couldn't have gifts like Chris's 'cause of how rare it is, could he? I think the soul that enters Jiro's body should be Chris's other dad. THAT WOULD BE SO FREAKING AWESOME FOR CHRIS TO SAY HE GAVE BIRTH TO HIS FATHER!!! Freud would have a field day with that. Did Chris's other dad die? I don't remember.

I loved the smex scene. As I do with all your smex scenes in all your stories. I can never wait for updates. You've got a gift for writing that can never be denied and I know when you update that I'm going to enjoy the chapter even before I read it. I can't wait for the upcoming drama! Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.

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I think I might like Jayden a bit more :D which wasn't much to begin with, but anyhow. I think I was as shortsighted as Devin. There simply isn't any words able to describe how awesome each chapter is. Give me a bit of your skills? Because I seem to only have been granted a bit of writing and lots of drawing skill. If I could write as well as I draw my character then I would be as great as you.

I woke up to find this updated 3 hours before I have to go to school. Do you know how happy I am? I'm going to meet my most hated person, and try to act like I don't hate her. Easy? Hardly. Easier now that I'm very happy, but still hard.

I was surpised to see two chapters today. I'm not complaining though. I think Chris may have twins, in fact when he came to him and said he was his son it was my first thought. I just hope poor Chris doesn't get overwhelmed.

I didn't mind that there wasn't much action, plot is important too.

I did enjoy the ending--very much!