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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please add me to the mailing list. . . . I've been reading from the get go! :D
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo Jayden cant die before getting devin knocked up!!!!
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter!!
First off, I beg a chapter alone where Jayden castrates that little bastard Zachary with a dull butter knife (if he's still alive). You owe that to all your loyal fans! =P
Second, I disagree with your assessment about your writing action sequences... they are very good.
Here are my thoughts about your story so far and what you've revealed... I was glad to see Councilman Thomas die (Go Dev!!). His whole thing about taking Chris for the good of Aurora was complete BS. I found it also interesting that Councilman Reese (wasn't he supposed to be one of the good guys??) somehow at the right time was distracting Adam with something so inconsequential leads me to believe that he if not others of the Council think they should go against the King for the greater good of Aurora. Another fact that you let out is that Dev was so powerful that once trained he could deal with Ashcroft by himself. I know you have built him up to be as strong as Jayden or Adam but by your wording makes it sound as though Dev's abilities totally eclipse anyone elses. Finally, the fight scene showed that Ashcrofts plans seem to have changed. He had Chris, Dev, and Jayden and could have easily taken or killed any of them but choose to take Dev alive-- back to earth, I'm assuming. I can only guess that he didnt finish off Jayden because he didnt want Dev 'damaged' with the death of his soulmate...
Ugh, update soon!!
First off, I beg a chapter alone where Jayden castrates that little bastard Zachary with a dull butter knife (if he's still alive). You owe that to all your loyal fans! =P
Second, I disagree with your assessment about your writing action sequences... they are very good.
Here are my thoughts about your story so far and what you've revealed... I was glad to see Councilman Thomas die (Go Dev!!). His whole thing about taking Chris for the good of Aurora was complete BS. I found it also interesting that Councilman Reese (wasn't he supposed to be one of the good guys??) somehow at the right time was distracting Adam with something so inconsequential leads me to believe that he if not others of the Council think they should go against the King for the greater good of Aurora. Another fact that you let out is that Dev was so powerful that once trained he could deal with Ashcroft by himself. I know you have built him up to be as strong as Jayden or Adam but by your wording makes it sound as though Dev's abilities totally eclipse anyone elses. Finally, the fight scene showed that Ashcrofts plans seem to have changed. He had Chris, Dev, and Jayden and could have easily taken or killed any of them but choose to take Dev alive-- back to earth, I'm assuming. I can only guess that he didnt finish off Jayden because he didnt want Dev 'damaged' with the death of his soulmate...
Ugh, update soon!!
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW ZACHARY WAS IN ON IT!!!
And Councilman Thomas....well I knew he had Aurora's best interests at heart, even if they were a bit misguided. :/
I hope Zachary gets his just desserts....Jayden will certainly kill him slowly and painfully!
Great work as always!
And Councilman Thomas....well I knew he had Aurora's best interests at heart, even if they were a bit misguided. :/
I hope Zachary gets his just desserts....Jayden will certainly kill him slowly and painfully!
Great work as always!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No fair! A cliff hanger!? Are you mad at us? ;_; I want to see Devin whip out some power and play hero next chapter.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy your updates, whether its smut or plot heavy. Speaking of plot, last chapter you left us hanging with Adam calling for a large dinner and Alan. So this chapter you either forgot about it or you left us intentionally hanging.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, big hug. I wanted to read your new chappy last night but it's was not a good idea at that time...I was a little drunk. Not sure that I would be able to read or remember what I read.
(hubby say: just a "little"??? You drank 5 giga martinis!! 5!!!!) Yep, I know lolll I had a lot of fun too, but this morning....hooooo my poor head. Never again..... yeah sure mouhahah! Glad that my child's not here now.
Happy bday to your cuty. Big kiss! Smack! Mcdo's classic to bday day, they have everything to facilitate our life. I admit that I'm lazy sometime. The principal it's that he and his friends had fun. Parent's are not important here.
I enjoyed reading about Devin training. He managed in one week? Powerful the little D. His power are not easy to posses. I already say that you enjoy to much torture your personage. But it's make's better story.
They're so sweet together, I'm happy to read about their couple.
Who touch Paul and Chris?! Who, hum???? I'm going to hunt him/them. A pissed Gwen's a bad Gwen. Grrrrr. Fear me. If it's Zac, I'll probably make him a girl, chop his little candy. If it's Daniel, I'll make him buttrape by a horse. (yeark). Soooo...who???
You tempted me with a secret? Meanie. Pout. (Gwen show his paintball gun to pesterme2: hand me the secret, give it to me and everything's going to be okay, you're not going to suffer, be a good little writer, you know you want it...)
No more hot gay sex for a while?! Nooooo! You better write a good plot, not that you can't do the opposite, but.
Stop my rambling here. I have a headache to nurse. Pills, my new bestfriend where are you???
Gwen
(hubby say: just a "little"??? You drank 5 giga martinis!! 5!!!!) Yep, I know lolll I had a lot of fun too, but this morning....hooooo my poor head. Never again..... yeah sure mouhahah! Glad that my child's not here now.
Happy bday to your cuty. Big kiss! Smack! Mcdo's classic to bday day, they have everything to facilitate our life. I admit that I'm lazy sometime. The principal it's that he and his friends had fun. Parent's are not important here.
I enjoyed reading about Devin training. He managed in one week? Powerful the little D. His power are not easy to posses. I already say that you enjoy to much torture your personage. But it's make's better story.
They're so sweet together, I'm happy to read about their couple.
Who touch Paul and Chris?! Who, hum???? I'm going to hunt him/them. A pissed Gwen's a bad Gwen. Grrrrr. Fear me. If it's Zac, I'll probably make him a girl, chop his little candy. If it's Daniel, I'll make him buttrape by a horse. (yeark). Soooo...who???
You tempted me with a secret? Meanie. Pout. (Gwen show his paintball gun to pesterme2: hand me the secret, give it to me and everything's going to be okay, you're not going to suffer, be a good little writer, you know you want it...)
No more hot gay sex for a while?! Nooooo! You better write a good plot, not that you can't do the opposite, but.
Stop my rambling here. I have a headache to nurse. Pills, my new bestfriend where are you???
Gwen
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im finally all caught up, phew! Well, twins huh? sounds good except for the part about how they coming bursting out of the chest or something like that, still dont like the sound of that.
A bit of a cliffy there, hope Chris is ok.
update son plz xxxxx
A bit of a cliffy there, hope Chris is ok.
update son plz xxxxx
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twins?
and HOLY SHIZZAH I know I love writing cliffies... but actually reading them RAWR
<3 great job!
I point fingers [ ignore the three pointing back at me] at Zachary stupid oweifc3c bf4p 272fdfbds m,mmmmf
and HOLY SHIZZAH I know I love writing cliffies... but actually reading them RAWR
<3 great job!
I point fingers [ ignore the three pointing back at me] at Zachary stupid oweifc3c bf4p 272fdfbds m,mmmmf
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
evil evil site monster... RE$ALLY
gwar.
anyhow, I point a very accusing finger in Zacharys directoin. and OMEve OH and I have like mini sub plots going through my head. I SO want to write a ficiton but in the views of the omega cults theme of things. my head is in a spin!!
gwar.
anyhow, I point a very accusing finger in Zacharys directoin. and OMEve OH and I have like mini sub plots going through my head. I SO want to write a ficiton but in the views of the omega cults theme of things. my head is in a spin!!