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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi
i loved this story.
do you have any ending in your mind for it?
hope you will complete it
^_^
i loved this story.
do you have any ending in your mind for it?
hope you will complete it
^_^
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July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello pesterme2! I'm a big fan of your work. I'm from Argentina and I look forward to a new chapter of this amazing story. I'm totally addicted to it. Hugs and kisses!. I'll be looking forward to a new chapter
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really hope chap. 52 coming soon :)
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello I've just spent several days reading your story, just wanted to let you know how much I've loved it. Chris is my favourite character, I particularly enjoyed the chapters where he was trying to curtail his swearing, it was a bit of light relief in an angsty story. Can't wait to find out what happens next xx
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwww I was missing these guys so much! I can't believe I've finally managed to sit down and read your new updates, I've been running around like crazy trying to leave everything ready for my trip to Lux., gotta be sure my babies will be well taken care off while I'm away.
so I'm glad that Chris finally decided to really give Kiran a break, as much as he may rant that he doesn't need a daddy at this point in his life we can all see that's not all true. he needs all the love that Kiran is desperate to give him.
and poor Devin hvng to sit basically on display like that while they waited for their son's future mate to reveal himself... only to find him by a stroke of luck after the damn ceremony was over, poor guy. lol
hmmm Rafael's future mate looks like an interesting one, can't wait to get to know him. so update soon will ya! ;P
huggles & cookies dear L
so I'm glad that Chris finally decided to really give Kiran a break, as much as he may rant that he doesn't need a daddy at this point in his life we can all see that's not all true. he needs all the love that Kiran is desperate to give him.
and poor Devin hvng to sit basically on display like that while they waited for their son's future mate to reveal himself... only to find him by a stroke of luck after the damn ceremony was over, poor guy. lol
hmmm Rafael's future mate looks like an interesting one, can't wait to get to know him. so update soon will ya! ;P
huggles & cookies dear L
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-pokes pesterme2- :D I know you're dying to update the next chapter and I'm dying to read what happens next! update! update! I must know who this boy is and if he's going to be the pitcher of the relationship or the catcher!
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled across this story a couple of days ago and I'm so happy I did! I love it and hope you can update soon.
I want to know more about Mason!
I want to know more about Mason!
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-tackles pesterme2- chapter 51 wee~ thankies for the update! i so wanna see how the next chapter goes! especially since Chris had said that the kid is Ralph's mate. woohoo~ grats to Jayden for this and i really can't wait for what will happen next! thankies again for the update!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Who's that Boy~~~" It's like that song. XD
Honestly, that last bit, where everyone goes helter skelter over 'this boy Chris saw', that so threw the earlier parts of the chapter out of my mind. XD
Jiro's mate hasn't been found right (It's Taro's mate that is Aug right?).
I wonder who Jiro's mate will be then. I hope the dear twin wouldn't have to wait long. :D
I seems Devin's kid won't have to wait long. ^____^
Mason Dayburn. Skinny. Tattooed, black eyeliner, chains, combat boots... this kid is one oddity... one heck of an oddity. I sure hope the tattoo isn't REAL. O_O What's a KID doing with a TATTOO?
MASON! EXPLAIN YOURSELF! OTL he's gonna make heads roll if he REALLY is the destined Prince-consort (or consort) how does that term work again. argh.
but yeah....
I think this Mason, and his introduction, has thrown my brain focus on AC into a swirl of kaleidoscope of multi-colours.
It was so dang ANGSTY, then things were getting better. Then we get this poof of rainbow BOMB.
OOOH!!! CHRIS! i nearly forgot! HIM AND KIRAN! THEY HAVE MADE UP! They didn't kiss and hug but. well. ITS GOOD ENOUGH!!!
YAY! 8D thing's couldn't have gotten better. (Except if Ashcroft got purified) but well, that's just for thoughts XD
but yah!
I'm sorry my review is all over the place, and so not formatted, or orderly. My brain just isnt right...
MASON!!! *waves pointer finger at him* I LOOK FORWARD TO MEETING YOU MORE!!!
- nekoii
( Lori, hang on there in life! I hope things get better for you~ *hugs* ^____^ )
Honestly, that last bit, where everyone goes helter skelter over 'this boy Chris saw', that so threw the earlier parts of the chapter out of my mind. XD
Jiro's mate hasn't been found right (It's Taro's mate that is Aug right?).
I wonder who Jiro's mate will be then. I hope the dear twin wouldn't have to wait long. :D
I seems Devin's kid won't have to wait long. ^____^
Mason Dayburn. Skinny. Tattooed, black eyeliner, chains, combat boots... this kid is one oddity... one heck of an oddity. I sure hope the tattoo isn't REAL. O_O What's a KID doing with a TATTOO?
MASON! EXPLAIN YOURSELF! OTL he's gonna make heads roll if he REALLY is the destined Prince-consort (or consort) how does that term work again. argh.
but yeah....
I think this Mason, and his introduction, has thrown my brain focus on AC into a swirl of kaleidoscope of multi-colours.
It was so dang ANGSTY, then things were getting better. Then we get this poof of rainbow BOMB.
OOOH!!! CHRIS! i nearly forgot! HIM AND KIRAN! THEY HAVE MADE UP! They didn't kiss and hug but. well. ITS GOOD ENOUGH!!!
YAY! 8D thing's couldn't have gotten better. (Except if Ashcroft got purified) but well, that's just for thoughts XD
but yah!
I'm sorry my review is all over the place, and so not formatted, or orderly. My brain just isnt right...
MASON!!! *waves pointer finger at him* I LOOK FORWARD TO MEETING YOU MORE!!!
- nekoii
( Lori, hang on there in life! I hope things get better for you~ *hugs* ^____^ )
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ignore me if this really pisses you off, but 51 chapters is more than the average book. Even the Harry Potter books only average around 35-40 chapters and they're unnecessarily long. I really thought ending it shortly after Devon was located and reunited with Jayden was a great place to stop. You could have continued the saga after that with the second part in the series. Just a thought. Won't say anything else.