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my, my, quite a lot of information in this chapter, i have to think about it for while. and i feel so bad for devin. hopefully jaiden will come and rescue him soon. is there no way how he can destroy ashcroft forever without tainting his soul? and poor kieran, there seems to be no way he can get a mate again. you know i really start thinking about these guys between chapters.
*send you some of my energy*

I was waiting for this xD when it didn't appear on the latest list when it should, a heavy cloud descended to lay on my mind. I was like a walking zombie "Auroraaaaa's Consooooort...". Addiction does that to people.
I haven't reviewed in a while, I realized. Blame late nights and school (your updates show up around 24.50-02.00 for me) so I was either too much in a hurry - can't go to school without reading this, can I? - or too tired. Right now it only hurts to write, since my fingers are pretty bruised. I had, what is it called in english, workplace based education? I built big screens, but got to quit 4 days early. I had done 2 months worth of work or more already for them.
DEVIN! NOO! SAVE HIM! And Kiran too, because he is too nice to be ignored. Can I keep him?
It's great that Jayden is concious finally, but couldn't he have hurried? DEVIN IS IN DANGER! Each second passing is another step closer the darkness. What if Kiran hadn't alerted Devin of his falling to the dark side (Star Wars is epic)? RUN JAYDEN, RUN!
Sorry for lame jokes, I think someone drugged my drink with sugar.

Tooo much information, my brain freeze!!!! Whaaaaaaa!!!
How could you think about all this?! All the details that you write, you really develop your world completely. Everything's perfectly logic. How much time did you pass on this?! Do you have a plan (read here in the sense of drawing) with all Aurora history and the genealogy of your personage and their pass incarnation?

Ho yeah you can hide, because, as you remark so brilliantly, you almost make a return on *the torture list*.
I know where you live....(heee Gwen?...)...yes brain?....(she live in the USA, it's a really really big country with a lot of people)....ho yeah it's true, oh shut up, I hate when you have reason....(It's why I'm the brain gnagnagna!)

You make him be rape again??? And by Jonathan too?? Him, he is on the list, ho yeah baby.
And he tell him that Jayden's dead? The fucker *&%"/%"?/&*&/$" (censured for the chaste and pure ears of pester)
But if Jayden was really dead, the bonding mark's not supposed to disappear to let the person wait to the reincarnation...Devin's don't know this?!
He murder his child??? The fuc....ho I already say this loll.... I just can't imagine bless my child, yeark I have difficulties just to say no to him mouhahaha!!

You make me cry with how you describe how Devin feel and what he live and think. It's took me several papers to blow my nose and wipe my spectacle. The strength's Devin show in this situation's really something that he can be proud.

Who is the human traitor? As for Zac, thank for landing me to my care, I'm going to take care of him really good. But when people's going to know that he is a traitor?

"Why Darien chose to reincarnate as mine and Victor’s child for a second time is beyond my understanding."
Yeah exactly what I was thinking at this moment!!! Why???
And when Victor's going to die, his soul's going to continue to be tainted in his next reincarnation, so they hare no hope for the soul and for Kiran to be truly happy??? I don't want this. I'm sure you're going to tell me : wait and see. I think I start to know you lolll *pout*
For Victor to do all this just to destroy Adam?! He impress me in a wrong way.

When are you going to confirm or infirm the rumor that all of us, loyal reviewers, ask about Chris's pregnancy and his hypothetical twin?
And Chris's baby (or one of his baby) is Augustus's??? Sooo glad! *wipe a small tear of joy*

Jayden's ok, Jayden's ok, Jayden's ok, Jayden's ok....chant like a mantra....and he's going to save Devin! Hum?!
Point the *list* to pester!!!

Thank for the respond to my question about Gabriel/Kiran. It was helpful. But now as you can see I try, in this loooonnnng review to have the record to the most-question-in-one-review.

Gwen.

OK, I know that I make joke about your update, but the last time you were late, you were ill....sooo ...you know that virtually you're my friend......yeah I stalk you.....mouhahahahaha!!!and yeah I trully like you nah!!
So, forgot that I want a chapter, I just hope that you're ok and/or your familly.
Gwen

hmph he deserves more than a metal rod, more like a spear to gut him from ass to head. and how he treated his baby 'mama' is disgusting, i think Gabriel/Kiran should be allowed to get a new soulmate that is pure of heart instead of that bastard. hmph!!!! hm, and i wonder about chris' baby what is wrong with his aura? D:

I just saw you comment on Vijay story........you take time to comment?! But I wait for a chappy me.....
**Trow a tantrum**
mouhahaha!!!

Whaaaaaaa! How could you! You're right I'm really not happy with you now!

What have you done to Devin!? With his pass! The only thing I'm glad it's that this incident didn't break Devin.
Be strong Devin, you're going to make it...I'm personally hunt down pesterme2 if it's not the case...
You make me cry! It's prove that your writing touch me, but honestly I managed to survive without that loll.

And Jayden, if you kill him.............you think that my old treats to Victor were sadist, imagine if you do this to us, him,...

For Zac, I wait to you to tell me when I can start to torture him. The little shit really thing that he can escape his punishment. He is Victor's lover long time ago? Even when he was with Jayden? Or did he decide to be with the bad guy after Jayden rejection?

Gabriel...I have to reread some old chappy after finish to comment because I forgot all about Chris's birthfather and why he was send in earth in the first place (sorry loll). Is he Chris's birthfather?

Lot of new question in this one chapter!!!

Gwen

OMG, somebody rescue Devin now!!! Or at least, Devin, hurry up and get stronger so can blow the place sky-high! Dammit Jayden get better so you and Devin can kick some Omega ass!
Wow, so we finally get to meet Chris' birth-father? Very interesting development! Ooo, I wonder who he is; If he is in fact Ashcroft's supposedly dead mate (forgot his name...)? But, I do hope that he gets to meet with Chris in the end! (and doesn't get killed off in some horribly tragic way!)
Oh, and I do so hope Zachary has his comeuppance, er...coming up soon! Assuming that he's perhaps slept with Ashcroft, I think Zachary she be told off by him, be reminded how much of a worthless ass he is and then destroyed by his supposed-ex-lover/crazy-psychopath.
I liked Devin's very Scarlett O'Hara-ish declaration at the end (sry, dated reference, but that's who I thought of when I read that paragraph, lol).
I also like Omega's creepy Medieval-gothic headquarters, very appropriate! Although at the beginning I was thinking it would have been funny if the cell was actually located beneath something completely surprising like a museum or even something like an old ice cream parlor or something, lol.
Though, what would stop Ashcroft from just taking all of his followers to Aurora once all of the mages head to Earth? I would think he would try anything he could to move the war to Aurora so he'd have more power...though I suppose he'd have more hostages on Earth. OMG, I hope we don't have to see Devin put under some horrible spell, or broken down completely to where he is that mindless killing machine that Ashcroft wants so badly, ergh! that'd be too awful! (though would make for good/unbearable angst...)
Also, thanx so much for not writing out what occurred between Ashcroft and Devin (don't wanna have nightmares, lol)!
Oh, what if Jiro were to be Master Alan's mate? That just popped into my mind since you stated here that he lost his mate during the war.
Again, great job, can't wait for the next one, though I may have to once again build up the courage to read it so I can face all the dark stuff happening (lol)!

Well that was some chapter. I love that you made Devin even more determined to beat Ashcroft after what he did to him rather than giving up or becoming despondent. Of coure I would expect nothing less from Devin, he always had such a strong will anyway.

I am thrilled at the possibility of meeting Chis' birth father. He seems to be a gentle soul like Chris. Could he be Ashcrofts mate? I have to admit the whole pregnancy thing still baffles me. I thought it could only be mated souls, but then I attempted to re-read portions, but didn't find anything that specifically said that. That just made worry about Devin now. I hope Ashcroft doesn't get him pregnant. If only mated souls can have babies, then Gabriel most definately has to be Ashcroft's presumed dead mate then, I forgot what his name was.

I also noticed while re-reading, that some chapters have a * on them, why?

I feel a bit stupid because i just found out that i can comment without a account!!
Ive been following your story from the begining and i loved it and still do!!
Hope you keep up the good work and update again soon
Edaj x