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Hiya, jus had a thought, lol, Im literally about to leave for my hols but i had to ask this. Although Devin is preggers and its too soon for it to be Ashcroft's, Is there a way for Jayden to test whether the baby is his or not. Because, even if Devin does say its his because of the dates, he is gonna wonder. Sorry if that doesnt make any sense but im getting yelled at for not being ready lol.
Cya after me hols. xxxx

Oh yay, Chris now meets both his father and birthfather! That was an interesting experience, and although a tad short it seemed, it was still believable given the circumstances.
Ooo, mysterious plots developed by the souls of Chris' unborn twins, nice addition! I wonder who Jiro was in his past life, then.
OMG, I love Taro, he's so cute and creepy at the same time, but his character is so fun! It'll be interesting to see how Augustus takes to him. I loved the touching scene with Taro, it was just so sweet! Oh, and I wonder what exactly Chris' powers are and what purpose it is they are to be used for...
Ah, stupid, stupid Zachary...oh why couldn't you see something like that would happen? Why would you even go back to Ashcroft to report failure? Moron, you deserve far worse!
Oh, thank goodness it's not Ashcroft's child! Still, though, this makes Devin's ordeal so much worse! What will happen to the baby because of all the trauma he's experienced? What will happen to Devin as he seemingly continues to become icier? And what type of child will his be? I do hope it's not some reincarnated Omega demon-spawn...hm, why do i always think of that happening...?
Oh no, what's Ashcroft planning now that he knows Chris is pregnant? And where will the Omega hideout actually turn out to be located? I don't know why I find it important but I do, lol!
Oh, I love how Chris is really put in the position of us readers who get to see Devin's horrible experience but can't do anything about it and find ourselves shouting at nothing in consternation (I guess, we at least have these reviews), LOL!
Ergh, Chris wake up so you can tell everyone of your discoveries!!! And heed Taro's advice, the cute/creepy old-man-child always seems to be right!
Again, I loved it! And I can't wait for another!

Nooooo!!! I ran out of chapters to read. In my mind, Devin is being tortured and raped daily. While for the story it may only be for a week. I feel like it's been going on every day until the next chapter. Please update soon.

OMG I loved this chapter. Yay for updates!

Wow, revealling chapter!! Dev preg! Chris with twins!!

I very much enjoyed the scene with Taro.

Now someone needs to tell Chris to stop feeding the fish and get his arse back so he can tell where to find Dev... err, also someone needs to loan Victor a butterknife since him and Zachary are going to have a dinner date !!

An entire chapter devoted Chris! I really liked this chapter, so many things to ponder this week. When Kiran walked by Chris the first time I was thinking how sad it was that Chris didn't know that was his birth father, but he found out in the end. I think he took it pretty well, but I am sure he was thinking more about Devin just then anyway, maybe it will click in his brain later.

Last week I was obsessing over babies and what do I get this week? More babies! I have to say that I was totally taken by surprise on that one. Wow, three little kids running around soon. These guys are reproducing ike rabbits.

By the way, you wrote that this was Chapter 26 in the beginning. I actually went back to make sure I was on the right chapter.

Devin's pregnant!!!! I was thinking how wonderful it'd be if Devin was pregnant as it'd undoubtedly lead to some fluffy scenes with Jayden (when everything's back to normal, of course) and you wrote him to be pregnant! What an unfortunate time to find out that he's pregnant, though.
And how kind of you to inform your readers that he was not pregnant with Ashcroft's. It'd be quite a revenge, actually, in the way of 'You impregnate my son, Adam. Let's see how you like it if I do the same to yours.' Can we get a short snippet of when Jayden found that Adam's son was his mate, please?
Anyway, I think that this is a very entertaining chapter. You've explained how this whole kidnapping and torture have scarred Devin. I knew that you said that you couldn't see him cowering and breaking under all those torture, but surely there would be some adverse effects. It never occurred to me that the whole experience might harden him in a bad way.
So, did 'Chris' decided to be born as Ashcroft's son and to have the ability to 'soothe auras' so that he could 'clean' Ashcroft's tainted aura?
One thing that occurred to me while reading this story is that there's no Rest in Peace for those poor Aurora's souls. I mean, even when they're dead, they still have to decide who to have the fortune to be their parents, what ability they would have..which mean that they have to keep in touch with current news! Imagine that.
But then, if for whatever reason they're feeling pissed at their mates, they could delay their reincarnation for hundred of years and let their mates 'suffer'. Lol...It's another level to merely giving a cold shoulder to your husband! Are there women in Aurora? I know that there are women among the human, but how about among the Aurora's natives?
Hope that I didn't annoy you with all of my questions. Sorry if I did. T.T
Oh, as a Devin's fan I have this to say, how come Chris has all of these awesome abilities and the only thing that Devin good for is to be a demolition man?!

Chris annoys me, I want to shove his head into a wall and slam it there a few times until he actually pays attention to shit. Nothing sinks into that hard head of his. And my poor Devin, poor poor thing. Yay he's preggers!

wow that chapter was really good. Usually im not really into the ones that only concentrate on one character because it can get boring but this was great. Thanks for the summary of Chris' side story, dont think ill be reading it lol. Im glad that you've made Devin preggers to Jayden and not Ashcroft, that would be horrible. I hope that with Chris' help they find out where Devin is and give Ashcroft what he deserves.
Im hoping that Keran gets rescued too. Maybe he could find a nice mage to take care of him, maybe Master Alan.
Oh oh I live in Yorkshire, but i havnt noticed much magical action lately, but will be sure to let you know if i do. Jayden n gang need all the help they can get.
Im glad to hear about Flaming, and a sequel too, wow.
Dont panic if i dont review next chapt, im going away and dont kno if i will have acess to a comp till i get back. I will try n be strong tho. i may suffer from withdrawl systoms but ill be brave.
vic xxxxxxx

Heyy once again im annoying yoo with my comment yipee.
Ohh Devin is pregnant but its good that its not Victors *wipes forehead* Jayden better find him quick!! They need to take Kerian with them because they cant leave him there!! :'(
Ahh Chris is having twins Yayyy! And Taro is just soo cute XD is that y there is 2 fishes?? as in one is Taro and the other it Jiro?? and when Chris turned up thats y there was only one??
okay im a little bit hyper but still Yayy!!
Please please please update asap!!!
Love yoo
Edaj xx