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Nice twist to the story, but please do move it along. There's only so long Devin can be held captive before it gets boring.


Just sayin'

0.0 Wow scary Devin...I didn't think he had it in him to be honest.
x.x I'm sorry you're feeling sick, get better soon!
It was a good chapter!

So the Omega stronghold is located somewhere in Chile, my first thought was yuck!, they're hiding HERE!?! xDDD. I can understand Chris knowing nothing of my country (I love him a lot so I'll forgive him ^-^), but I'm feeling rather offended Master Benjamin knows so little about it, being an Earth expert and all... He must be talking about the Tropic of Capricorn instead of the Equator 'cause we're way south! (like, we're so southern there's a big chunk of the Antartic Pole that belongs to Chile). In Santiago, where I live, it's usual to have near freezing temps during the winter season but in the southern regions (where the Omega building is suposedly located) rains all around the year and snows pretty heavily in winter, specially in the glaciers area (for instance, San Rafael glacier). The climate is so harsh very few people live there, same with the desertic area in the northern regions (like desierto de Atacama), so it's very posible to hide around there *ends geographical rant xDDDD*.

While I've never liked Devin very much - and couldn't care less what happens to the high and mighty High Consort (so harsh!!! xDDD)-, I miss Jayden like mad!. I enjoy Chris POV very much, it's so refreshing to see him interacting with the so very formal Aurorans and hunky husband Adam, but that's no surprise 'cause I'm of the Flaming persuasion myself and love the paralel with the delightdul Dae.

Get well soon, dear! ^-^

I'm not huge on reviewing (mostly because I'm a lurker with review-phobia) but this chapter saved my life. I have midterms this week and next and I was in need of a good distraction, so thank you!

Wow, Devin is certainly a badass! Remind me to never get on his vicious side! Can't wait to see what else you have planned in the coming chapters! I am also ecstatic to see that Zachary has gotten what he deserves! Keep up the amazing work!

I'm happy because you update and you're alive (barely it seems).
Not the flu again?


But...........

(Drop on his knees, make teary eyes, crossed hands)
Please hooooo magnificent powerful Goddess Pesterme2, please, save my Devin.
I fear for his sanity.

I think that his mark fade because he lost hope and his good nature, he turn to the bad side.
I cry all this chappy. I want Zac-the-whore to be punished but not by Devin. No. If he do this he just go in the game Ashcroft play with him.

Please, hoooo my Great and all Powerful Goddess Pesterme2, please, don't let my Devin turn in a bad guy.

Gwengwel....who take out his teleported machine to the closet and teleporte chicken broth, box of tissues and all the med she can find to pesterme2.
Be better soon honey.

Oh thank goodness that its not ashcrofts... ick i realy hate him haha though... i wonder why the mark is fading.... and im starting to fear that he might be turning tainted like ashcroft because he truely believes his life is 'over' persay because he thinks that his mate is dead... i hope it all turns out right i really hope that ashcroft dies a slow painful death.

Poor Devin bettter get found soon, everyone sucks for not finding the poor thing sooner. I feel no compassion for Zackery either so let the little bitch die. I saw the twins thing coming chapters ago lol, finally Chris see's it too. I want to see Jayden again soon.

This chapter left me speechless. Devin playing wicked is so right, yet so wrong.

I don't feel good, I have withdrawal symptom.
My doctor say that the better thing that can help me it's a yummy chappy of one of my two favorites stories.
It's appear that my two favorites stories are Flamming and Aurora's Consort.
Help me!!!
Please!!!

mouhahaha!
Miss you, hope that you're late just because you have a busy life :)
Gwengwel