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Man, Devin's getting a little desperate and dark here, makes me wonder how well he'll be received back in Aurora when all of this is said and done! And that nightmare, seriously, very scary!!!!

Awesome work, I cannot wait to see what else you have planned!!!

>..< the suspence! please please keep updating your story is amazing!!

Gah, i wrote a really long review and then somehow lost it. Bloody computer!! Wel it went along the lines of Loved the chappie, Dark dev scared me a little and he really needs to be rescued soon. Hope Jayden understands about teh whole 'pretending to be Ashcrofts lover' because i can see some kind of misunderstanding coming up if Jayden sees them together.

I love that u used 'leery as hell' again, it always makes me chuckle for some reason xx

Well there was more but i cant remember it now so jus gonna say, am looking forward to the next chappie. xxxxxxxx

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo

I don't know quite how the who whole i'll go evil if i have evil intent goes, if its only killing or if it also includes just evil intent.

because doing that to zach would be EVIL
EVIL
HARMFUL purposful harming intent!! will his soul be hurt?????

cuz like I would def kick zachs slutty little ass backt o kingdom come too... but i don't have to worry about being reincarnated with a taineted soul o.O

i wonder who jayden's baby is reicaranating????

yaaaayy for chris.

*sneaks behind Pesterme2, looks around to see if anyone's watching and jumps on her caughting her unaware* eh eh eh gottchya!! ;P
I told u I would make an appearance here sooner or latter. I just wish u would've been better, I heard u sick? *huggles Pesterme and pets her hair* there, there girl friend! I know being sick sucks but u'll be better in no time, u'll see! ;)
so let's see what can I say on my 1st AC review...
the 1st time I read AC I read just a couple chapters (the 1st 5 I think) and I don't know y but it kinda annoyed me (well I do know y, Devin's character really, really annoyed me at the time XD), so I dropped it! but then u put out FitD and I loved it from the very 1st chapter so I tought to myself: "man, I really love the way she writtes! maybe I should give AC another chance!" and so I did... and I've been keepin' up with it till now. and every chapter I've read since just sucks me right into the story more and more! I can't tell u how many times I've caught myself laughing, crying or ranting at your characters as I read *sigh* my mom generally ends up coming to my room and asking if everything's OK! she probably thinks I'm loosin' it! lol
Once I got past Devin's whinny little bitch atitude I kinda fell in love with him! LOL ...and I just can't help but to laugh at Devin's, Chris' and Sarah's antics, they'r just so damn funny. Devin turned out to be quite the strong character when he finally decided to grow up and make a stand for himself instead of rellying in his friends support.
Chris is this really sweet guy with a libido the size of the world, and so sexy, sexual Adam is really the perfect match for him. and Sarah... well Sarah is a really cool chick when she wants to but she really needs to get a grip on herself, stop screwing around and decide once and for all if she wants to grow up and keep her man or not. kinda of like Devin did!
now... I've gotta say I've probably never despised a character more than I do Ashcroft... more than being the ultimate Auroran enemy and main bad guy, I think he's just this really annoying, childish, selfish, selfserving little prick!!! yeah he might hv suffered in the past, yeah he might hv lost what he considered to be his hole world the night his mate died. but contrary to the people on the Earth plane he knew!! he would be able to see him, hold him, love him again in the future! who knows, maybe if he hadn't done what he did he could've been together with his mate again soon after, and this hole tragedy wouldn't hv ever happen. he basically chose his own miserable destiny that night, and no one else is to blame for his downfall but himself. and like the spiteful, selfish and ignorant child he his he just keeps bringing others down with his misery... and that just pisses me off to no end!!!
well I just hope that, with the information Chris collected with his vision, Jayden and the others will be able to find Devin really soon. it's not fair that Devin has to fall from grace this way, even if he's doing it for love and the life of his unborn child it's just too heavy a price!
so don't make my boys suffer much longer, it's painful for the reader too! and just hurry up and punish the bad guys already! ;P
get better soon girl! *huggles Pesterme and gives her a jarr full of chocolate chips cookies* I know I said I would give it to u only if u were quick to update FitD, but since u r sick I figured it couldn't hurt to give it now nonetheless!! =3
quick updates r good for the soul and make your fans content! XD

It's a pain being sick. I hope you're going to be all better soon :)
This chapter was awesome. One can clearly see why Devin does what he does, to protect his unborn child. But what about Kieran? WHERE IS HE? I'm waiting in suspense for the next chapter, and if it takes a while again, don't worry. Your loyal fans will always be waiting, no matter how long it takes.
Actually, I wouldn't have had time to read until about this time even if you had updated same date as usual. My mom got back from the hospital, so I have to help carrying things since she isn't allowed to. She was near death a week ago, so it's a relief that my mom is healthy enough to be at home.
Also, I've had a lack of internet. Had the stupid idéa to change furniture between my room (got 2 rooms) and surprise surprise! No internet for my computer in the other room! It feels like Lady Luck has left me.

I don't think this chapter is bad -of course it is bad what is happening to him, it is really painful to read - but... it is very believeable. Why he is doing it and even that he feels physical atraction, after all what he is been through. I really hope you go for Devins rescue soon. I really don't want to see him destroyed beyond repair, i really fear for his mental healt at the moment. But he is strong, isn't he?
And i hope for Kieran. Is he still alive, will you rescue him too? PLS
I really donnot care for Zachary but i neither can see Devin kill him, but i wouldn't mind a real worse fate for him.
You see i am really thinking ahead of the story, but i will be good and patient.
Hope you will feel better soon.
Take care!

Awww hope yoo get better soon *hugs*
ohh i wonder how Devins going to get out of this one hmm...
they better move their asses and find him now! >.<
i knew it chris is having twins! yayy
aww poor Adam stressed out aww *hugs*
Edaj xx

oh i forgot ot add earlier in my review that i hope you get better and you should make sure its not the swine flu.... i hope you get better, being sick is not fun, i know i experienced it enough in my past

Awwww now I want to cry this chapter made me so horribly sad I mean I understand Devin's feelings and all but aw to have to stoop so far down from so far above it's just so sad. I'm thrilled that Chris knows about the twins and told the healer and I agree with him that he shouldn't tell his beloved for all those reasons and if Adam does get mad about it well then he should grow up and figure out why Chris would do that. I'm kinda wondering why Jaydon can't find his love though gotta admit and why Devin's mark would fade now even though Jaydon is still alive doesn't make to much sense to me. I mean I know that it's a good deal harder to sense each other on the earthen plane but still Jaydon should be able to sense him more I would figure. I see that Devin's human conditioning has come out with how it was pretty easy for him to lash at Zachary I kind of really thought that he had a bit more compassion then that I understand about his anger and hatred and fear for the baby but I would have thought that his conscience wouldn't make him enjoy it quite so much or get so much satisfaction from it. Obviously Ashcroft should have always had a stronger mate one who could give as much as he got to keep him in line then maybe he would not have turned out to be such a bastard. I am thrilled that Devin is pregnant though that is so awesome I am so excited lets hope the baby is as strong as its parents though it's going to need to be from the looks of it boy I really hope that Devin doesn't lose himself and become another Ashcroft creep. Thank you so much for updating and I really hope you are feeling better I know how you feel though I'm feeling kind of icky at this time myself with a slight sinus infection and it sucks. Hope you feel better and update reaallll soooon...