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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now i fear for my mental health ;p i nearly freaked out about the dream... So i didn't get it was a dream in the beginning and i thought all the time Ashcroft is playing with Devins mind to trick him into giving away about the baby. I really was scared.
But yeah, it was another great chapter full of tension and angst and i love it. Still i cann't wait for them rescuing Devin. I have hope that it is going to happen soon now. Yeah, let the fight begin...
And i really love your replies, there is only one thing better than a reply from you, thats a new chapter :)
But yeah, it was another great chapter full of tension and angst and i love it. Still i cann't wait for them rescuing Devin. I have hope that it is going to happen soon now. Yeah, let the fight begin...
And i really love your replies, there is only one thing better than a reply from you, thats a new chapter :)
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing! Really, the entire thing has been amazing. Have you any plans to publish it?
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I found this fic a few days ago and just finished reading it. I love it so much :)This might sound bad but even though Devin is going to be rescued (and I love Jayden and Devin as a couple) I love it when characters turn evil! haha. I know I'm probably the only one but I want Devin to go bad and stay with Victor even though hes done all those terrible things to him lol. I'm horrible. What ever happens is a win win situation for me I guess
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, its almost painful to read. I can jus imagine Jayden walkin in at teh total wrong moment.
'What if the baby was Ashcroft’s and not his? Not that it would make any difference to Jayden because a child was a child'
I absolutely love this. He doesnt even have to think about it, whether the child is his or Ashcroft's he is basically saying he will take care of it, he is more bothered about how Devin feels about it, i love him. xx
When ur writing do you have a plan for each chapter, like what you want to happen in that chappie. Do u plan the whole story first or jus have a loose plot and then take it where it wants to go. I think ur writing is awesome and would love to have some of ur talent. xxxxx
'What if the baby was Ashcroft’s and not his? Not that it would make any difference to Jayden because a child was a child'
I absolutely love this. He doesnt even have to think about it, whether the child is his or Ashcroft's he is basically saying he will take care of it, he is more bothered about how Devin feels about it, i love him. xx
When ur writing do you have a plan for each chapter, like what you want to happen in that chappie. Do u plan the whole story first or jus have a loose plot and then take it where it wants to go. I think ur writing is awesome and would love to have some of ur talent. xxxxx
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gobbled get well cookie and feeling great especially after reading this. Loved the update it was wonderfull I get now about Devin and the tainted stuff very original and interesting I love that I can't wait till Jayden and company save him at least physically and hopefully Devin isn't so far gone that Jayden and friends ect can
t save him emotionally poor sweet Devin he's strong though and a survivor and the baby should help him get back on even ground once his is and feels safe again. Zachary is gettin what he deserves I guess I just hate what it is doing to poor Devin it just taints him more and I hate that. I think you should let Zachary die and put him out of his misery but not by Devin's hands but by Jaydens with Devin watching that should actually help Devin a bit I also hope that they can kill ewwwww Ashcroft especially if he can't be saved but it would be nice if they could somehow purify him before his nest reincarnation and maybe give his partner some happiness I feel so bad for Kiren he doesn't deserve what he's been through I would rather never be reincarnated again rather than have to go back to a miserable life again and again. Miss Chris and Sarah though And I personnally hope that Adam kills Ashcroft if anyone deserves that honor it should be him and that both Devin and Jayden get to see him do it Mainly to put their minds at piece that this creep can no longer do this to someone again. Can't wait for the next update. Keep it up the story just gets more and more awesome thank you thank you thank you for sharing you are AWESOME.
t save him emotionally poor sweet Devin he's strong though and a survivor and the baby should help him get back on even ground once his is and feels safe again. Zachary is gettin what he deserves I guess I just hate what it is doing to poor Devin it just taints him more and I hate that. I think you should let Zachary die and put him out of his misery but not by Devin's hands but by Jaydens with Devin watching that should actually help Devin a bit I also hope that they can kill ewwwww Ashcroft especially if he can't be saved but it would be nice if they could somehow purify him before his nest reincarnation and maybe give his partner some happiness I feel so bad for Kiren he doesn't deserve what he's been through I would rather never be reincarnated again rather than have to go back to a miserable life again and again. Miss Chris and Sarah though And I personnally hope that Adam kills Ashcroft if anyone deserves that honor it should be him and that both Devin and Jayden get to see him do it Mainly to put their minds at piece that this creep can no longer do this to someone again. Can't wait for the next update. Keep it up the story just gets more and more awesome thank you thank you thank you for sharing you are AWESOME.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Devin is becoming less and less likable. =(
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am literally rocking back and forth on the spot and giggling gleefully. I can't quite determine what about this chapter made me fall off the deep end though.Odd, clearly a very good chapter. Alls I can say is 'HURRY JAYDEN!'. I hope he got the message x.x
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jayden and those men better hurry there asses up, poor Devin is going to totally lose himself. *cuddles Devin* It's okay Devin, you'll be okay soon.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing chapter, full of excitement and new info!. Talking about new info, it made me really sad (and worried...) to know why the mating mark is fading. Not only Devin but Jayden's present and future happiness is in danger!!!!. Victor and Kiran's past is dramatic enough to add the leading couple's misfortune. Zachary can't be more of a bitch than he already is, but he's totally trying!. So the little traitor knows Jayden's alive, I've been wondering about that. We'll see how he laughs when the king gets his hands on him!. The nightmare was scary, but to me Devin sexing up Victor is even scarier (and yuck!). I only hope Devin gets his subconscious's message in time to save his soul...
Sorry about my geographic bitching, I only realized later that it could've come across as rude so please forgive me!. People knows next to nothing about Chile (shame on them! xDDD) so we chileans are slighty sensitive about those issues, living in such a beautiful but unknown country...
I can't wait to see Jayden's blazing fury as he wipes the Omega out of the face of the Earth (and Aurora, of course), the most awaited meeting between him and his consort, and all the explaining Devin will have to do about his 'little indiscretion' with Ashcroft. I'm sure Jayden will be elated to see him, and to learn the baby is his, but some kind of punishment must be in order (from the naughty variety, if possible).
Sorry about my geographic bitching, I only realized later that it could've come across as rude so please forgive me!. People knows next to nothing about Chile (shame on them! xDDD) so we chileans are slighty sensitive about those issues, living in such a beautiful but unknown country...
I can't wait to see Jayden's blazing fury as he wipes the Omega out of the face of the Earth (and Aurora, of course), the most awaited meeting between him and his consort, and all the explaining Devin will have to do about his 'little indiscretion' with Ashcroft. I'm sure Jayden will be elated to see him, and to learn the baby is his, but some kind of punishment must be in order (from the naughty variety, if possible).
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cries* i feel so bad for jay and dev.... they dont deserve this. oh and too bad that slut whats his name... zachary? isnt a real person i'd strangle him myself lol. i hope they get to dev before his soul blackens and melt ashcroft's face off... litterally... *coughs* and yeah swine flu is really bad, i know someone who got it and started losing feeling in her legs and within like 30 mins to an hour she couldnt walk tho **thankfully** it wasnt perminate, but that could be because she was able to get the medicine for it. *hearts* cant wait for another update and i hope you're feeling better.