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Oh no! Wen u told me in a recent review that Jayden would prob forgive Devin being in a compromising position i stopped and thought about it again and reaslised, that it would prob be Devin who would be able to get over it and i was right. Gah, is there any way that he can be untainted? I need a happily ever after with Jay and Dev pleeeeeease. At least he didnt kill Victor for revenge, i think it was more for protection for his family so thats why his mark didnt totally fade.
Lookin forward to teh next chappie and i hope Dev and Jay make it all better xx

So... he's not completely tainted? Because at the last moment, he killed the man not because he hated him and wanted revenge but because he wanted to protect his family? I guess? Maybe you could clarify this in the next chapter? Thanks ^___^

Yay the bastard is dead. Devin is off his rocker the poor thing, Jayden could have been a little more understanding off his missing mate but hopefully he redeems himself later.

though, now i wonder if jayden will ever look at him again, i mean they wont know if the baby is actually jayden's until its borin? i can imagine the pain that jayden musta been in, catching his other half 'riding' their enemy, i hope that he isnt too harsh on him really... since dev really thought that he was dead, he didnt really think he had a choice which makes me sad :(

Wow... this was just... wow. Yes, it left me speechless.
Not all hope is lost! Yay! And Kiran is free from Ashcroft! Yay! The bastard is dead! Yay!
I'm jumping in joy here, can't wait for the next chapter! Dealing with Devin I hope. He needs some LOVE xD and Jayden will hopefully show him how much he cares. I should lay off the sugar soon, it is not good for me. I get too hyperactive.

Just finish reading the new chappy.
Don't know what to say for the moment.
I cry.
I going to wait a little and comment later.

Gwen

I feel so bad for Devin. Each new chapter I'm sitting here going come on, rescue him Jayden!! And now...erm, Jayden rescued him? And got to see him fucking his worst enemy. Joy. Hopefully things get better for them soon. But it really is Jayden's kid right? You're not going to throw another curveball at them later on and have it be Victor's? ::hides::

Yays, but noes...I am so conlicted about what to feel in reply to that x.x

I think that Devin is going to need some serious mental help after that. And I'm glad you didn't let him die.

Poor Jayden and Devin, to have to see that as the first greeting after missing each other for that long. T-T

Okay.
I forgive you for that chapter where Devin was all like " I am doing this for aurora, and my family" and NOT just for revenge.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
poor jayden to the max
like ouch, truly.

Kieran = <3 to the core. he tries so hard. I am happy he did not fail

OMG so now I want to comprehend this whole tainting thing a bit more. CAN HIS PHENOIX COME BACK cuz kirean was happy due to the fact that there remained a bit of red

OMG JAYDEN

I read that part, and though I knew it was going ot happen [ it just could, NOT have happened]
I think i went into shock. My whole chest froze. Wheny ou wrote that part [ or parts like that in general] do you get really empathetic? lIke when I write heartbreaking moments I tend to be crying as I write them. [ just a question]

YAY can't wait for chris and sarah. they will straighten / MEGA help devin out.

i wonder if he will go full crazy before they can bring him to normalcy again?

I honesty don't get why I can't post halft he time... lets try this again:
Okay.
I forgive you for that chapter where Devin was all like " I am doing this for aurora, and my family" and NOT just for revenge.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
poor jayden to the max
like ouch, truly.

Kieran = <3 to the core. he tries so hard. I am happy he did not fail

OMG so now I want to comprehend this whole tainting thing a bit more. CAN HIS PHENOIX COME BACK cuz kirean was happy due to the fact that there remained a bit of red

OMG JAYDEN

I read that part, and though I knew it was going ot happen [ it just could, NOT have happened]
I think i went into shock. My whole chest froze. Wheny ou wrote that part [ or parts like that in general] do you get really empathetic? lIke when I write heartbreaking moments I tend to be crying as I write them. [ just a question]

YAY can't wait for chris and sarah. they will straighten / MEGA help devin out.

i wonder if he will go full crazy before they can bring him to normalcy again?