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Jayden has redeemed himself. Chris is cold hearted, who wouldn't want to have a cute lil daddy. And Devin makes me want to bang my head into a wall lol.

That was an amazing chapter. It says a lot about you as a writer that you can still amaze this far in to a story. You should be paid for such excellent work, because I am sure it has to take a lot of time to be so good, unless of course your are that gifted which I wouldn't be surprised by at all.

The part where you compare Devin to the phoenix was perfect! Chris finally meeting Kiran face to face, was well done and you kept it exactly in character for Chris.

you hv cold feet? YAY YAY my diabolical plan for vengeance worked!! *grins viciously at Pesterme* what new torments should I devise to make you pay for all my tears? salt ain't all that cheap you know? and I gotta restock everytime I read AC lately, I cry so much! >:(
but you just wait, I'll so get you for that. you won't know what hit you! eheheh *starts laughing maniacly until sudenly it stops with a gurgling sound* dammit it *cough cough* I think I swallowed a fly *cough cough cough* it's ALL your fault Pesterme *says with a raspy voice and goes off running to the kitchen in search of some water while her last words linger in the air* I'll get *cough* you *hack* for thiiiiiiiiiiiiiis!
ps: and I should also mention I'm always lurking around your stories back and forth, forth and back so no worries just chat away! stalkerish much? =_= *sigh*
update soon XD

Wow, I loved this chapter. Poor, well, everyone! I can't wait to see how you resolve all of the problems.

Oh my, Jayden has got to be the most perfect man in the world..I love the constancy of his love for Devin! All of the 'I'll love him inspite of everything; you wanted to kill my unborn child, you slept with the enemy, you becoming tainted and are no longer the person that I fell in love with, is extremely romantic! I mean, of course, Devin was not to blame considering the circumstances, but the understanding that Jayden exhibited in this chapter is definitely outstanding. After all, what the mind knows might not agree with what the heart feels. He's definitely my favourite character. Now, if only I can find my own Jayden........ XD

Kiran must have been a very strong person to be so righteous even after being subjected to horrible treatment by his mate for such a long time. It's rather disheartening to think that someday in the future he'd have to deal with another 'cruel' mate when Ashcroft has been reborn.
I kind of pity Kiran. He must have been painfully disappointed to be rejected so by Chris. I understand that Chris needed time to process the fact that his birthfather was still alive, but somehow I can't see him having a father-child relationship with Kiran. Although Devin's relationship with Adam does not exactly fit the conventional father-son relations, I think that Chris would not know what to do with a parent, how to act and so on. Am I right in thinking that Devin views Adam more as a friend than a parent?

I have 1 question! If Devin were to become 'untainted', would his mark return to its previous form?
I can't wait to read more of Devin and Jayden's rocky path to happiness and future sweaty romps in the gloriously soft and big bed in the King's chamber.

I jumped around the house in joy when I saw the update. YAY! This chapter was so sad and heart-wrenching that I almost giggled. Yes, I'm weird like that, loving the really sad parts. Love will prevail! Or something like that.

I spent some hours before checking for updates reading the new book series I got interested in - Cirque du Freak by Darren Shan. I only have about 20 pages left now on book 3. Fortunately I found 4-6 on the school library. Unfortunately they don't have the rest of the series, so I have to either BUY the books (there's 13 of them by now I think) or go to the library in Gothenburg. And I need to make 2 trips if I want to loan the books, because I'm still not 18 and need to get my parents to sign a damned piece of paper... or just copy my dad's hand writing and forge the signature. I prefer the first option.

Kieran! Poor you! I'm suffering with you! Chris needs to understand how much you love him (as a father loves his son of course)

I'm feeling a bit like a drunken bear at the moment, so I should head to bed. 6 hours until I have to get up for school. Noooo

Oh, thats so sad. Poor Devin, poor Jayden, poor Keran. Gah i just want to cry now lol. xxxx

Poor Devin. Chris had better be able to help him get well *nudge, nudge, looks sternly at pesterme2* Make it happen, lady!

and voilá... once again you managed to make me cry. you'r sooooo mean!!! *sniff sniff* I'm gonna start charging you for all the cleanex's I'm going through! ;P
even tho he is now dead Victor Ashcroft will still be haunting them for way too long from behyond his grave... the sick bastard. and just to think that he may actually be reborn some day just makes me mad as hell! >:(
seeing Devin buried underneath all that pain, rage and despair is actually very painful. I'd rather prefer him to revert back to that annoying whinny little bitch persona he had in the begining! *depressed sigh* things are nowhere near fixed, and won't be for a long looong time.
I feel like crying again... see what you done to me?! you turned me into a crying little baby!! you better take responsability for that Pesterme. so hurry up and at least put Devin on his way to healling so I can start laughing at his antics again!
I also feel sorry for poor Kiran. even tho he tried to brush it off Chris's reaction to him gotta hv to hv teared him apart inside... after all his son is everything he has right now. tho I als understand Chris's behaviour... it's not easy to sudenly look at a stranger and just accept him to be his father, specially with Chris's background. *some more depressed sighing*
I need to go a chear up again... maybe I should go stuff my face with chocolate chip cookies. none for you tho you've been way too cruel with poor Devin, Jayden Chris and Adam lately!! I so wish for Victor to burn in hell!!!! aaarghhh! *kicks the cat in frustration and gets a scratched foot for her efforts* OUCH!!! sorry kitty! see what you done now Pesterme?! that's so your fault, now my kitty's mad at me! no treats for you for a long looong time coming! ;PPPP
update soon... and I want more FitD too!!! *goes to bed grumbling and sulks for the rest of the night*

You have no idea how happy I was to see this updated. I've been reading it since the beginning, but only registered recently to review.
Anyhow, this chapter was bathed in angst and amazingly well thought out and realistic. Between Chris and unconscious Devin, Chris and Kirian, Jayden and Adam, Jayden and Devin...and poor Devin! You've created an incredible sense of empathy for what he's going through and a sense of understanding for the decisions he's making because, honestly, how terribly hard would his whole catastro-fuck be to deal with?

Good luck on your next chapter and if you can't tell, I'm definitely looking forward to it. =)