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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah an update...a great update too...hope to read more soon
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update soon. I might die if I can't find out what happens now.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pesterme? PESTERME!!! WHERE R U?! *looks around frustrated but there's no sign of Pesterme* where could she hv disapeared to? I swear that if she's fooling around with Scott & Damien or Devin & Jayden somewhere without sharing with us I'm gonna trottle her! *goes away to bed sulking and grumbling under her breath* I miss her and her smexy stories *sniffles into her pillow*
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not dead!!!!! I survive the terrible AH1N1. Don't get this. Never. You want to die , it's horrible lolll.
How are you? Did you pass a good thanksgiving? Hope that everything go well for you.
I miss the fluffy stories, the man-o-man sex without angst. The storie's too much sad, horrible latelly, It's not a bad thing but I think that it's time that Devin and Jayven find their hapiness. Please be a good girl and let D and J be happily-ever-after. Jayden impress me in this chappy, he is so strong.I was not sure how he was to react, but wow, go my boy, help Devin.
Gwen
How are you? Did you pass a good thanksgiving? Hope that everything go well for you.
I miss the fluffy stories, the man-o-man sex without angst. The storie's too much sad, horrible latelly, It's not a bad thing but I think that it's time that Devin and Jayven find their hapiness. Please be a good girl and let D and J be happily-ever-after. Jayden impress me in this chappy, he is so strong.I was not sure how he was to react, but wow, go my boy, help Devin.
Gwen
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Falls over dead* Oh my Jesus I missed a LOT! That damn Victor, good thing he's dead now. I hope Devin realizes whats really happening and not the assumptions he's been making. That would be such a shame. Future chapters please be happier cause i was fighting back tears through the last few chapter. Looking forward to more.
Curiosity
Curiosity
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHew, thank goodness Victor isn't going to respawn as the crown prince. :-)
I'm falling in love with Kiran's character and I find myself wanting to see a lot more of him in future chapters. I'm a sap for tragic characters.
I'm falling in love with Kiran's character and I find myself wanting to see a lot more of him in future chapters. I'm a sap for tragic characters.
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yayyy im back!
hehe ive been ill so i couldnt do very much
i came on the computer and had to check AFF
came on and there was 2 updates so i was happy (yayy)
then i read them and they made me cry :'(
i want it to cheer up soon please?
Devin cannot go away! ><
Edaj x
hehe ive been ill so i couldnt do very much
i came on the computer and had to check AFF
came on and there was 2 updates so i was happy (yayy)
then i read them and they made me cry :'(
i want it to cheer up soon please?
Devin cannot go away! ><
Edaj x
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November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice phoenix metaphor for Devin! I only hope that he can truly get over all this so he and Jayden go thru life blaming themselves for what happened. And, it really is going to be a bit weird, I think, to think of Devin as he once was, but again, I really hope he's truly able to rise from the ashes and be a stronger person. Tho, now that i think about it, I remember that Devin has already gone through a somewhat similar ordeal with his foster brother way back when (another character who should get a comeuppance!) and he came out of that much stronger, so I believe that there is hope left.
Also, loved the line, "It was as if their mating marks were reflecting their grief by weeping bitter tears of blood for the agony that was ripping their souls apart," Ooo, very dramatic!
Oh, I forgot that Nathan had once worked for Omega; how did he not know that Ashcroft had Kiran? It seemed he 'flaunted' around quite a bit, so wouldn't Nathan have seen him at least once?
And I loved Chris' reaction to Devin's emotional state when he took his barrier down, OMG, that was very emphatic and dramatic! I really think that it might be one the best emotional parts of the story thus far (another one in this chapter was Devin's awakening)!
Ooo, we finally have our first hint as to what Chris, Taro and Jiro's souls have planned out... I do wonder how that's going to work tho...
Yay, Chris and Kiran are finally reunited, but oh no, angst, lol! Also, it was kind of odd having it right there as a part of a series of intense occurrences that happened in rapid succession but I suppose there was no real other solution for it because the sequence made sense anyway...
And again, Jayden's Phoenix energy source is really freaking cool! Now I think I know what really happened at Tunguska, LOL!
OMG, it becomes so clear to me now, the two fish in the stream are really Taro and Jiro, am I right???
And another OMG for the powerful ending...ergh, that scene of Devin's awakening, 'rejection' and emotional babblings was very intense and I want to say it's b/c of his emotional state after all that's happened, but what if he really thinks all that continuously??? Ergh! So dramatic and tragic ;__;
Well, here's hoping for another rising from the ashes, LOL!
Also, loved the line, "It was as if their mating marks were reflecting their grief by weeping bitter tears of blood for the agony that was ripping their souls apart," Ooo, very dramatic!
Oh, I forgot that Nathan had once worked for Omega; how did he not know that Ashcroft had Kiran? It seemed he 'flaunted' around quite a bit, so wouldn't Nathan have seen him at least once?
And I loved Chris' reaction to Devin's emotional state when he took his barrier down, OMG, that was very emphatic and dramatic! I really think that it might be one the best emotional parts of the story thus far (another one in this chapter was Devin's awakening)!
Ooo, we finally have our first hint as to what Chris, Taro and Jiro's souls have planned out... I do wonder how that's going to work tho...
Yay, Chris and Kiran are finally reunited, but oh no, angst, lol! Also, it was kind of odd having it right there as a part of a series of intense occurrences that happened in rapid succession but I suppose there was no real other solution for it because the sequence made sense anyway...
And again, Jayden's Phoenix energy source is really freaking cool! Now I think I know what really happened at Tunguska, LOL!
OMG, it becomes so clear to me now, the two fish in the stream are really Taro and Jiro, am I right???
And another OMG for the powerful ending...ergh, that scene of Devin's awakening, 'rejection' and emotional babblings was very intense and I want to say it's b/c of his emotional state after all that's happened, but what if he really thinks all that continuously??? Ergh! So dramatic and tragic ;__;
Well, here's hoping for another rising from the ashes, LOL!
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter!!! So much happening, you do justice to your characters!!!
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! i love this story i was so happy to see that you updated!! gods poor guys go through so much crap haha cant wait for the next update =]