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Devin is all broken and stubborn, the poor poor dear....even if he makes me want to bang my head against the wall. Sorry though but I was happy he yelled at Sarah, I never have liked her much and it made me mad the way she spoke to Devin like he should just snap out of it and be happy she was home.

This was way better than christmas xD Two chapter in 2 days. Devin is on his path to destruction! Oh noes! It's up to Jayden to stop him before all is lost. To be continued... yes, I'm damaged by spoiler-ending anime. I think Pokémon is the most to blame, even though I haven't watched it in almost 10 years.
I think I'm pretty slow on reading. Took me 1 hour this time, maybe a bit more... but I'm not complaining, it makes waiting for the next chapter more endurable :) and now I'm off to kill some braincells gaming until late tonight.

I need a tissues... saunters off to find one..
I get what Dev wants but like.. really.. he is being slightly selfish.. and not at the same time
POOR SARA like really I felt so sorry for her, and Dev was being a jackarse I think his most current mission should be to apologize to her
PRONTO

and then talk to chris..
THEN Jayden
so that everyone can be happy!

and the plot would not nearly as interesting *SIGH*

wonderful can't wait for the next one!

Sorry to hear about your dramatic life I completely understand there have been times I swore I was living in some twisted soap opera not of my own making but oh well you know it's just something you learn to deal with like it or not. Wow are these chapters of yours getting darker or what. Poor Devin is hovering on just this side of sanity whew I'm not even sure Chris's love Jaydon can save him or if Devin is even strong enough to allow himself to be saved we all know it's easier to give in to the bad and dark than to force yourself into the light and forgiveness of oneself and others and not every one can do it. And despite how loving, caring and strong Devin was and is obviously when he's been wronged he tends to hold a grudge and not be forgiving or forgetting what and who ever did the wrong or even just to let it go. In that area Chris far surpasses him he has a very forgiving and giving heart and soul which is probably why he has the abilities he has for when angered he could cause probably more damage than even Devin just by his manipulations of Auras. As for Jaydon god if someone ever needed to grow up it's him I figure he could be a great leader if he took it seriously and actually paid attention to his responsibilities I mean jeez if he doesn't stop looking for the safety of just sticking to the past then the whole auroran plane is literally doomed the past is not something you get answers from it is something to learn from so you try not to repeat mistakes but a leader must learn to accept changes in the future and act accordingly in our own history we know this or we should anyway that's why every country does not have the exact same rules and laws they started out with but some have been changed while others totally erased as being irrelevant and replaced with some that have been learned are needed usually because of some huge pain or heartache like wars, diseases, ect. God I am so sorry I'm on my stupid soap box again well I won't bore you anymore but I so do appreciate you updating your story and a few others are just what I need to take me out of my own chaos world and let me visit someone else's chaos for awhile without any repercussions on my part whew and boy do I need it. Thank you thank you thank you for your marvelous story it is fascinating and interesting and I still adore Devin and Chris there is just something about angsty, confused, tortured guys who are sensitive and yet so strong I love it.

Yay, update! :D Promise not to leave your readers hanging for that long, it's dangerous for addicts health. First I counted out about when you would update again, waited. Then I kept telling myself "well, it's holidays, busy on holidays, no time to write" and well... But I occupied myself with buying a whole series (The Saga of Darren Shan, 12 books) and I have about... 100 pages left. I should find a new hobby other than obsessive reading.

There's Devin-ness in the next chapter, right? I want more drama-ish moments, tears, joy, despair, bla bla bla, etc that come with Devin :D

Happy new year :)

I'm so glad you're back! I was hoping you just disappeared for holidays, nothing bad, but glad to hear everything's going well for you again. I enjoyed this chapter a lot - it's been so dark lately that we needed this nice break. Plus, now there's some hope for poor Devin!

Chris is a naught naught boy lol. I hope he can help Devin ;_:

It's great that you are back and with smut too!

I had the impression that Adam already suspected Chris was having twins. Didn't him and Alan plan on a special test to confrim their suspecions?

Yay, finally another chapter. And not too long after I asked about it on Fictionpress either!

Poor Adam he seemed so shell-shocked in this chapter. He really fell into the deep end of things didn't he.

And Chris is a vicious person, messing with Adam by pulling out that toy. I could almost imagine the lock on Adams face in my head. Hilarious.

Good chapter.

-crys- have you you left us to suffer and wither away please update im dieing here! x]