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I felt like Jayden got a little bit closer to Devin in this chapter, but it isn't easy for him when Devin tries to push himself away. Though I can see why Devin tries to also, however he tears himself up trying. If my best friend had read this story she would just have gotten pissed over the characters "stupidness" (she usually calls me when she thinks something has gone wrong in a book she has read, or when there's a twist in the anime she watches, and rants about it, how it should be if she could decide. It's kind of amusing to listen to.)

The last chapter was cut out from the one before? Wow. I think I would have died halfway, resurrected, then died again at the end if it had been whole.
No, I'm a slow reader, except when it's a textbook in school. Then I'm the fastest, but I can't guarantee I learned anything. I have a difficulty concentrating for long periods of time, and if I don't concentrate I will unconsciously skip lines. It's really annoying when I try to read something I like, since I have to go back and reread from where I know I was. Sometimes I have to do it twice. It's annoying, but all I can do is try to work it away by reading. And, I've done it again, jumped from one subject to another. Great.
Chapter for chapter you surprise me by unknown twists and turns. I don't think I would get enough of Aurora's Consort xD

You're right this one was just as sad. I can't help but feel for both of them. I hope Devin can come through this okay, maybe he should get some counselling to deal with it or something. I can't imagine he would appreciate the idea much, but it might help him in the long run. I can imagine the look on his face now XD. And Jayden receives my praise for a job well done ;)

Oh my god, what an amazing chapter! It is so impressive that you are not giving Devin an instant "cure". The last two chapers have been so good. By the way, sorry I didn't get to review last chapter, moving is a pain.

Okay frusterated through most of it but he did finally give in kind of. At least he said he loved him, that's a good step. Let's hope this fainting thing isn't anything serious though huh? One thing is for sure, tall handsome and kingly is stuck on a rollercoaster of emotional ups and downs right now, but he's holding up pretty well considering everything that's going on with his mate...

Aww I hope Devin and the baby will be ok.

*lets out an unhappy sigh* it's really heartbreaking to see Devin and Jayden so at odds with each other and so obviously suffering even though they're together again. specially because they were and still are so totally in love with each other. whatever dissatisfaction I had about Devin's character in the beginning I eventually learned to love this character so it breaks my heart seeing him so consumed by grief and guilt that he woun't even willingly accept Jayden's love and forgiveness. so sad indeed...
and when I think that were finally starting to reach the light at the end of the tunnel (so to speak) seeing as Devin gave in, apparently, to Jayden's love you come out with a potentially dangerous pregnancy... girl you've got a sadistic vein in you, don't you! lol

I can't tell you how great it was to find out you've updated again so soon. I really needed something to distract me from my current depressive mood, and at least for the little while it took me to read this chappy it worked... unfortunately I'm back to remembering my kitty, Ryuuki, is no longer with me... almost 24hrs of crying my eyes out, wonder when I'll stop...
so... I really need cheering up... any chance you might throw in a FitD chappy anytime soon too? that would be good

well, update soon hon, and enjoy your little 3yo clinginess and quirkyness (did I spell that right? o.O) while it lasts, last I heard they grow too fast. lol

This story is just amazing! Some of the longer stories just seem to drag on and on but you manage to keep a reader's interest very well. Can't wait for the next chapter!

YAY!!! you updated! twice!!! ^^
I really wanted to give you a big fat jiucy review but alas I'm pratically sleeptipping =_=
so... welcome back and as usual I'm loving your work!
update soon! ^^
*sleepwalks to the bed, under the covers, on top of the cat... doesn't feel the scratch cause is already dead to the world* lol

I almost cried when Devin broke down. I loved this chapter! You are an awesome writer! I look forward to what Devin will have to say with his mate. This is getting really really good. Keep it up!!XD

Yay, another chapter, just after I read the one you put up yesterday! Good luck on my behalf. That was a sad chapter though. x.x