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That was a very intense chapter. I can't believe how manipulative Devin is becoming. Watch out Jayden, I think Devin's after your crown.

Sorry i didnt comment on the last couple of chapters but by the time i had finally finished reading thm i had to go to bed or else i wouldnt get up in time for college. ive been meaning to come back on and write a comment but i kept on forgetting. sorries!! >.< would a cyper cookie help?? *hands cyper cookie*

This chapter made me cry :( i dont want Devin to leave jayden...Devin is so manipulative! but then again i like it lol :)) also the two fishes in chris' lil place could that be related to the twins?? good cliffhanger hope you update soon.

sorry for the very short comment my head hurts
Edaj xx

Oh my god, I hate you, you evil evil author for making me cry - repeatedly. -death glare-

That was so mean. I cried for both of them all chapter long, granted it's possibly got something to do with me not taking the happy meds too, but that was too horrible for words.

Please tell me that there will be SOME happiness in the future. I live on angst romance but the angst here is killing me.

I think... you just killed me. Or at least inflicted a fatal wound on my weak heart. Seriously, Devin and Jayden? A divorce? Those should never be in the same sentence! No, I refuse to accept this! Devin did not just do that. Nuh-uh. He did not just tear his, Jayden's and my hearts to pieces.

Oh, I don't think I can handle this. *weeps* This is too cruel, let me tell you. They were one of my favorite slash couples ever! Now I have to think them as my favorite slash individuals. See how that just doesn't fit?

I don't know which one I want to strangle the most. Jayden needs to get his head out of his ass and Devin deserves a good spanking for scheming behind Jayden's back like that. How much worse can life get for those two? Well, one of them could die, but we all know that is not going to happen. Right?

I'm kinda worried of what's gonna happen next. Please tell me you are going to fix this mess! There is no hope for anyone if Jayden and Devin can't work through their problems.

Anyway, I'm gonna shut up now. Happy writing to you! ^^,

I'm reminded of a saying from the manga King of Hell, "When something is inflexible it is bound to break. No matter how strong it seems, it is doomed to crumble." I think that fits very well here.

Poor Dev, he's been exposed to the reality of the Omega cult and now he's on the war path. Now he's whispering all the insecurities that everyone probably already has in their minds, but don't have the guts to say themselves.

THE END OF THE CHAPTER WAS JUST TOO SAD!
It feels like Devin is very confused about what he wants to do, what his goal is... revenge is not the right path to take! Revenge only brings more strife and anger, which leads to someone else taking their revenge on you. It's a never-ending circle of hate, anger and despair. And by me being extra philosophical it means I have played way too much games yet again. Bought myself a PS2, and 4 games, so I've been busy.
I don't remember all things in this chapter, since I started this morning before work, read half of it then and half of it when I felt relaxed again... I hate work experience thing, I want to quit now, but my parents will get mad at me. My teacher will probably get a bit disappointed too. I'm going to try to get out of it by the end of the week, since I'm in no means ready for this torturous thing. I have to sit on a bus for 1 hour before getting there! I have to socialize with completely unknown strangers who look down on me because I'm female and a nervous wreck!

Wow. Poor Jayden. :/
I guess he wasn't taking Devin seriously.

Ok this is the worst chapter for my fav couple. I'm sorry but Devin is soo far gone its not funny. I feel really bad for Jayden because its seems like he got ganged up on and lost the fight. And for Devin to not only get a new trainer, have his god father go against him,and then have Devin "divorce" him is just sad!!! Jayden just cant win..I'm not even sure jayden wil take Devin back after he snaps out of it.And then whats with Adam?

damn..............just...damn!
this chapter had me completely hoocked, you know. things finally started moving from that kinda of a stand still they had fallen into after Devin's rescue, and it just feels like a sleeping volcano has just woken up. emotions are spinning out of crontrol, confrontations are raging aroung, and when Devin finally made the decision to lawfully divorce Jayden and entered the room to go through with it I honestly felt like I had a ton of butterflies fluttering around in my stomach trying to get out! not a pleasant feeling, mind u! lol
and then of course I ended up the chapter in tears as well! seeing as it is so hard to make me cry and all... NOT!
I can't believe Devin actually went to such extremes to attain his revenge, even taking into consideration that he's also vying (I think I spelled that wrong but I too lazy to go and find my dictionary) to protect his loved ones and Aurora.
this will most likely lead to an open out political war between Jayden and his followers and Devin and his supporters. it will not be pretty and I'll probably end a lot more chapters in teary faction... I'm definitely gonna start charging you with the hanckies (mispeled again?)!

ps: you're planning out a vampire story? sounds yummy! but the again everything you write tends to sound yummy! I'v been totally addicted to vampire stories since I first read Christopher Pike's The Last Vampire when I was like 10yo or so! XD
and please oh please end my FitD drying spell!!! I miss reading about Dae and Scott sooooo much!
and since you now hv an LJ I'm gonna act on your name and start pestering you there too!!! aren't you just looking forward to it!?!?!? lol

update soon! ^^

AMAZING! Poor Devin and Jayden though...things are just getting so bleak! Great work as always!