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and the veils Devin smothered his counscience with finally start unravelling themselves... he's in for a very rude, very unpleasant awakening indeed. but then again he sure deserves it. he's got no one to blame for his current predicament and heartbreak but himself; he made the bed and he'll be the one laying in it!
let's just hope nothing bad happens to the baby.
and speaking of babies how much longer till Chris gives birth to the twins? I'm curious to meet the little guys! ^^
not to mention it will only lighten up the very depressing lives of their expecting family and friends.

do you hv an idea of how many more chapters till AC's conclusion? it must be really near... I got ambivalent feelings towards Aurora's Consort, for one I've learned to really like this story and it's characters and will be really glad but kinda sad when it's finished, but for other I will actually be relieved it's ended! confused? lol it's just AC is probably one of the sadest stories I've read, and it leaves me in kinda of a heavy mood than can be quite depressing... but alas, I love it nonetheless so it's complicated! it's kinda like a boyfriend you love to hate! you can't quite stand him but can't live without him? but maybe I'm just being my usual dificult self... probably... oh boy I'm rambling. lol

anyway... Miyamoto Kano hmmmm... yummy. that's about it. her mangas are just damn yummy. like your stories! and dextrousleftie's! I just love her stories too, they'r so damn entertaining, not to mention cute and hot at the same time! XD

update soon!

Oh no. You didn't... oh yes you did. You left us with a cliffhanger! That's just evil!
I'm glad Devin finally begins to see what he was on his way to become. And he does deserve Jayden being extremely cold towards him, but deep inside I hope for their reunion to be happy and fluffy (like a and-they-all-lived-happily-ever-after fairytale). I don't think Jayden will be as quick to forgive him though... if I were Jayden, I would make Devin work hard to regain the love he crushed, stomped on, lit on fire and threw in the recycling bin. Love can be recycled, right?

No, I'm not out of it. I force myself out of bed each morning just to go to the damned place (it's a sewage treatment works! Actually, it doesn't smell all too bad). But I'm starting to have a bit fun now. I almost screamed "NO!" when the one I work with the most tried to get me to try their program for the machines. It's way too hard for me to understand fully, just too many options and too much to make a grave mistake with. At least I only have 4 days left :D working children hours too (8.00-14.00, 2 hours of that are coffee/lunch breaks), so really, I'm not complaining all too much anymore. Now I instead argue a lot with my mom, and got into a huge fight with my best friend I don't intend to back down from. I've brought forward the same issue in our last fights, which she made ME apologize for bringing up and getting angry with her.

I hope you have a better time than me in life xD and I'm going to wait like a faithful dog for the next chapter, since you so lovingly left all of your readers with an awesome cliffhanger. It was building up suspense, just more and more, then there came... a calm ending to the chapter. THAT IS THE MOST POWERFUL CLIFFHANGER EVER.

Yay, poor Devin I'm so glad he's getting better, and I take back hating you for making me cry now. I have Pester love again. I'm so happy that Devin is finally dealing with all his issues and coming to his senses. It's about time. I only hope that Jayden will forgive him, at least a little. I can't take any more Devin angst. Devin should just seduce Jayden and get the whole thing over with, then Jayden will remember what it was that he loved about Devin XD. I'll be sitting at my computer pushing refresh until the next update now. Don't take too long, even if I don't need to sleep, or go anywhere.

awesome, incredible, I can hardly wait for more!

So emotionally intense!!! Absolutely LOVED it!!!

Great to see another chapter...poor Jayden. Hope Devin snaps out of it soon.

That’s sad that ch 44 had so little reviews! I think it was just because it was a bit of an “odd” chapter...it wasn’t bad, just odd and I think that might have simply been b/c of its placement. It was because it was about the emotional angst of Jayden, a character that hasn’t really been focused on all that much and then the first real glimpse into his past we get (from what I can recall) is his struggle with guilt towards his birthfather’s death while the last chapter he was angsting over Devin. It was just kind of an abrupt detour from Devin’s intense angst to Jayden’s which didn’t seem all that important because we find out that his birthfather’s death wasn’t part of a major plot by the Omega but merely on the whim of a rogue, which was meaningful, I have to give it that b/c it did show that Ashcroft wasn’t the mastermind behind everything evil in the Omega (I guess…). Also, it was important to know what was causing Jayden’s major self-doubt issues and it was also critical that Jayden unloaded a lot of his struggles to someone and it was nice seeing some more depth to Master Alan and even Jayden’s parents. Although I guess you do have to detour every once in awhile b/c you do have a lot of different subplots going on, most of which I keep forgetting about, lol! I don’t think it was a bad chapter, just perhaps a misplaced tangent (yay for smart-sounding words, lol!). Anyway, I do hope that this rambling has been at least somewhat helpful :)

As for ch 45… Yes, you should run away! O.M.G… seriously, I can’t believe it really came to that… I think I may have cried more in this chapter than any of the others, it was almost TOO intense! Seriously, tho how much more destructive is Devin gonna get? OMG, I hope this gets resolved at least relatively soon! I’m not sure which was worse, worrying over Devin being in the clutches of the Omega, or worrying over how Devin is dealing with its aftermath! OMG, it was so hard to watch Devin do that to Jay saying that even Adam felt he was an incompetent leader, that was heartless but tactful. And seriously…that scene where Devin tries to convince Jay to become offensive in the war and say he’ll stay give everything to Jay for only that but Jay says “I can’t give you that”… O.M.G. saddest fucking scene ever (ergh, dammit Jayden you were supposed to say ‘OK’!!!! )… until the “breakup scene”… I can’t say anything about that, I’m still too wrapped up in it, lol, but seriously, a Kleenex moment!

Still, I can’t help but think nobody is really actively trying to help Devin (except Chris, who is mostly out of action anyway); they seem to be very easily persuaded by his tactics even though they know he’s mentally unstable. I do suppose they’re afraid he’ll break under any amount of pressure, but I still think everyone is taking too much to heart what he says (especially Jayden, which is understandable to a degree, tho he should be a bit more resolute after his conversation w/ Alan, which I suppose he is when he won’t budge on the Offensive/Defensive argument, ERGH, Jayden you good-natured idiot! Srsly one of those characters that is so hard to be angry at despite the shit he does…).

But Devin’s deal with rounding up the former Omega slaves and housing them in a “school” was very, very creepy! OMG, I seriously couldn’t believe it…well I could given his mental state, tho I often can’t tell what to make of him, sometimes he seems better and others he’s still dastardly…I guess he’s only ‘better’ towards the people he loves deeply. And, Goddammit Devin you piss me off! How could you think about divorcing Jayden and just adding to all the shit piled on top of him and yourself; ergh! I don’t think he realizes that many of his actions are going to make things a helluva lot worse than better, although it is glaringly obvious that Jayden needs to take a stand and change the laws and become more offensive than simply defensive in the war. Just…Bah! (Yep I said it and I’d say it again if I had to, lol!) I suppose that was another point in the reveal of how Jay’s birthfather died, so that if Aurora had taken the offensive they would have been more alert for tainted souls reborn into their world, I guess?

Oh, and a livejournal, spiffy!

OMG I can’t wait for the next chapter, I need some closure and hope!!! I guess there’s always some hope sprinkled in between Devin and Jayden’s angsting but then, BAM!, something totally unexpected happens, makes me cry and lash out and then write long reviews in which I attempt to find solace and closure in ranting…hmm maybe I’m taking it all a little TOO seriously, LOL! Anyway, loved it, keep up the great work!!!

I feel a lot of all that didn’t make much sense…

Wah~ I missed your update! Chapter 44. Jayden is such a cutie pie when he was little! -squeaks- Adorable! Oh you're so good with building character in all the characters of your story, I'm still insanely jealous. :3 Now onto chapter 45!

Chapter 45. ROAR! Woot! Now this chapter, so far, is one of the best as a pinnacle of your story so far. Marvelously written and the whole chapter ooze hurt and betrayal...... I can't wait for the next chapter! Great work!

So not the thing I should have been reading at 4 a.m. when I can't sleep and my defenses are low. Now I have a headache on top of my sleeplessness. Well, Devin may have gotten what he wanted, but at too high a cost. While I can understand his motivations, I still think he's an utter fool. Sorry, darling, but I'm not going to rush to read the next chapter of this. It's not that its bad - on the contrary, its just a little too good at ripping your heart out. You know me, not an angsty sort of person at all. If I get too invested in the characters, and they start acting like idiots, its just too hard for me to take. And no offense, but I want to seriously kick Adam's ass right now. I know he has a point about Jayden, but he can be such a jerk sometimes. So I'll be stepping away from this for awhile, and go back to catching up on your more light-hearted fare. Although I may not get any more reading done at AFF at all until I can filter out this piss yellow color scheme they've come up with. That is contributing to my headache bit time. It makes my eyes hurt just ot look at it.