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*sigh*

*double sigh*

*scratches her forehead in contemplation*

*sighs again*

ok that does it... can I start bashing some heads around?! cause really I thing that might help some people around here *gives Devin and Jayden a meaningful look* to see things in the right perspective! I know things hvn't been easy for them lately and there's been some mistakes made and feelings got hurt but why the hell do they hv to keep making it worse?! even if they don't intend to do so, to me it just seems that every decision either of them has made in the last chapters has made things go down hill faster. is it just me? is my perspective too jaded now that I keep seeing things as worse than they are? I'm not so sure about that...
but I am feeling thoroughly annoyed with Dev and King yummy right now *hmmmpf*

and Chris... come on little twink give poor Kiran a cracker for the effort, he has been trying not to crowd you but it hurts when someone you hold dear to your heart ignores you and basically runs away everytime you even walk by. give the poor guy a chance!
tho I would'v liked to see Kiran's face while Chris just went on describing about his and Adam's first very err... emotional encounter? he he he and i would like even better to see how he'll face Adam after being made aquainted with all the little details of it too XD

update soon

Hello. I'm a new reader. And you've got me hooked! So, that's why, I'm sorry for only dropping you a review now (when I'm done reading chapter 10 and half way through 11... guilt got me to stop my reading halfway and give a measly review).
But! Please listen to my excuse, you know, how it is, when one finds a super duper story and got hooked on it, there's no time to stop for nothing! you just keep on reading till you hit a wall. yeah XD

anyway. I had to stop and review. to scold Devin. How dare he leave Chris behind and just go! Surely surely he can't be THAT much of an asshole? Just because your hormones go crazy and your sky is falling, does that give you the right to make your friends' sky fall too? Sheesh, so selfish. and it's not like King Jayden had forbidden him to return to earth. All Jayden wanted was for his training to be complete before he heads back there. SURELY HE COULD HAVE WAITED!
for a guy in his mid-20ies, he sure is.... very... immature. *Shakes head* I'm younger than he is and I think I have more brain. (sorry for bashing your character, but he just made me so angry!!!)
And then Adam goes and blows up infront of Chris. And NOBODY KNOWS ABOUT CHRIS's DARK PAST!!! This is bad bad bad.... I really do hope, when I read on later, that the truth gets out of Chris and at least SOMEONE (on the good side) finds out more about his past... *sighs*

okay, I'm going to go back reading!
chao! ;)

-nekoii

review for chap 12.

well.... THAT went well didn't it? ^___^
Who knew that both Jayden and Devin could be so calm upon meeting once again on this foreign land called earth. =D
Perhaps pornographic dreams starring said two main characters, coupled along with the coiled up release calmed them down enough to talk like peaceful people. ^___^

oh and somehow, I imagine Sarah as a mother like figure towards Chris. I hope Chris and Sarah can meet again someday~

*goes off to read again*

review for chap 13

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! THEY FOUND DEVIN!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!

review for chap 14

OMG!!! SARAH! OMG DEVIN! OMG THEY BOTH JUST NEARLY GOT RAPED?! OMG! DEVIN BLEW UP! OMG! WHAT THE FUCKING HELL!?

OMG!! THEY WERREEE RESCURED?!!??!?

YAY!!!! 8D

chap 15

god.... this one was a tear jerker...

AND THAT B-LEEEP- ESCAPEd?!?!??! GAAAAAAAAAAHH NOOOOOOOOO!!! *agony*

and I'm sorry for lack of reaction to a "WOW WHOAH BAM SLAM GRAH SOBS ITSMYFAULT OMGWTF" chapter, but I've gotta run off and catch some shut eye else I'll be dead tml.

*hugs* Shall bug your story with reviews later!

Good morning =)

review for chap 16

*sighs* Just as things were getting all Warm and Fuzzy Feeling, fluffeh, this DEvin just had to go freak out again huh. What's wrong with men having babies dude. It's not like you're suddenly gonna grow boobs and a vagina for gawds sake *rolls eyes* You'd damn KNOW it if you have a damn vagina suddenly dude~~~~~
But hm yeah... It's his freaking out character that makes him soooo, endearing... ^_^

But yay! Devin now likes having physical magical contact with big red! That's a start! It shall progress!!! WHOOTS!

*zooms off to the next chapiter~*

- nekoii ^w^

review for chap 17

oh dear me... its getting harder and harder to reel himself in isn't it... i wouldn't have a clue as to how he really feels right now... only an imagination.
and it's beginning to make me think that, the moment Devin gives the slightest inclination that he's ready, Jayden might jump... Jump, dash, rawr, attack, and totally and utterly consume Devin whole in one huge gulp.
Then consume Devin again and again and again and OHMYGOD THAT BETTER NOT HAPPEN!!!! D=

Don't they have some sorta restriction spell to put on Jayden. This is dangerous! Abunai desu yoooooooo (X...X)
*sighs*

By the way... is Chris pregnant? o_O"
Because the moody-ness, is probably a... sign?
*shrugs* guess I'll find out sooner no later ;)

*goes back to reading*

- nekoii

review for chap 18

.... oh dear god... is zachary part of the bad group somehow? i have a feeling... that it's like this.
zach goes in and seduces the king, and ensures Devin see's them. so Devin's now in an emotional state. Then, that old man from the council who's been staring at Chris will swoop in and kidnapp Devin and ship him off back to Ashcroft. Yes? No?
OMG!!!!!

bye im going to continue reading now.

- nekoii

review for chap 19



sometimes i dont understand the name of your chapters... what was that 'achilles heel' about? no link? i dun get the link...?

and the fork in the road?
what fork in the road? how about a fork spearing the sausage. or what was the phrase again.
"playing, hide the sausage" ? gods... i can't get over that one.

They finnally... FINALLY Played that game eh... XD gosh! finally! >w< yattaaaaa~~~


- nekoii