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review for half of chap 29

you know what...

Devin
Chris
Sarah

they are what I'd call. fresh young minds in an old musty society.
oh lets not forget that they're american's to boot. they are from people of earth, who have always believed in the freedom of speech. they are the people who have embraced so many different customs and races and religions and manage to live together in some-what-harmony.

And this Aurora. they've had their rules and stuff. and not to mention that the people holding said position, inherited said position, when in actual fact that there ARE people out there who would definately be able to do a better job. And ESPECIALLY the bastards in the Genesis Council. Julius for starters, give you such a divine example of how such people can actully be pure bastards with not much brain, since they have been BRAINWASHED into 'protect Aurora at all costs' mood for a few ceturies, they will start to forget morals and ethics in the process....

I think im ranting.

Anyway, to quote from Devin himself, "I think it’s disgusting to place so much power in the hands of people just because they were born to privilege. They should be chosen based on merit and character." Ditto and Yes sir!

(to be continued)

review for the rest of chap 29

O_O Whoaaa momma... hey hey... from what alan said. he said "children" did he mean Jiro and Devin or did he know that there would be another child after Jiro?
Or is it possible for there to be twins born? Non identical twins. One Jiro, one Taro. Is Taro comming later? Maybe Adam will get pregnant XD

but whoa...
STUPID CHRIS! your kid told you to NOT GO INTO THE WATER DAMNIT! aaaaaaaaaahhhh... such is the turn of the events... a stupid slip... *headwall*
This is sooo fantastic. And plus that, they can put a power bind on Chris since he's pregnant. This is wonderful.
What the hell if going to happen. What in the world can Nathan do?

let's find out ^_^

- nekoii

review for chap 30

who's kiran manchester? i dont recall his name before... *frowns* have i forgotten...?

and wow! 2 months?! it's only been around 2 months?! since they start of the story!
that's a bloody hell short amount of time!

I think Chris is the one in this story that's havng it the hardest! *hugs Chris* you poor angel....

and then the whole mind blowing thing happened in the great hall. and again my mind is blown away at the lengths of detail you go through to describe the joint meeting.

and then DEVIN ENTERS !!! *cheers* and the crowd goes wild!!! *cheers*
Go Devin GO!

and i can't help but notice that Devin just called his father "High-Consort Adam" *LOLS!*

and YEAH MAN!!!

DEVIN ROCKS!!!

WHOOOOTTSS!! GO DEVIN!!!


ok lets move on now~

- nekoii

review for chap 31

Ahah! that twins there shall be! yes?
I predicted it yet again! XD

Taro is in there somewhere yea? and Jiro too ofcause. *shrugs* we'll know soo enough.


and Devin's hitting off with the council men quickly XD

and are Jayden and Devin just hormonal or what?
why in the world do those two get into fights so easily? then they go fucking on the living room floor! hormonal! which one of them is gonna get pregnant. DEVIN definitely! XD

and whaaaaaaaaat were you thinking. Devin knocking himself up. Preposterous! XD
But Jay using dev's cum as lube... gosh... isn't that hot? *fan's self*
its kinky yea? XDDD hahahhaha!!!

kay imma sleep again now.

and im sorry again. im literally spammin you day and night. Im marathon-ing this story day and night, my mind's filled with it when im not reading it even.
O_O

-nekoii

Another great chpater. Does this mean that we are finally headed back into happiness? Please say it is so. Only a few more weeks for the babies! I can't wait to see how you write that one.

Good evening, I'm back from work!

review for chap 21

before I continue... I hope you don't mind my onslaught of reviews D=
I wonder if you have reviews on email alert. Then I'm probably spamming your inbox too.
IM SO SORRY (for spamming you) but I'm not sorry for leaving you review hits ;)

ok onward!
omg... I love Chris! He's such a charming, SHARP TONGUED BLUNT adorable little puppy. Makes you want to go "aaaaaawww shooo kyuuutee," the grab him up and swing him around, violently. *evil grin*

XD *sighs* things are all so calm now actually. And I'm really really, hmmmm, impressed. Impressed that King Jayden has taken ALOT of safety measures. And Impressed that you'd actually include that as a part of this chapters (instead of givign just a short summary saying, 'safety measures are being taken care of' the end.) You actually went though the trouble of thinking out all the little nitty details...
You're a 'Sarah' arn't you? XD

And why!??!?!? WHY IS DEVIN NOT WEARING HIS VEST ANYMORE!!! *sobs* sad!!! I want the WHOLE ASSEMBLY to see those hickeys!!! I want Zachary to see it too! (but somehow, i feel a bit sad for Zachary too. I hope he doesn't go bad, just coz he was dumped.) *hugs zach, and runs away*

okay! next chap! (I'm catching up >w<)

- nekoii

review for chap 22

"HARSH TRUTHS" i saw this and "LE GASPS"
O_____O !!!

oh dear.... the dreadful feeling sinks in.

and then.. you totally blow my mind with your explanation of the male pregnancy factor of this story.

WHOA.

there's no way that there's a better explanation than that! (of cause there's the magic mumbo jumbo) but whoa! Awesome man!
All that sience chim-ology~

and then AND THEN. we have devin and jayden again...
*sighs* such a silly thing to waste days over when in the end, all devin needed was for daddy to knock some sense into him. devin devin...


ok. next chap!


- nekoii

*groans* I can't go back to sleep. my idiot laptop's an idiot, all the trial software's on it has expired, and it's crashing onto itself...

review for chap 23

... you know what?

"What a sappy chapter" is what i'd like to say but then it quickly changed to "THAT JULIUS BASTARD!!!!!!!!"

Don't tell me it was him all along!!!!? Snarky piece of sewage shit! I'd like to toss him in the incinerator for a few hundred billion years! ARGH!
before this, there was some bad thoughts floating in my head about Chris and Chris being pregnant.
Like some how, he'd get kidnapped by his father, then because no mage on that side would help him the baby would burst forth out of his body! *cringes* GAH!
Or that he'd be kidnapped and forced to have a miscarriage. GAH!
All the bad possibilities happening to Chris all link back to Omega and their leader. This impending feeling of DOOOOOM is looming overhead! GAH! CHRIS! STAY SAFE!!!!


- nekoii

review for chap 24

....... YAY!!! JONAS!!!!! ^_______^~!!!!

my fears from earlier have quelled a little.

- nekoii

review for chapter 20

ha. ha. ha....

I KNEW IT!!!!!! *jumps for joy* ha! hah! He was pregnant!!! CHRIS IS PREGNANT!!! Yes I knew it! *pumps fists in the air*
and I feel sooo happy with myself that I predicted this outcome a few chapters earlier *big grin* =D
Yaaaaaaaaaaaayy~~~ someone congratulate meeee.... ^_____^

Yay~~~~
Yaaaayy!!! this is sooo odd. A thought just crossed my mind, about what Chris might be thinking.
Here I am, feeling like crap, puking my guts out, and my husband is smiling the brightest smile I have ever seen

LOL! XD Sarah knew all along didn't she. That girl. she's got a woman's intuition alright! and it's on hyper mode! This day should be commemorated! Devin got laid, Chris got pregnant. What else is gonna happen huh?
Yay~~~

and omg. I find it rather amazing that Devin is up and about and running around the palace after he just got consumed by Jayden twice. TWICE! hot smexy bathroom sex! omg O_O! HE dun feel no pain? miracle virgin he is! *gasps*

hehe~
I hope more information on, male pregnancy will be revealed later. I look forward with great interest as to how authors describe their own ideas of Male pregnancy. It is of my great interest, and considerable research material for my own stories (just research, don't worry. I'm no theif D= )

But yyaaay!!! *hugs* this was a fabulous chapter!!! YAY!!!!!
I can got to my part-time job happy now ^___^

catch ya laters ;)


-nekoii