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hi, i was wondering if u were planning on continuing this?

Hey, I can't wait to see what happens next.
So update soon?
Xx

Um!!! What can I say, well worth the wait. That was the hottest most sexest scene to read and imagine. Thanking You happily!!

Hot.... I guess my mind is still somewhere else. ^^

Love the story, can't wait for the next update. I love and adore Sonia,Derrick,Katrina,Rick and Bobby and I love how protected of Sonia everyone is , still a little iffy about Derrick and Chelsea is differently a major problem.

I like your storyline so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
You might want to take a look at your grammar though (you're vs. your, too vs to and some sentences are a little jumbled), that might make it a little easier to read.
But as a whole; good story! :)

I can't help myself, I'm still not trusting Derrick. It seems the only thing he wants from Sonya is Sex. But then there are moments where he seems to really love her.... Please update soon. :)

Hi there. I must say that I am thoroughly enjoying your story! Very suspenseful! Keep up the great work! One suggestion though. Your spelling and grammar could use a bit of a cleaning up. I noticed a few scattered words that were either missing or misspelled enough to cause a bit of confusion in the sentence. I'd be glad to proof read for you if you like, but it is entirely up to you! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Oh, and I think you're doing a brilliant job in showing perspectives from both sides. I would suggest keeping a fair balance between the two, but so far you're doing an amazing job!

Geyegeroffe

I just read your first chapter and I really enjoy it so far. I've noticed though that you're a little mixed up when it comes to comma usage. Maybe in your free time you and/or a friend can comb over the punctuation. I hope this helps. :)

Now update as soon as you can, because I'm going to have this whole thing read in about twenty minutes. :P

Yay another update!!!
Sadly no smut. ;)
I'm glad that Derricks Friends will protect Sonia, too. I think Chelsea will cause some problems in the near future. Very prommising.
Keep the good work up. I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter.