rate_review Reviews

I really like this whole new story. All the characters are great. King Derek is very interesting. I would love to know what he did to lose his heart. I hope Yuki can help him to find it again. If Derek keeps hurting people, he will not have any friends left. He and Yuki made a little progress and now they are at odds again. I do enjoy seeing them together and I am enjoying watching Alex and Darien fall in love with each other. I wonder what Yuki will be able to do to get Derek to treat him better?

Your story improve with each chapter, the last one is much better than the first in the first story. Continue, want to know what going to happen to Yuki (poor honey) and Alex.
They are one point, sorry, that annoy me, really.... you always speaks like Sakura (or Percy) he's a mother...hum...no! Maybe he can get pregnant but it's a MAN, he don't have tits and vagina, he can't be a mother. Yuki has two dad, or if you prefer one daddy ( Sakura ) and one father ( Kei ).
It's a male-male story that you write loll !!!
Why people always refer to the life-giving as a female?? It's a Mpreg!!! Not preg! Write male-female story if it's what you want to talk about!!

Sorry if I look bad or rash but when I read a slash story I expect to read about two men!
Gwen
P.s. sorry for my faults, english pretty new for me

Derek and Yuki are so fun to observe. The two fo them are warming up to each other and the smex is so hot between them. It is funny to see how whipped Darien is already with Alex. I don't know if a mother has to be female as long as the mother is carrying the baby and playing the maternal role. It will be interesting to see Percy and his son pregnant at the same time.

Interesting they manage to escape.

Oh no! I am so sorry for poor Yuki. I can't believe Darek would treat that beautiful boy like that. Why must life be so hard for Yuki and his parents? In contrast Alex and Darien are just hilarious. Derek needs to learn a better technique for seducing unwilling virgins.

This is really great

In the next chapter do we find out what the first potion does to him?

Interesting, The dragons like to kwon why the are serching for. But the have an unique and sexy way to do it.

Alex and Darien seem to ge getting along very well. Yuki is a bit more of a challenge but he has a more serious mission. It is so sad to know that he spent his entire life without his parents. That lady Athena is something else. She keeps so many secrets. I can't wait to read more.

I love the new story. It is quite funny especially when Derek shows his arousal to Yuki. I had to laugh when I saw that line. Derek and Yuki are very hot and so are Darien and Alex. I can see Percy having a heart attack if he knew what the boys were up to. I think your writing makes your stories special and gives them their own unique flavor. So keep up the good writing. I look forward to reading more.