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omg i love Yuki XD i went and read this and me being a baka did not put 2 as in this is the second book XD i'm going to go read that now XD ty so vm for your grate stories

what can i say... hm... well i loved it for one, but there were so many spelling and gramer errors that i almost didnt make it through it... i am glad i finished it though~ everyone is really cute, and i love how you portray their chaaracters~ if u want, i could beta (edit) this fic for u so that there arent as many errors. i would still say have someone else read it as well, cuz the more peope look at it, the more mistakes they pick up. well, anyway, my email is dgraymansorrowinvoked@gmail.com if u wanna reply. but even still, i really do love this, and i plan on reading the next one either later today or sometime soon^.^ have a good day~

Happy ending! Leave it to the evil King Derek to father twins! I am happy to see Kei and Sakura living happily and having another baby too. I am sad that the story is over but I am glad that all these characters will finally be able to be at peace.I really like your writing style and your sense of humor. I also like how these unforgivable bad guys finally change because of love. Derek is the best.

The Naga king is quite evil. As evil as Derek used to be. Maybe he should think twice about pissing Kell off especially if he wants really Kell to have his baby. Murdering pregnant Yuki is probably not good for family relations. I am eager to find out the details behind the problems Derek had with Kay and Phillip in the past which caused Derek to give up his heart. I hope Derek can get Yuki to forgive him - again LOL.

Great update! I never thought I would hear Derek say "I love you" i am eager to hear the story behind Derek and Kay and Percy's father. I hope Kell and the Naga King will hit it off too. I hope Derek and Yuki can be together with the rest of the family.

I hope you enjoyed your trip. Thank you for the wonderful stories. I read all. :)

I hope that i didn't insult you with my review about the mommy thing. I received an email saying that I almost do not deserve to live. Don't going to reply and name this person, but I want to make sure that you didn't take this the wrong way, i just wanted to make a point, nothing more. I read your last three chapter and you use daddy, i found this more realist and...i don't know why but adorable loll! Maybe i'm a little crazy!

Derek seems to improve his personality. Good boy! I don't what to punish him each chapter now nah!

Anything new until Monday? A little getaway with the husband for the 3day week-end?! Pass a good week-end, have fun!
Gwen

Sweet chapter. I am glad that Yuki forgave Derek even though he did not deserve it really. Then Derek keeps him hidden away for one month. LOL. It is a great story. I hope Yuki really will be able to help Derek find his heart. I hope Darien will be able to forgive Derek.

Wow! Two very exciting chapters. Derek is such a dumbass. He really deserves to have his royal dick cut off. I don't know how he is going to make Yuki forgive him. The reunion with Percy and Alex was hilarious. I am eager to see what happens next between Yuki and the heartless King Derek.

Derek and Yuki are so sexy together. I bet Derek did not expect to get Yuki pregnant. It is hilarious to see how Alex and Darien are getting on. I think Alex is turning into the Master and Darien into the pet. Lady Athena has some complicated plan. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.