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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah :) I feel like this story is going to be very interesting. Creative storyline and great characters so far. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading what comes next. Thanks for writing!
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I love it. The first chapter was definitely an eye opener I’ll tell you that! I beg of you to please continue. I might die from withdrawals.
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh this story is funny so far! keep it up ;P
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like it's going to be quite the entertaining piece of work! I can't wait to read more of it!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start and a nice title :)
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cyrus is such a cool name.
Whoa, that arch thing sounds pretty cool. I really wasn't expecting anything like that!
That poor embarrassed kid, though. Aww.
I look forward to more.=D
Whoa, that arch thing sounds pretty cool. I really wasn't expecting anything like that!
That poor embarrassed kid, though. Aww.
I look forward to more.=D
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I've just read the first two chapters, and I must say, it sounds really interesting! I was quite disappointed to be at an end so fast, your style is very pleasant to read. I was hooked immediatly. And the two protagonists seem to be promising too, especially Cy. He is cute with all his silent grumpy rambling... like a cranky, but cute kitten^^. Their relationship is certainly going to be an entertaining one, especially if Revelin is as mischievous as he appears on first sight. I look forward to your next update!
btw, I'm sorry if my writing sounds srange, english is my... er, third language.
Until next time!
I've just read the first two chapters, and I must say, it sounds really interesting! I was quite disappointed to be at an end so fast, your style is very pleasant to read. I was hooked immediatly. And the two protagonists seem to be promising too, especially Cy. He is cute with all his silent grumpy rambling... like a cranky, but cute kitten^^. Their relationship is certainly going to be an entertaining one, especially if Revelin is as mischievous as he appears on first sight. I look forward to your next update!
btw, I'm sorry if my writing sounds srange, english is my... er, third language.
Until next time!
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Short but good. I can't wait to see what happens. So keep up the good work.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this sounds loke it's going to be aood story. i will definitely keep checking in.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ITS GOOD PLEASE CONTINUE AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK