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for He's a Bastard

by MichiTheThird

person Fruit
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok so that was amusing... i agree with you i like Cy's voice better actually but still i found Revelin's voice really amusing and fun, so i think you should have him around sometimes.
person Reader1962
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whichever is good! I like the fact this chapter was up preety quick after the last one !
person Fruit
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really really good and your style of writing is great. I remember reading this a year or so ago and its so good that i remembered it as soon as i saw the update. Are you not going to use Revelin's pov at all? i would be interested in knowing what he's thinking. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another chapter !
person karen
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I almost didnt read it when i saw it was 4 chapters since 2009. I did though and enjoyed them, but am irritated at the thought it could be a year before there is another chapter. rrrggggg
person RJaneyP
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cool, funky, humorus start can't wait to read more, afterall bastard can be so very entertaining! G
person m_kren2
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow grate grate grate please more
person Aleks
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that Revelin twisted you around his finger - your own character :)

Nice change of viewpoint!
person Maru
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok ok so i heard from Michi that your story was good so i decided to check it out and well
it's NOT good...nope
IT'S FUCKING AMAZING!!! i really am in love with this story so far
i mean it, you've got me hooked
person Follow_Vergil
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dandelion, Darenvy and Sonnet... The names gave me a vision of a sugarcoated fairytale kingdomm^^ and Duncanc was just plain cute... weird and in definite need of a therapist, but cute.
But Cy is absolutely my favorite, permanent scowl and all. And he STILL reminds me of a cranky kitten.
Again, it was a lot of fun to read this chapter, and I'm looking forward to learn more about Revelin! (and with every available man, does it mean he also got frisky with the prince?)

Till the next chapter!