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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how you add humor to the story and i love that you update every week :) Thank you again
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Cyrus' past is so sad... And Revilin is a bigger pervert than I first thought! Such an exciting ending! I wonder why this dimension doesn't like Revelin?
Looking forward to more!
Looking forward to more!
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March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chap! Loved the kiss (been hanging out for that ;) ) Wonder why Cyrus is surpressing his Vim/ locking it inside him?...Some past incident...?
Looking forward to more (I always am!!!)
Cheers.
Looking forward to more (I always am!!!)
Cheers.
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Challenge accepted!
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHH!!! They kissed!!! you did a great job. Please update soon and maybe ummm write the chapter a little longer? :) sorry if i come across as demanding its just such a great read! Thanks for the update!
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, funny and light hearted just what I needed tonight. Looking forward to more.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
XD Okay,okay I don't even know where to start. I can't even pick what my favorite part was but I think the line where Cyrus goes "I want to get something straight with you. Don't Touch me.Ever." was it. I'm still giggle snorting over that. xDDD And the butt-barrier. I think I'm just a little bit in love with them both already. I can picture Reveline molesting Cyrus and it's making me laugh some more. And the Jealousy is so cute! Silly Hummingbird can't have him. Did you ever draw pictures of them? If you did I'd love to see them!
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I wonder if Sonnet's messanger will make an appearance in the future (just to complicate things further!). I love that R E does charity work!
Thanks for the update! Keep up the great work!
Thanks for the update! Keep up the great work!
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The chapter form Revelin's view was actually really insightful, as I felt I never really knew what he was thinking. However, I find Cy a really amusing narrator (maybe ‘cause it’s what I’m used to…)
So happy for another chapter!
Many thanks for your time and talent!
So happy for another chapter!
Many thanks for your time and talent!