rate_review Reviews

I wonder who that dude was....

Wow.. He had some crappy sexy birthday! This story is so tight!

Dude... I just had an orgasm by reading chapter nine...

Man... I wish I was good looking like Alain. AWESOME STORY BY THE WAY!
The car roaring part was funny! and I love how Alain is so damn attractive
enough to make his brothers all fall for him.

I seriously love how Alain is being erotic right now.

I can't remember who, but someone in the originals section recommended this story in a chapter of theirs, and I am totally loving it!!! And this morning, I woke up with a craving for incest (even re-read one of my fave incest-ish oneshots) and TADA, I come across your wonderful fic! I'm only about 10 chapters into it, and I freaking love it al so so much! I adore Alian, and his brothers are all so interesting! So is all of their relationships, history and current interaction with each other. I think Ven and Alian are sexy, and I think Corbryn is either really jealous, or just has a stick up his ass about something. And I kind of like how Condor is back on the scene. He hasn't done anything bad yet, and he didn't really do anything to begin with, his brothers just turned on him. I feel a bit bad for Alian, with all those guys falling for him. I have a gay male friend, and he had that happen to him a lot; it's definitely not cool sometimes. Losing your friends because they feel that way about you, and you don't about them. It's a bit sad, and in the case with Nate; insanely annoying! Ugh, take no for an anwser already! But I think it's cute how he gets all flustered about guys always checking him out and fighting over him. I'm so so loving this and am probably going to tear through the rest of it tonight or tomorrow morning!

Whoever it was that said you forgot chapter 16 in a review on the story in the slash section; they're right. I checked it out. So! I am switching to reading the story in the other section, so I don't miss anything, but I shall continue to review this one, since it doesn't have enough reviews! Ohmygosh, Cobryn has a twisted sense of pleasure. I feel kind of bad for Nate. Aha! So it was Nate who gave Alain the drugs! And con was right thinking that it came from Cobryn's supply, even though he wasn't the one who did it. Hehe, I love it when Alain is teasing Cobryn in the kitchen; wicked! fnwlebwljkebfjef droooooooooooool. Alain and Cobryn sex; so hot and amazingly delicious. Though I was kind of hoping that Ven would be his actual first. Wait, idk about that. Ven and Alain sex was hot too! And now Ven is being all me-me, and wants to make Alain move in with him, which is unfair and pushy. But oh! Now they are going back and forth over him! Eek, I can't decide who I like more, but I do adore Alain and this is all funny and hot. Yay a attempted compramise! This is all so fucking good!

hey, i've read this story already in threesome, and i love it. i'm currently waiting for the 25th chap of the sequel
but when i was looking at ur author page i noticed that the chapter counts were different between the carnalli complex in threesome and the one in slash- male/male
it seems that you forgot to post chapter 16 in the slash one.
just letting you know
anyway love ur this story!! and the sequel!!!
can't wait to read the rest of it.
-Kyle

I loved your story, it was really well writted with plenty of smut. The ending was not what I expected but I liked what you did. Keep up the good work!
CJ

I just finished the entire story and I thought it was very well written. I love all the brothers. Alain is so sweet and innocent and he does know how to please all his brothers! They are all very good at sharing. LOL. I am eager to see what happens with Con and Cobryn. I am glad that he caught up with Quentin at the end. I am off to read the sequel. Consider posting the story in the Original slash/male/male section too as it might attract more readers.