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for The Carnalli Complex (completed)

by Passhenette1

person venos
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i realy like it. i want read about Q more.. i like him(l wish he was a few jentel)
person kissedbymidnight
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the best stories I have read in a while:) It was really well written and the guys actually acted like guys, which is rare to find. Even Alain wasn't a pushover, though he had a softer side than the others. Anyway, I really like all the brothers and their interactions with one another and while this story is under erotica it had enough story to keep me interested. I'm really glad that I found it and got to read it. Great job on it!
person Mint
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the other reviewers who say you should post this elsewhere. It would benefit you to post this in the section called Original - Misc - Slash - Male/Male. LOL I only suggest b/c I feel it can get mo reviews which this deserves.
person Mintgirl
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write a third installment!
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've loved this entire story, but this chapter made me really uncomfortable. How is what Con and Cobryn did to Alain any different than what Quentin did? Alain was very vocally telling them no, that he didn't want to do that and that it hurt, and Con forced him to anyway. Which is still rape, even if they love each other. Not sexy at all.
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like that last chapter at all, which is disappointing since I completely loved the rest of the story. I know there's a sequel, but if Alain is going to keep seeking out Quentin, who needs to die very painfully, I don't think I'll be able to read it. I just couldn't understand Alain's mindset. Quentin brutally raped him and wasn't really his brother anymore, so why does he still care? Especially when he has three brothers who actually love him and would do anything for him.

If nothing else, this got a passionate reaction out of me :)
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just read the whole thing. Was. So. Amazing. -passes out- You don't even know! That was one of the hottest things I've read, ever. I'm read a little bit of incest before, but this was a completely different level. You're such a good writer <3 The descriptions and POV and relationships and sexy scenes and aaaah! -squeals~!- Loved it. I read the Christmas party before I read this one and was intrigued. ^^ So glad my curiosity got the better of me!! I'll read more later, I think I saw you had a few more! Loved it!! -BiaBS <3 <3 <3
person GellyBelly
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26 was... wow.... dude...
person GellyBelly
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This has got to be one of the most greatest incest story that
doesn't involve the TK twins.. The way you wrote this story is soooo
AWESOME! Its not corny like other erotic stories I love it! I hope
you write a sequel... I hope there is a sequel dude.
person GellyBelly
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two was sexy dude.