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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad your back in the originals section!!!
(Cause your writing style is one of thee most original in here!!!)
Now I can find you much easier!!! Is there a pregnancy in the near future
'cause I'd love to see Jay even more demanding than he already is!!!!
Thanks!
R
(Cause your writing style is one of thee most original in here!!!)
Now I can find you much easier!!! Is there a pregnancy in the near future
'cause I'd love to see Jay even more demanding than he already is!!!!
Thanks!
R
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
B!
Super glad you posted that you're writing a sequel!!!
I'd never have found it over here in paranormal otherwise!!
(Unless I checked really, really hard I guess!!!!)
Love your writing style!! It's just effervescent!!!
Love your spaced out JAY!! He's so real!!!!
Thanks!
R
Super glad you posted that you're writing a sequel!!!
I'd never have found it over here in paranormal otherwise!!
(Unless I checked really, really hard I guess!!!!)
Love your writing style!! It's just effervescent!!!
Love your spaced out JAY!! He's so real!!!!
Thanks!
R
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Jay Jay needs to fess up at least to his sister. He is just digging himself into a hole. A hilarious hole since his sister has probably already guessed who Sven is. It will be fun to watch jay dig himself a little deeper.
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm very curious to know why exactly Seth doesn't trust Bailey, and who he was arguing over the phone with, and also what ever happened to Greggykins. Hm, apparently I'm curious about a lot of things... haha. And poor Seth, I mean Sven, having to hide who he is when all he wanted to do was stay home with his mate.
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its been soooo long since I have review :S SORRY!!!! >_< I just finished my final exams, so I'm free!!! YAY~! XD But....Until August that is.... :(
Well, the fic its going really great so far. I really like it. :D I liked the end on chapter 6: ''I gave him my biggest smile, and told him “Nope.” What’d you expect?'' XD That was so cool!! Awesome! XD
Well, can't wait for the next one. :3
Well, the fic its going really great so far. I really like it. :D I liked the end on chapter 6: ''I gave him my biggest smile, and told him “Nope.” What’d you expect?'' XD That was so cool!! Awesome! XD
Well, can't wait for the next one. :3
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Jay's thought processes are so screwy it's fun just to try and make sense of them all! Good chapter, I can't wait to find out what really is the thing going on with Bailey - though I think I might already know....Thanks for sharing your work!
-Lina
-Lina
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL Blue is as crazy as Jay is, just wonderful siblings I must say! I can't wait for more, and where is Seth?
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where is Seth? What's up with that? Don't tell me he is shy now. Chapter 4 and 5 were great. Jay is such a horndog! LOL . I cant wait to see Seth get interrogated by Jay's family.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh jeez... sorry, guess I just trailed off there, huh? What I meant to say was that they continue a while after the end of the first story. Like some people do the so many months/years farther along in the story, skipping the whole time in between. Sorry about my ADD inhibiting my ability to make a legible review.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Jay. he is so funny.