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by jenner84

person Mimiko
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely story began. I love your wolfes ^^
person Avernion
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh a continuation. Ha ha, those stupid adolescents. Laugh.
There is only one thing that confuses me. I thought Lucky didn't have a tail. When did he get one?
Anyway, love your wolf-stuff. I'm looking forward to some more :3
person Jenner
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, guys! I'm glad you like the new installment. Also check out the re-structuring/rewriting I did for Rift! It was getting pretty much insanely long, so I revisited some of the scenes, lost a few characters, and changed the structure. Now each chapter = one season. Chapter one starts in the Spring of Year 1; Chapter 2 is the Summer, etc.

Itchan: You got to be a reviewing all-star because (I think) you reviewed at least three times. Thx!

Avernion: Lucky doesn't naturally have a tail in his human form, but he "pretends" to have one because Sodre used to tease him about it, and it makes him look less conspicuous when they are out in public. So Lucky keeps it extended most of the time when he's running around. It works like this: Lucky wasn't born with a tail, which made them think he was human and wouldn't have a tail, right? But he's the Synthesis! So, as it turns out, when he turns wolfe, he does have one (It's one of the ways he differs from normal wolfes, who have a tail all the time). So since Lucky has such smooth control over his body and change, he can just choose not to transition his tail away. I hope that all made sense!
person Jetfire
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay another story from you, and I hope in the direction of Rind cause that was good and not all mean and angsty, not fond of angsty stories me. Ok well can't wait to see whata happens. Huggins
person Passing Reader
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I passed by this story three times before I realized it was written by you and was a sequil lol.
I'm moving soon so I may not be able to read or review, thus me making good use of this now, Thank you for posting!
I do have a tiny request though, I was wondering if you would give some character discription on these two color wise, I know Lucky is dark haired/furred from the previouse story, but I have no clue as to Sodre (I hope I spelled his name right). It dosen't have to be in the story, just a side note would do. I'm sorry to be a bother, It just takes me till mid story to get a proper picter of these guys otherwise ^^'
Thank you so much, here's waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
person DJfrdrck
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its good I hope we get to see all the others from the first story. And these two are the sons of Gustin his mate, and the layer and his right?
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good can't wait for more!!
person Itchan
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O I wasn't expecting a sequel, and not so fast! :D I really liked the first chapter. Lucky and Sodre are a nice pair. I really enjoyed reading it, and can't wait to read the next one. :)

I was wondering (I know this doesn't go here but I wanted to know. Sorry!), on Rind's last chapter, why was I on the ''Reviewing All-Stars''? O.o I mean, I don't really mind XD But I didn't review a lot :( It really surprised me to see that O.O But anyway, Thanks for that :3 It made me happy. ^____^

Well, thank you soooooooooo much for a new story. Until next time then. :)
person tf
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Love the next generation idea... RooRoo and Lucky are so cute but still hope we get to see their parents too... I almost missed this but your name caught my attention thank goodness ^_^ and I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the next chapter ;)