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for Ribbon.

by jenner84

person Wayward Traveller
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was very excited to see an update. Good chapter, interesting to see it was not anyone I had expected to be the kidnappers. Keep it up!
person Ribbon fan
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo happy to see an update! I love your stories. I hope Lucky and Sodre are able to escape soon. They're so adorable.
person crazykitty
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! new chapter. I´m so happy :)
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I can't believe I missed so many chs. The sand scare me for sure and I really wonder how Gustin and Kellan will react when they find out what happened especially after Kellan's jab at Gustin's claim of human intuition. I think they are going to sell them as slaves to someone.
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I love your stories and think the world you have created is fascinating. I like the wolfes and have enjoyed the glimpses of what humanity has become but would love to know more about the Louts, Chamos, Psyres, and now the Sand. I'm not quite sure what I think about the Layers. They seem to be lesser versions of the wolfes. Ill have to reread Rind but is the offspring of Layer/Wolfe always a Layer?

I'm glad to see the twist you threw into Ribbon. Lucky is the prophecied wolfe but it would have been disappointing if he just ended up being an Alpha for a Layer. It seems established that the wolfe is always the alpha but with Lucky also part human, does that also mean that he can bear young? If that's the case, if he runs across a more dominant male would he submit and willingly become a submissive? Since you introduced the Sand, I'm trying to figure out what they would want with a human male (Lucky) and a Layer... are they to be sold off either as breeding stock or for research you eluded to in A/N of Rise?? Your stories fire my imagination and I end up dissecting different aspects of what you've written.
person tf
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Talk about good timing... I was just thinking about this fic the other day... glad the boys are ok now but I'd love to see their parents start the rescue plan; thanks for the update!
person tf
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just checking in and realized I'd missed this update; hope they're both ok; look forward to more!
person mimiko
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My breath hitched at the end of chapter 5. I'm dying to know what's happening with Sodre and Lucky. Love your story.
person Avernion
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! Puppynapping!
person Itchan
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!!!!! I just love this fic!!! >_< Sorry I didn't review chapter 4 :( I'm gonna do it now! :D

Chapter 4 was REALLY good XD I really liked it. But....what I didn't understand is why was Sodre speaking messed up? O_o It was cute, but I don't know why he was speaking like that all of the sudden...

Well, chapter 5....AWESOME...At the end, just like chapter 3, I was like Oh...sh*t! O_O!! I couldn't believe it!! I REALLY want to see what will happen to them. >_<