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for Please Take Me. . .Out Tonight

by MiriuOniaya

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy, thank God Niah and Gage were there to rescue poor Julian. Also, thank God Julian didn't kiss Austin back! That would not have gone over well! Niah's cute, being so protective of Julian. Well, at least now they get to spend more time together!
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! That mean neighbor, Austin, cornering Julian like that! Bad pretty boy! Bad! I wish Gage had punched him twice! OH! And Julian's going home with Niah! Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Naughty boys! I bet I know what you'll be doing soon! lol Nice update BTW! Can't forget the kitty cat! Ohhh! So cutey cute! I just loves me a kitten especially when they're so little and adorable and bump into the window with their little noses and... Sorry! Cat lover here! Niah needs to move Julian into his apartment and get him that cute little grey kitty cat and they can all live happily ever after (as long as they don't run out of Meow Mix!) Can't wait for more!!!
person vicxn
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, i really like this fic, they are just soooo cute together. Cant wait for the next chapter, update soon xxx
person Jetfire
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEL!* Run and hug you. They really are gooey like the inside of a warm chocolate brownie (you made me want one now too). I think I may actually be managing a new story (how often have i said that now). I loove them, I wish i could have a date like that! YOu know the Bonnie Tyler song....I need a hero? its sooo fitting. Anyway mega huggins back becasue tehy're soooo adorable.

Aduial
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read all your stories, but I think I only reviewed the Angel story. I love the sweetness of Julian and Niah, much like Ash and Finn; they are just all so sweet and fluffy together! I really enjoy reading your stories, they are very entertaining.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Just saw the new chapter and it was great. It just seemed so warm and comfortable between the two of them. No angsty, heavy junk just two people who care about each other and are ready to move on to something more. The kiss scene was just beautiful really and Niah was so sweet and patient with Julian. I can just see these two living happily ever after in lovey-dovey bliss in some cute little apartment with a flower box on the window! I hate to hear you've been so busy! Being overworked is never fun! Hopefully that'll settle down soon and I look forward to the next update!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just felt the need to point something out to you. In the second chapter you say that Fallon is Julian's cousin but in the third you say that she is his sister. Quote from chapter 2: Julian shared a place with his older cousin, Fallon. Quote from chapter 3: his sister Fallon. That's mostly the reason for this review but I do love your stories about all of the severs and bartenders as well. You just might want to clarify on that.
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Homygod! I knew I was bound to do something stupid like that eventually xD Thanks so much for letting me know, Allison! (^w^)
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeee! I was soooo happy to find this! I was kinda hoping to see something that focused on Niah and Julian since they are just the most adorable things! More! More! Thanx though and I'll be waiting anxiously for the fic on Maxx as well. Yummy.
person Jetfire
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More Niah and Julian, that's so coool. And just so adorable, I love your stories I really do, make me go all gooey inside. Anways glad to have this to read after hard day of work. Huggins to you!

Brilliant work!
HUGSSSSSSS Aduial