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chap 1 PTMOT

whoa! julian! shock shock! the little shy one is actually bold!!!
waaah!!!!

chap 2 ptmot

whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay~
slow and steady wins the race... but....
could they have at least kissed! on the cheek? aawww man, julian's really to shy.
makes me think who's gonna make the first move. *wriggles eyebrows*

CHAP 3 PTMOT
hur hur hur~~~

hur hur hur hur hur~~~~ =D

chap 4 ptmot
hur hur hur! I knew it Niah had to initiate! XD
kiss! XD

chap 5 ptmot
aaaaaaaaaaaawwww miriu... I know you said in the 1st chapter that you don't want to continue this anymore. but... BUT!!!!
they haven't even, ahem, completed their relationship~~~
just one more chapter, with that... and then it can end?
pleaaaase~~~~~ *puppy eyes*

and because i really really hope you would at least put up one more chapter, to wrap up this story... I will give you.... EXTRA REVIEW HITS!!!!

hup! *whacks with baseball bat* HIT ONE!!!

another one~~~~~

hup! *whacks with baseball bat* HIT TWO!!!

aaaaaaaaaannndddd.~~~~


hup! *whacks with baseball bat* HIT THREE!!!

ok enough?

now... pleeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~ *puppy-eyes version 2010 platinum!*

I would like to point out that I made a chocolate cake after you mentioned the brownies....with LOADS of calories. So yeah don't mention them again. Niah and Julian are so adorable. I'm writting the story at the mo, but I want to get it finished before I start posting otherwise I'll be awful with updating. Anyway if you want I'll let you know when i start posting it.

Its such an awesome story, they'Re sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo lovely. I want a Niah....why are gay couples always happy? Oh and a big slap for austin for being recalcitrant bastard.

Loads of HUGGINS
Aduial

Oooh naughty Austin, yay for Niah and Gage (Gage sounds hot!)
Great chapter, update soon xx