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by MiriuOniaya

schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finn dressed in Ash’s black button up shirt was cute but the black panties would have been a nice shock to the system for Ash ^_^

Sad to see it finish but look forward to reading *hopefully* about Maxx soon. Match himm *please* with someone who'll make him work for it.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*flushed* loved the update. Finn is gorgeous and I'm looking forward to reading more about the pushy bottom.
person Jetfire
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *does little dance* personally I think Maxx needs someone you wouldn't expect cause he's always teasing people and pretty much the guy who's in charge...so maybe someone who'll play hard to get...obviously would be longer then 3 chapters but hey, its awesome. Perhaps...might do a sketch when I have time, I'm not that amazing mind but if you'd like. But first need to get scanner connected to new computer. Anyway awesome lemon....good old sex! Wohooo.

Huggins Aduial
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Got to love an aggressive uke!
person Jetfire
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice....so if Ash has someone, and Niah has someone, and Keto has someone what about Maxx????!!! He needs someone too....*puppy eyes*. You should get someone to draw them for you or something, it would be really awesome (hi hi hi I really like that word) Anyway, its coool I def like all of them though Keto is my faveourite. But I just adore your writing style, good spelling, good grammar and general quality. Its rare at the moment.

HUGGINS Aduial