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for Domination

by rosy4president

person szaugg
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, I always love a good werewolf tale. Alpha males are fun, fun fun! :-)
person J42
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start! Definitely curious to see where you take this werewolf story. ;-) Thanks for sharing it.

"following you scent"
person miles
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope for the next chapter soon...
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please please please update soon. I was really enjoying it and then it went and ended like that. *pouts* As soon as you can please update cause I wanna know whats going to happen next. Ja Mata Misawo
person Avernion
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Love it ^-^
person Everdean
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far, cant wait for the next update!!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its the first chapter and I'm already hooked. I love anything pertaining to werewolfs, mpreg, slave. I'm such a perv.

The young man was right to listen to his inner voice. And it said "RUUUUUUUN!" Unfortuntely one can't outrun a supernatural creature like a werewolf. Too bad the kid had to run into oncoming traffic to try and elude his pursuer. Fear and desperation makes one take unneccessary risks.

You have whetted my appetite for the next chapter. Update ASAP!
person Itchan
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. You got me interested in it, and I would really like to see more. I really want to see what happens next! :O

I will be waiting for the next one then :)
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is so interesting! I was hoping there would be more than one chappie posted! How kewl. Vamp fics are okay, but overdone; I really like the fact that you're using lycan instead. I love the main charrie's wtf-u-want kick-ass attitude, I love how you described his fear and running, the cars, his fear... The ending was awesome too. Anyway, just wanted to let you know this was super-interesting! :P I'll give you a cookie if you post the next chappie soon?

Kanpai! -TNR
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, that was an interesting first chapter. Very good. I hope to read more soon. ^_^