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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
por favor actualizar, ana maria
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey this is really good hope you continue, the plot so far is really good!!
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The idea of the story was great. Two problems grammar and editing. You need to move chapter 3 to a new section of its own and make it longer besides her going home for a nap and just re writing the story. Overall great story just needs editing really bad.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This IS AWESOME!!!!
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential... but the format and grammar mistakes are so abundant that it really draws away from the story itself. I think with a fair bit of editing and tweaking you could have something really good here! I love the premise, you just need to look over your work or get a beta to help :)
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!! Update soon!!
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems like it will be a hot story, update soon!
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much! It reminds me of another story posted on this site called "Lecture Notes" which I absolutely adored! Keep going and update soon!
Linda
Linda