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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapter two. This story is very amusing. It caught my attention because of the beautiful title. I am guessing that the building must be magic to have 232 floors in all. I am guessing Dante has some supernatural power too. Levi is very cute. He is a lot of bark and very little bite and he knows it. I can't wait to see if he and Lucien get a little closer. Lucien sounds very sexy.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Confusing and scattered; try getting a beta.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice funny beginning. Levi sounds as if he is up for a challenge. A cute little spitfire psycho killer vampire. Looking forward to reading more.