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hehe, this was a cute story!

Omg. Loved it. Really cute and sweet, but sexy and hot. Best of both sides of a relationship. You're writing style is amazing. Seriously. I can't wait to see more of these two dynamic characters.

I just loved this the guys were wonderful and the writing was really well done, plus it helps that the smut was rather yummy ;) Wonderful oneshot I can't wait to read more of your stuff ^_^

You have talent and I personally thought that this was a nice and well rounded one shot. You left no loose ends and there aren't any grammar mistakes that I can complain about so I'm happy xD You also have a very nice and neat writing format which accentuates your characters personalities. I hope you post again soon : p

I loved it and I loved the fact that the young one happened to be "on top", it was just so refreshing. Cool, pretty, sweet story!

I hope you'll continue to write here.

Cheers

Why do the Asians never get to top? I was looking forward to a change for once and then you swapped it at the last minute.

Just absolutely adorable story...loved it completely

Great work!!!

This is the first story of yours that I've read but I apprecciated it. More than anything, though, I apprecciated the style, writing flow, and word useage. You can expect me to be reading and reviewing everything else you have posted here. I usually don't go for stories as sweet as this, but the characters were very easy to relate to so I really just couldn't help but fall for both of them, and for Luscia for that matter. I was really surprised and pleased that you gave her backstory. I was very happy when she was introduced. Also, I've already said, in so many words, said that you don't need to worry about your talent but I'd also like to add a congratulations on your committed relationship. It always takes time out of what a person's doing. It's hard to get back into the swing of what you're used to doing once you have one and I applaude you for able to get back into writing despite it. You'll probably find another review on one of your other stories from me today. Thanks again.
-Renny.