rate_review Reviews

I believe I have read Honey Drops but no longer have the link to it and I can't find it. Has it been removed?

That was wonderfully erotic. However, and I'm unaware as to whether any previous reviewers pointed this out, you kept jumping from one tense to another. Past, present, past, present, and back again. Also, when describing a person's possession, you use an apostrophe, and then an s. Instead of "Camlos body," you would write "Camlo's body". That aside, I must admit to getting shivers whilst reading. You have some talent, probably more than I do; you just have to nurture that talent.

Wow that was bloody awesome!!! Loved this. So sexy and hott, so delicious. *licks lips* More? ; )

I absolutely loved this.

Oh also, I would love to beta for you if you still needed one.
And you said this was a side story to something?