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for Light It Up

by JetLevy

person smint45
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so awsome!!! I totaly didn't get the update of the last two chappies!!!!! So Eric is jelous and wants to seperate them for that reason!!! ANd then he takes a shipload of drugs and is rescued by Sylis!!!! And now he is in a mental ward and thinks he is crazy!!!! Interesting developments!!! I really hope that Sylis and Lauren will rescue him form the mental ward!!!!! And explain him again he is not crazy!!!! I really hope he isn't crazy or is he??? Well can't wait for more!!!!!! See you next chappie!!!!! (considering that I hopefully see the update!!!!)
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused w/this last chapter: has Eric been in a mental hosptial for awhile? Is Sylis (did I spell that right?) just in his delusional imagination? And if not, was Eric jealous that time Sylis went out? Is that why he wants out of the apartment?
person kylee123
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Pretty soon Eric will think Sylis was just a hallucination. I hope Sylis will be able to locate Eric before the mental hospital does anything horrible to him. Thanks for the update. You have outdone yourself.
person vicxn
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im reading all of yours stories on AFF and i think your a really talented writer. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon xx
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good work. I´m very curious on Eric´s others bondmates. silys is interesting "kitty" :)
person kylee123
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Of course I am mad at Sylis. I dont understand why he would leave his bond mate at home to go get action from someone else. They are already so close in every other way. Of course Eric will have think about and deal with that situation. LOL It is fun to watch the growing tension between the two.
person POHness1
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im liking this story.

plz continue. ^_^
person smint45
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!!!!So nice with eric so sceptical and Sylis so protectiv over him!!!! I really love them both!!!! I can't wait to see how their relationship will develop and I can't wait to get to meet the other guardians!!!! eally liked how eric was in pain and is comforted by his mate!!!! It's a bit unusual that htier is more than one mate but I think even after meeting the others Sylis will still be special to eric because of the stromg bond between them°!!! For what reason do they all have to meet??? Do they have to rescue the world or something???? Well I hope you will explain a little more in the next chappie!!!! I really hope you will update soon!!!! See you next chappie!!!!!!!
person kylee123
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last chapter. It was so sweet with Sylis being so tender and protective of Eric. They are very cute together. They really have become super bonded. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Vex
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Wow, this is very original to me. Keep up the good work. =]