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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really refreshing to read and i cnt wait for another update. keep up the good work
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, like it! There's a beautiful chemistry between Ero and Lan, can't wait to read more. =)
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter two. I think Ero and Lan will enjoy being roomates. In all your stories, I like the fact that the settings are well researched. It is nice to have a change of scene. I am interested to see what Lan will plant in his garden. I am eager to read more.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice, I like Lan's independence! whee! oh and suspense of them kissing but breaking up is beautiful! keep it up ;)
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oho, obviously Ero thinks he's the one who should be protecting Lan. :B Hehe. I really liked this chapter a lot, keep em coming!!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this looks really good.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start to your story. i like the forest setting. I love the fact that Ero and Lan will be sharing a hut. Lots of temptation there. Looking forward to the next update.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where it goes :)
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty cool concept so far, and it's really well written too! I'm curious about all the trouble these two will get in. ;) Lan sounds like he could draw a lot of it. :D By the way, I don't know if you did it on purpose, but your story is marked so that only logged in people can review. You might want to change that because it discourages people to review, because either they're too lazy to sign in or they don't have an account. XD